For and Against Essay 5A by Alejandra Jeréz

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Everybody need(s) education

Tittle: Will the technology affect the works (jobs) in the future

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Why transportation is important for the humans🚗🚓🚕🛺🚙🚑🚒🚚🚛🚜

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Are Colored Contact Lenses Good?

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my daily life

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Soccer Is Fantastic

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How tecnology help in our daily life

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Is the internet good for us?

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SCREAM:The movie

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Sream is a great movie of horror,I liked becuase is funny and in some ~~parts~~ are scary.

The biggest advantage and my favorite thing of these movies are the killerls, they (their) names are ghostface.Ghostface try to kill Sydney but in Scraem 6 ghostface try to Sam that is the son of the killerl in Scream 1 Billy Lumis.

But Scream have a big problem,all the movies do the same,in all movies ghostface try to kill Sydney and Gale and allways in the end the ghostface say how are them,and them the persons kill ghostface.Why the productors want to do the same in all movies because they want that the movie is like the first movie,and they never do.They allways do a copy of Scream 1, just Scream 6 do well,dont do a copy of Scream.

In conclution( conclusion) I like Scream,but (it has) have many little mistakes that I dont like.I want ~~that~~ Scream 7 (to) be the best movie or a good movie that its the in 20224.

Juan José Rocha Llano

Why are the wild animals in extinction?

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Kids playing

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Why is school important ?

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The world of the sports .

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Fruit is Good for The live

THE TRANSPORTATION IS GOOD OR BAD? (Is the transportation.... ?)

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The fruit is Good (T)he People Like (it), some fruit is very Delicious. The fruit is the a Good Energy for the People (.)

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Education is so important for our future so we can be (become) professional and have a lot of money , (it) is important because education teach(es) us to improve and be better.

Tittle: Hamburger is healthy and delicious

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Title:How the TV affect our daily life?📺 (how does the TV affect our daily life?)

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The wonders of the ocean

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Introduction: The soccer is the (most) famous sport in all the world, there are many leagues of soccer like the Champions League or the Libertadores and more.

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The space tourism is good? (Is the space tourism good?)

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How the technology is important? (How is the technology important?)

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INTRODUCTION

the tecnology

has advanced a lot and little by little it surprises us much more,most of the peoples they know how to use it.

ARGUMENTS

first, you can now (have) a lot of information in internet 
second, the tecnology it can save your life
third, you can have clases (classes) online.

AGAINST ARGUMENTS

the bad think (thing) is that the people can become obsessed with tecnology,more that (than) anything the childres (children), (it) is very sad.

CONLUTION

  (In) in My opinion is very cool the tecnology but
  I won´t ossect myself. (not clear)

Introduction: Some people say that hamburger is healthy and delicious.

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Music for the world

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Introducction ^^

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The internet is mostly to search the questions that we have, but through the years, the internet got many functions.

Introduction :

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We know that the robots and AI are in development to be best and do things that the humans don’t like to do or that are so difficult to do, but in the future (will the robots) ~~the robots will~~ be doing basic things that we do all the days like in this case the jobs? That is the question (.)

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Introduction in the future all the world (will be) by different in education,homes,parks,shops etc.. so we need to answer a question can tecnology change our daily life?

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Introduction:

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TV has revolutionzed (revolutionized) all the globe with all type of entretainment,such as cartoons,novels,notices (news) ,etc... .That may or may not help our health and mind on different aspects.

introductios: (introduction)

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the sports are very important to thebody if you want a good body olso is important to eat healthy and olso helps you to have a good body (.)

For: Yes, its delicius (delicious) with meat, sauce, tomato, lettuce and onion also with other things with bread, and a lot of people like hamburger.

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Introduction

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School is important because you need to have information about what you want to study, and (it) is important to have requirements basics of the school (.)

Introduction:)

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The transportation in the world is very important because we can go to one place to another in short time if the cars, buses and other things doesn´t (don't) exist you will enter teh (too) school late.

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Education is bad because we need to interact more in our daily life and not to be sitting all the day.

