https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k What has the individual done well? What does the individual need to work on in the future? en-us 2020-05-10 16:10:41 UTC 2020-05-11 01:14:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4a1.png joshtosoni513 https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562954860 Glow: I really enjoyed the flow of our visual presentation and the visual pictures you included to emphasize your key arguments. For example your numbering of key points helps navigate your presentation very well.
Grow: The Screencast-o-  matic layout could have been better positioned so that the side bar was not included in the video presentation.]]> 2020-05-10 16:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562954860 joshtosoni513 https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562956336 Glow: Your presentation was very well organized. Your voice was very clear throughout the entire presentation with almost no mistakes. 
Grow: Using graphs to show your survey results can help the reader better understand what your data looked like.  I believe some of your slides had too many pictures. Choosing the best pictures would have been more appealing.]]> 2020-05-10 16:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562956336 joshtosoni513 https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562956429 Glow: I like how you used the graphs from Microsoft Forms to show explain the results you saw from your questions. The questions helped navigate the ideas of your presentation.
Grow: Your presentation was fairly short. Explaining your ideas more and talking more about personal examples would help solidify your argument and help the viewer learn more about the topics discussed.]]> 2020-05-10 16:13:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562956429 joshtosoni513 https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957181 Glow: I like how you drew the whole presentation and made your own images to explain your arguments. For example the drawing of the world and the drawing of the digestive system.
Grow: Sometimes the font was small and hard to read. I would recommend trying to focus on the writing so that the viewer can easily read and understand the ideas you are trying to present.]]> 2020-05-10 16:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957181 joshtosoni513 https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957240 Glow: I liked your use of graphics during the presentation. For example, the way that you used the flashcard visual to go through some of your key arguments about innovation.
Grow: More graphs and charts from Microsoft Forms could help the viewers of your presentation better understand the data and how it relates to your arguments throughout your presentation.]]> 2020-05-10 16:14:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957240 joshtosoni513 https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957289 Glow: I like how you described your journey in learning about what a innovator is and how your idea of an innovator changed throughout the class. I also liked your use of life experiences.
Grow: You could have used some more graphs and charts in your presentation of the survey responses to help people visualize the results you received from your survey.]]> 2020-05-10 16:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957289 joshtosoni513 https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957377 Glow: I like how you chose to use pictures of people you found to be key innovators. You also sound very prepared and organized throughout the presentation.
Grow: You could have done more with the text to make it more appealing. For example, the text is fairly small compared to the slide. Changing the font would make the presentation appealing.]]> 2020-05-10 16:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957377 joshtosoni513 https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957401 Glow: I liked how you related your argument to real life examples in your own life. For example, the story about doing math with colored pencils and the story of you being a volleyball player.
Grow: A large portion of the video was about your survey. I think you should have summarized the conclusions of your survey and explained how they related to your main arguments.]]> 2020-05-10 16:14:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/562957401 jessica_schiumo https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/563658903 Glow- You used really good visuals and I like to hear your opinion on the matter as well. 

Grow- maybe just use a little more enhancement in your voice. ]]> 2020-05-11 01:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/joshtosoni513/alu4ct3ltljz5p7k/wish/563658903