Charlette by Jeff Edge

Maya Samipur

msamip — 2018-03-07 19:16:35 UTC

I like how you included money in this game!  The idea is really great maybe you should add more components in your game! Where are your pawns? What is your demographic? Dog on a walk or dog on a block for a name? Needs more color don't leave the board white! I agree with everyone  that there should be a purpose for the money! The time doesn't really make sense how does that affect it?

ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ (Oliver)

oliver_benson — 2018-03-07 19:16:42 UTC

- Has Answers
- Good Box Design
- The Cash looks good but it doesn't do anything.
- Theme fits the board
- Seems a lot like monopoly
- I like the concept of the game, especially because it is about dogs.
- Easy to understand
- I like the name
- Doesn't have logo, but everything else is here
- The board is a bit bland

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Jack Williams

2018-03-07 19:16:47 UTC

The box is very plain. There is no detale on the box. The idea is a little bit like monapoly exept you are walking dogs till you get the money you want to get. There is not really a purpouse for the money. The name is also a little plain.

Jake

jpoind — 2018-03-07 19:16:48 UTC

This is not a very good idea to be honest i would not buy this or ask anyone to play it sorry Charlette. And to be honest It was a bad presentation she was not prepared. Mr Norof is making such a good point though. The name is terrible marketing "paws" sounds like you have to own a dog not walk it at least its better than "puppers" I dont understand why she chose that name and the box is plain.

(Sorry Charlette)

Ruby

rrobin1 — 2018-03-07 19:16:49 UTC

Charlette, Make sure to speak loud. I like The box, It looks well done. The money looks cool to..... I like the idea, sounds like a lot of fun. I like it because I love dogs and monopoly and this is exactly that. what if for the name you do fluffs.

Seth

2018-03-07 19:16:54 UTC

• Good box
• like the name
• interesting time range
• like the game
• interesting objective
• seems like a single player game

My Opinions (still Lilly)

lillymorgancox — 2018-03-07 19:16:58 UTC

WARNING: I am sitting on the stairs on the left so i can't see very well but my computer is like almost dead so

I like the box- the design is very nice, and i like the shade of blue

The cards are interesting, and i like the currency system. I agree with Mr. Norof, though, that you should add things in the game to buy with the money you earn. Ruby's game has houses and things you buy with pences (pence in plural??).

Teagan Ryan

2018-03-07 19:16:59 UTC

Charlette has a good concept but I would not play her game. I can’t really understand how to play her game. Mr. Norof had a great idea to buy collars or leashes with the money.

Xoe has a good name idea ‘Dog on the Block’

Julius Ellington

2018-03-07 19:17:07 UTC

So far the box looks nice.
The game name is cool but it's not the most creative in the world. The objective seems cool but earning $200.00 is not SUPER interesting. The cards/cash looks good, it's laminated and it has a cool design.

SELMA

2018-03-07 19:17:09 UTC

The box looks neat, and the theme fits the board. I love the idea of the exclamation point on the corners! *wink* The key demographic of 6+ is good because kids that age like games like that, and they might resemble the game to like paw patrol. So, they will like it. I agree with Jonah, that Paws is not a very catching name. But, i think your board needs more color. I also agree with Mr. Norof, that you should change the money to something you can buy, like shoes to walk in, small collars, colored collars, big collars, jeweled collars and stuff.

Noa

2018-03-07 19:17:11 UTC

Your game is very easy to understand and very clear. I think you should put more color into your game. Your idea is really good and If I saw this in the store i would buy it. I agree with mr. norof you should make something that you can buy in the game it would make it better but, I really like your game

Riley

rhoffm — 2018-03-07 19:17:31 UTC

I LOVE THIS IDEA SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't know how you came up with this!!!!!! I like the shade of blue on the box! I wish I could see the characters.

Also, I wish I could buy stuff in the game so you can upgrade your dogs, every time you roll the die you get to move 1 square up. Something like that. I don't think the name matches the game that much. I like Xoe's idea, Dog on a walk.

Is the game competitive? Do you work together. Still, LOVE the idea.

Jonathan

2018-03-07 19:17:32 UTC

Clean box

Good name

Simple objective

you can't.buy anything with money(what's the point then?)