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Introduction: All kids must have a great and very happy chilhood, making us a very happy people with hope and faith making a very beautifull part of our lifes even though we need a little bit of limits.

Introduction

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The colored contact lenses are very popular to change the color of our eyes.

Against: Its not healthy the hamburger, a lot of people like the hamburger but it makes a lot of damage in your body because of the things in the hamburger also if you eat a lot of hamburger you can get sick or worse things.

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For:

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I think that TV is good because you can entertain yourself and spend time with family and friends (.) for example (,) watching a movie or a documental (documentary) ,in addition you can look some exercise programs to stay healthy and also you can have a lot of different entretainment to pass (spend) the time.

Introduction:

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The sports are something very important worldwide. They are a significant aspect in human lifes (.) however(,) in some situations they can have positive and negative effects.

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Something beautiful about the ocean is that it has so many species and corals and that is why the ocean has so many colors, that is why we have to take care of the ocean.

For Arguments

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The internet has good functions that help us in many cases, most of them, our homework. We can find many intersting things through the web pages, games or tutorials. When you have a question, the internet (has) have more than 100 answers, options to your question. That (the) functions are so advanced that with only one word you can found many things. That's incredible!

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INTRODUCTION:The transportation is very importat for the human life,because much (most) of the people use mean of transportation to go to work,to study,for they daily life,etc.

Conclusion: I think its very delicious (delicious) the hamburger but we dont need to eat it continuosly because its not healthy and we cant get sick or worse things could happen.

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For arguments

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First, i (I) think that (it) is important to have a good carreer in the live to have a good payment to have a good house a car thinks (things) to eat, and it is more important if you have a family because you have more people to care so you need to have money to have a bed things basic of the live to survive(.)

Introduction: the animal live offers natural services esencials for the human live,because if the animals are not in extinctiont he (the) biodiversity is healthy for the ecosystem.

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For:

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In the future the robots can help us with difficult jobs such as : in the constructions, also can help us in the hospitals, etc…

And the robots will do the jobs more easy (easier) for the humans so i (I) think that the robots will help us a lot and we’ll (live?) in harmony.

Against Arguments

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In the other hand. Some of that wonderfull functions have their problems, (it) has really bad content for kids, teenagers or adults. Some apps are to see (watch) videos, play games...Well, but how I could know if that app has not a virus or bad content?

How could I know if that content is not 18+? The internet's security is not really good at all. The other problem is some functions, you can do everything! A good example is your homework, but what's the problem there? The internet can do all your homework, you are not learning. So what is the purpose of school?

For: First, there is a lot of soccer teams that play very well and you can choose what is your favorite soccer team like Barça or Millonarios and others. When you start a carreer of soccer player you start to being famous and when you start playing well big teams can hire you to be in that team.

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The fruit take care the Bacterium of the live .(the idea is not clear)

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My opinion is that we need education because if we dont study or we dont have education we are not going to have future , its important because we need to be intelligent so if you want to have money in the future you have to have education.

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~~for~~ tecnology (technology) can help us in transportation,houses,contamination etc..in other hand (On the other hand) (it) can help us with entertainment like celphones (cellphones) ,pc,laptop,nintendo,ps5. always can help us in education with professionals teaching the students.

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For: Playing during the childhood increase the creativity on the kids because they create the games, the history (story), they almost can do whatever they want so improve more things like to socializate, to share and many more things.

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Against: It can be sad for kids games like playing alone, only seeing the others playing etc... That can cause young depression.

For

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The colored contact lenses is (are) an adventage because some people wonder : How I would see with other color eyes? (How would I see..)

So when the human create this, this converted (transformed into) a form very easy to change our eyes other adventage is that when the people wear costumes in halloween to look as close to the character as possible.

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Introduction: The space tourism is a type of tourism that was created for (to) help us to understand more about how the universe was created and even how the Earth develop across the years.

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Against arguments

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Some people especialy (specially) kids, they say that school is very bad and they don´t need school for (their) lives and they play in classes and some parents to say that they can teach to their sons.

