“Indonesians are friendly to strangers” What do you think about that thesis statement? Explain your reason by https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4 Made with curiuscity en-us 2020-09-22 06:54:03 UTC 2025-10-11 13:00:42 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f929.png shafarasaz https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767214142 I think it's a good thesis statement for an Example Essay since we can elaborate the thesis by explaining the examples about how or giving proofs on why Indonesians are friendly to strangers.]]> 2020-09-22 07:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767214142 azizarahmatus https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767214286 I think it is a good thesis statement. If we want to make an example from this, it could be: Indonesian are friendly to starngers because they are helpful to each other.

]]> 2020-09-22 07:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767214286 kentputrawibawa https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767214853 I think it is good for thesis statement, because it based on the fact that Indonesians are friendly to strangers. So, it may have many example to support the statement.]]> 2020-09-22 07:30:13 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767214853 https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767215298 I think the thesis statement is too general and doesn't provide personal opinion. It will be better if the writer narrowed it down]]> 2020-09-22 07:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767215298 dantipermata1702226 https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767218145 Well, I actually not convinced by this thesis statement. I think you have to use a lot of examples so it can cover the population, hence, agreeable to the readers. If the example is less that three, I would think you are just lucky. A good amount of examples with great explanation will do the thesis statement justice.]]> 2020-09-22 07:31:49 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767218145 alexialodian https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767218817 It is a good thesis statement in which the author then can provide examples of what Indonesian traits that make them to be called "friendly". The thesis also contains only one central idea and in a form of opinion where readers can agree or disagree. ]]> 2020-09-22 07:32:09 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767218817 yohanakbar https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767219219 It is a good thesis. People have an assumption that Indonesian are friendly. The author may prove the thesis through essay.]]> 2020-09-22 07:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767219219 alfianferrari1902226 https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767224483 I think this is a good thesis statement because we can elaborate it into several topics and examples to include in later paragraphs. Well, it is also arguable.

]]> 2020-09-22 07:34:48 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767224483 I think it is a good statement. It suits the characteristics that thesis statement should have and we can also give many examples in the developmental paragraph. https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767225112 2020-09-22 07:35:03 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767225112 9ggilang https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767225522 That is an oblviously, good thesis statement to begin with. But, it would be better if the author specifially state 3 or 4 factors as a supportive statement, outside of general statement
.]]> 2020-09-22 07:35:12 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767225522 aurelliasabrina1201 https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767227500 I think it is a good thesis statement. The writer can give three to four examples on what makes Indonesian friendly to strangers on the developmental paragraphs.]]> 2020-09-22 07:36:11 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767227500 rizkycameliaa https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767229811 I think this thesis statement is good enough. it can be arguable and it is stating an opinion.]]> 2020-09-22 07:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767229811 mirzaulkhaq1902226 https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767229895 I think it is a good thesis statement. This statement contains the main topic and the central idea which is "Indonesians". I think three topics are enough to support this thesis statement.]]> 2020-09-22 07:37:22 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767229895 arethaaretha01 https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767233465 I think the thesis statement is too general and doesn't provide personal opinion. It will be better if the writer narrowed it down]]> 2020-09-22 07:38:57 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767233465 ZhafiraVaniRachmalia https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767236027 The thesis is good enough to be used as material for current discussion.]]> 2020-09-22 07:40:19 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767236027 https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767256498 It's arguable and it's an opinion. In my opinion this is a good thesis statement]]> 2020-09-22 07:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/zakiafwa/akgxyqxv2wewm6x4/wish/767256498