You should make your own money, not Monopoly momey

Jesse Koeppel

Jesse_Koeppel — 2018-03-07 19:17:45 UTC

I like the clean look of the box with the solid colors and not to complicated of a design, so far its clean, "paws" is a fitting name because your walking dogs. i can see the objective but what will you do with the money, theres no purpose, try to make so you can land on a shop and buy new items. make a purpose, maybe make the goal of the game to get all the dogs or all the items in the game. a new name could be: Paw walkers

Addison Lee

2018-03-07 19:17:49 UTC

I like Charlette's board game because it is very clever and cute. It seems pretty simple. I have never heard of a board game like this, which is great. Not incredibly though out, maybe not as replayable as some other games because you are basically just collecting money and moving around a board. Which isn't bad. This game is such a great idea though, so clever. I would definitely buy this. I love the cards, too. The illustrations are super great. Her box for her game is also very cute. Her board is a bit messy, but it looks like she put a lot of time into it as well. Her age demographic is 6+, which might be a little young, but it's ok. Long story short, her game is clever, easy to understand, and very cute. The name of her game, Pawz, is cute, but doesn't really catch the eye.

Colt

2018-03-07 19:18:10 UTC

I like it but it is a little confusing.
Maybe you could look up things that rhyme with Dog and that can relate to the game and you could try and use it as a new name.

Emma Grisham

egrish — 2018-03-07 19:18:16 UTC

Make sure your board lays flat on a surface. I would also Modge podge it. Make sure to include language of the discipline.

Romi Cohen

rcohen7 — 2018-03-07 19:19:12 UTC

I really like the over all idea of the game. It is very unique and I have never seen it before. The objective should be a little more thought out. The name should be more each catching.

Maya Sasi

MayaSasi — 2018-03-07 19:19:21 UTC

The box looks sleek and nice. The name fits the game. I like that you have choices for how long the game can be. The cards are creative with losing dogs. I like that this game can also be luck or strategy. The objective should be more clear. Give the money a purpose. The age demographic fits the game. Over all I like the idea.

Gannon

2018-03-07 19:19:26 UTC

Name of game “paws” fits the dog theme. Board is a little bent. Confusing. Objective needs to be more clear. Make it so when you get money you can buy something in the game.

Mr. Edge

jeff_edge — 2018-03-07 19:19:39 UTC

I like the work put into the cash. It is clear how much time you put into making the money, and it appears to have worked for you.

The board still needs some work. It really lacks in color. I would like to see a more vibrant board.

What is the objective of your game? It needs to be more concise. That should be one of the first points.

What is the why behind your game? Why do I need money? Mr. Norof made a great point. "What is the point of having money if you can't buy anything with it?" Give the money a purpose.

I wonder if you can use an "unlock" feature for neighbors and their dogs. Certain pet owners have specific standards.

Game Titles: Dogwalkers
Walk the Dogs
Leash L-?

Fintan

FintanRH — 2018-03-07 19:20:05 UTC

had items
knows her game partially
good explanation
interesting idea for game
simple!

sounds okay, i probably wont play it, but still sounds cool. also seems like rileys game. also, everyone was talking i could barely hear.

Zaq

zbensi — 2018-03-07 19:20:57 UTC

I like how you can adapt the game accordingly to how much time you have. I do think that you should have an aspect of buying something. It is a good idea though.

Joe

2018-03-07 19:21:11 UTC

I have never seen a game like this, very creative and elaborate!

Where are the pieces? Are there any pieces? And if so, is there dog and player pieces?

I would add more detail on the box, and have things you can buy with your earned money. What is the purpose of the money? What's the point?

Are you possibly worried of the small possibility of a choking hazard for 6-year olds?

Maybe more of an intriguing name?

Is there a difference in gameplay when it comes to earning 200$ vs. earning 500$? (besides taking longer)

2018-03-07 19:22:08 UTC

Caedmon

I’m sure a lot of people who like dogs (like me) will like this game!

Maybe a different material (that’s more flat) would work well for the board

The box design is very creative and sleek looking.

Maybe the name could be changed to some of the examples that other people gave though.

Overall, I like it!

hugo

sargentoyeeherman — 2018-03-07 19:22:38 UTC

cool idea, i like the idea of trying to collect as many dogs as possible.

the money reminds me of coins in super Mario bros. because the lack of things to purchase.

i would probably buy your game because it seems like a simulation of REAL LIFE.

i agree with Caedmon about the box.

the name doesn't evoke dog walking, try different titles.

Jonah

2018-03-07 19:22:38 UTC

The game name is kind of vague and it doesn't get me really intrested

Jonah

2018-03-07 19:23:22 UTC

It seems fun but you should make it a little harder.

Talia

2018-03-07 19:24:37 UTC

I really love your game and the idea. I also like how it includes dogs.

Jonah

2018-03-07 19:25:50 UTC

The money doesn't have a purpose

Jonah

2018-03-07 19:31:09 UTC

What if someone puts a high amount of money to reach and you don't have enough cash in the game.