For:

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Yeah, the transportation is very important for us (.) if you are late for work your chief will fire you of work (,) and if you are late for school you would miss a lot of classes.

My opinion

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In my opinion school is important to have a family in good conditions, and important to have a good work (job) and that the people give you a good payment.

Against: On the other hand, some injure teams pay to the referee to whistle the incorrect things. and are other players that put illegals vaccines to have more resistance than the other players.

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FOR:The transportation (,) specially the buses (,) are very important,also can help the people that dont have car to go to the places that they need.Most of the people use the buses or taxis,because they are more cheap than others.

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I finish :D

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Against:

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Yeah but in some countries like in Colombia the transportation is very bad most of the people is angry (,) and there are many accidents and most of the people die, and in the Transmilenio and in other transports (means of transportation) many people steal things like cellphones, money, etc.

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Against in the ~~bad~~ (other) hand we create a lot of robots they can work or not the problem is that a lot of people (who do) not work because robots and thats a big problem and the parents cant pay the school and the house so a half of the world by poor (.)

Against:

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But in the other side, if the robots take all of the jobs the people that the robots do they job how they can survive without money? (How can they survive..) And if the robots take all of the jobs we don’t have nothing to do and we transform like in WALL·E movie.

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And fruit have (has) a Good impact in (on) the human live (.)

Conclusion: Finally, I think that the soccer is a very cool sport that all people can play and is no bad to have a favorite soccer team like me with my favorite team Millonarios.

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conclusion the future by(will be) so cool but have some problems my opinion is that depends (on) the person works in all that.

Against:

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In the other side we have that a lot of people (that) spend all the day watching trash TV programs that usally affect their dailylife activities and perjudicate their health and maybe this persons stop doing excercise because they are looking those programs.

For: the animals help much to the pollination, but they are part of the process nutricional of other groups in different species. (All) all of that is important for the grow of the ecosystems.

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arguments:

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1. olso helps you to live a little bit
2. help to be more active during the day
3. you can have good skills have resiste

Conclusion

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My opinion is simple, the internet it's really helpfull, but it can do all your responsabilities and not be too much with it. Enjoy the park, be with your friends! The internet can help you cooking or doing a hand craft. The internet is important, but you can live without it.

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Against: so much fruit is bad for the human because (it) is not Good (to) eat old (all) days fruit, the human body neat (nead) odres (other) nutrients for the body (.)

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Not all things in the ocean are good , many species such as hedgehogs, sea wasps, and many more are very dangerous.

For arguments:

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The sports are good because it help to our physical and mental health , also in some sports ge (we) can involves different types of habilities , another advantage is that the sports like soccer , basketball and other sports sometimes inspire the people to start practicing them, so it helps to the society.

Conclusion:

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I think that if the robots (will?) take our jobs that will have a very important impact (,) but I think that if the robots take a good use of the works(jobs) in the factories the word (world) can have less contamination. Thanks :)

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For: The space tourism is very important is(if) we want to start to understand the universe, becouse(because) even in this years we don't understand noting about life, also (it) is important becouse (because) if the Earth definitly (definitely) die we can go to another planet and start a new life in other place like in Mars.

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Conclusion:

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For me the impact that have (has) TV actualy (right now) is good because a lot of people have a time to look (watch) TV and to do other activities such as excercise and you can spend more time with your family so it isn´t so bad.

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I think Ingeneral (in general) the fruit is Good or the human bad he net (need) some othre (other) food

Against

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On the other hand also it have (has) the bad part, a desventage (disadvantage) is that they can seriously damage eyes and even cause blindness and if you put mor (more) than 10 or 12 hour in the day you can say bey bey (bye?) vision and if you put out bad the contct lenses also bey bey vision. not clear

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Conclusion: To summary all kids must be happy, in my opinion they can be happy for th(the) rest of their lifes and improve in many things, but we need to be paying attention to them because they can be suffering on the inside.

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INTRODUCTION: The music have (has) different types for example: rock, pop, k-pop, hip hop, jazz, blues, reggaetón, etc. The people like different singers and the different types that depends on your musical tastes (taste).

