CHOPPY AND STRINGY SENTENCES by Vu Thi Thuy Linh https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel en-us 2024-02-19 01:44:06 UTC 2024-02-19 03:56:59 UTC hello@padlet.com CHOPPY SENTENCE 2313111_ https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887499121 2024-02-19 01:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887499121 definition 2313111_ https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887500705 Use too many simple sentences that are too short.

Ex: I was almost hit by a car,I was jogging on the street.
->  I was almost hit by a car when I was jogging on the street.]]> 2024-02-19 01:53:09 UTC https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887500705 Strategies 2313111_ https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887513279 Simple sentence are
 •BOTH MAIN CLAUSES
=> make a Compound sen use FANBOYS or THAMOS
Ex: Sidney likes loud music. His parents can't stand it. He wears earphones
=> Sidney likes loud music but his parents can't stand it so he wears earphones.
• One sentence DEPEND ON other sentence
=> make a complex using SWABIs or RELATIVE PRONOUN.
Ex: The old orange felt like a marshmallow. It was dotted with mold.
=> The old orange , which was dotted with mold,felt like a marshmallow. 
  Use the coordinating construction and the subordinating construction =>make a sentence effective



]]> 2024-02-19 02:08:56 UTC https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887513279 techniques on combining sentences 2313111_ https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887540010
SUBORDINATING PATTERN
Ex: I have washed my car for an hour. It looked dirty
=> Although I have washed my car for an hour,it looked dirty.
CORDINATING PATTERN
Ex: Tom went to school. He was late
-> Tom went to school but he was late.
_ING FORM PATTERN
Ex: I do exercises every day.Because I think it good for my health
-> Doing exercises everyday, I think it good for my health.
_ED PATTERN
Ex: I am tired of playing games.I take a nap
=> Tired of playing games, I take a nap
APPOSITIVE PATTERN
Ex: Amy is the best student of the class. She always gets good marks
=> Amy, the best student of my class, always gets good marks
ADVERB-OPENER PATTERN
Ex: I dropped my phone. I was unhappy
=> Unhappily, I dropped my phone
TO-OPENER PATTERN
Ex: I buy ingredients for a cake. I want to make a birthday cake for my mom
-> To make a birthday cake for my mom, I buy ingredients for it
PREPOSITIONAL PHRASE-OPENER PATTERN
Ex:the fire started.It did it at 6pm.It did inside the house
-> At 6pm, a fire started in the house.
"SERIES OF ITEMS" PATTERN
Ex: Tom woke up and washed his face.He brushed his teeth.He went to school
=> Tom woke up, washed his face, brushed his teeth and went to school.

]]> 2024-02-19 02:37:43 UTC https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887540010 Stringy sentence 2313111_ https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887541423
1. Definition : too long without any punctuation or coordinating conjunction
2.Example 
Incorrect : Marry has never eaten chocolate she hates its smell.
Correct : Marry has never eaten chocolate , for she hates its smell]]> 2024-02-19 02:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887541423 Solution 2313111_ https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887541990
Make 2 sentences
Example : The night was dark and stormy it was hard to see the road through all the rain.
=> The night was dark and stormy .It was hard to see the road through all the rain..

 Use a comma, coordinating conjunction
Example : The night was dark and stormy it was hard to see the road through all the rain.
=> The night was dark and stormy , so it was hard to see the road through all the rain.

Use a semicolon, conjunctive adverb, comma.
Example : The night was dark and stormy it was hardHow to correct stringy sentences.
1. Make 2 sentences
Example : The night was dark and stormy it was hard to see the road through all the rain.
=> The night was dark and stormy .It was hard to see the road through all the rain.
2. Use a comma, coordinating conjunction
Example : The night was dark and stormy it was hard to see the road through all the rain.
=> The night was dark and stormy , so it was hard to see the road through all the rain.
3.Use a semicolon, conjunctive adverb, comma.
Example : The night was dark and stormy it was hard to see the road through all the rain.
=> The night was dark and stormy ; therefore ,it was hard to see the road through all the rain. to see the road through all the rain.]]> 2024-02-19 02:40:14 UTC https://padlet.com/2313111_/al82au4hxjcz4zel/wish/2887541990