Against: On the other hand, some people have ilegal (illegal) comercial of the skin, the sport hunting and the lost of habitats by the deforestation in differents zones

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against

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1. if you doing could you have lessons
2. you could get illnesses from doing so much exercise
3. you could have physical exhaution

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The good thing about the oceans is that they are a source of natural resources, such as oil, natural gas and minerals. These resources are used in industries.

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AGAINST:One problem is that the buses and taxis almost always are full because other people take, most in the taxis because the buses are bigger and are more easy (easier) to take (.)

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In my opinion the ocean is infinite and has many mysteries to understand and many species to take care (of) .

AGAINST

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AGAINST

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FOR: Music helps regulate emotions, and creates happiness and relaxation in everyday life , it also helps to increase our self-confidence. And it sounds very good.

Against arguments:

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Some of the bad aspects , is that trow (throught) the pass of the years the stereotypes increment so sometimes the people thing (think) that if you start to practice an sport is because you are no agree (disagree with) for the aspect of your body (,) so sometimes it affects in the mental health of the person , and in some cases people start with an adiction to do exercise or to practice a sport.

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CONCLUTION:The conclution (conclusion) is that the trasportation is very important for our life and help us to do and go to the places that we need,the means of transportations are so important and have good things and bad things.

Conclusion: Finally, much animals in extinction, can cause tha (that) the human specie where( will be) in extinction, because these (this) world depens on a food chain, if we finish with the animals we don't have to do anything more.

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AGAINTS: Sometimes the singers don´t show the correct message and write songs with a content that is not good to listen.

Conlusion:

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In my point of view I think that sports are good but we need to stop with the stereotypes in the world because it affects to a lot of people .

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CONCLUSION: Finally, no(not) all the people classified the music by good or bad they think that is only music .

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 15:54:25 UTC

Nice ideas. You need to pay more attention to spelling, use a dictionary to verify.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 15:56:08 UTC

You wrote an organize essay. Pay more attention to capitalization and punctuation.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 15:58:53 UTC

Excellent text. I like your arguments and how you organize your supporting ideas.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:05:32 UTC

Your arguments are fair, and I like your supporting details. Do not be afraid of using commas or periods.

Where is the conclusion?

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:09:40 UTC

Love your arguments. Please check puntuation and sentence order, specially in questions.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:11:33 UTC

Nice job. Check the spelling of delicious.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:24:23 UTC

Welldone. Check spelling and punctuation, so your ideas are more organized.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:26:56 UTC

Check punctuation and grammar. Where is the conclusion?

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:30:01 UTC

Nice text, I like how you use your personal ideas to support your facts. Check spelling.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:49:53 UTC

Salo, you had nice ideas. However, I do not understand the relation between the title and the body of your essay. Make sure your write paragraphs no just a list of items. Please correct it and complete it.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:51:54 UTC

Dear, you have nice ideas and facts. Please try to verify spelling with a dictionary. This will help you a lot.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:54:00 UTC

You wrote a very organized essay. Make sure your check spelling of words.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:56:49 UTC

Welldone! make sure you verify spelling.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 16:58:36 UTC

I like you conclusion, I only missed more supporting details for the arguments against.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 17:00:21 UTC

Nice job. Remember the second paragraph includes your arguments for the topic and the next includes the ones against the topic.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 17:01:55 UTC

Nice job. I missed some more possitive details for your second paragraph.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 17:02:47 UTC

Great and well organized text.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 17:04:08 UTC

Welldone! I missed your opinion on the conclusion.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 17:06:24 UTC

Welldone! Check spelling.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 17:08:11 UTC

Please finish the text.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 17:09:23 UTC

Excellent job!

Against: In the other hand, when people go to the space they trow the garbage to the space and they start to pollute the space, also it contribute to the global warming and to the disminution of the ozono layer.

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Conclution: To finish I thing that humans need to explore the universe but with more caution, becouse if we don’t start to searching other place to live it's probably that we don’t survive much time here in the Earth

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alejandrajerez — 2023-11-02 12:39:27 UTC

Welldone!