Essay Outline Writing_L3 by Adibah Mutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z Develop an essay outline based on a debated topic in class. en-us 2017-07-06 05:02:30 UTC 2017-07-07 01:24:07 UTC hello@padlet.com Instructions of Task adibahmutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178160882 Based on the debate on the topic, Death Penalty to Children, write an essay outline that consists of the main ideas highlighted during the debate. Use the following template to create your essay outline:

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Thesis Statement: __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
 
Topic Sentence 1: ______________________________________________________________________
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Supporting Details: 
a) _____________________________________________
b) _____________________________________________
c) _____________________________________________
 
Topic Sentence 2: ______________________________________________________________________
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Supporting Details: 
a) _____________________________________________
b) _____________________________________________
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Topic Sentence 3: ______________________________________________________________________
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Supporting Details: 
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b) _____________________________________________
c) _____________________________________________




]]> 2017-07-06 05:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178160882 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178226961 2017-07-07 00:32:24 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178226961 We disagree to sentence death penalty to children. https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178226990 Thesis statement: 
It may be true that all human beings should be responsible to their own actions, but there are several reasons that the sentence of death penalty should not he applicable to children.
Topic sentence 1:
One of the reason that we disagree to the sentence death penalty to children is children will not have the opportunity to live their lives.
Supporting details:
1. They deserve second chance.
2. They have their own goal to achieve their dreams.
3. They are no longer to have a better life in the future.
Topic sentence 2:
Another reason that we disagree death penalty to children is they have yet to develop their maturity in cognitive and behavior. 
Supporting details:
1. Children are more easily influence by friends with bad personality.
2. Nowadays, social media can also influence children to do wrong actions.
3. Boys mature later than girls around age between 13 to 17 years old. 
Topic sentence 3:
The parents' negligence and lack of responsibility may also be the reason of children's misconduct. 
Supporting details:
1. Some parents are to busy with their works and don't have time to care their children.
2. Lack of caring and communication will lead children to have mentally abuse.
3. Some parents actions will influence their children personality.
Group members:
Melissa
Yeng Nee



]]> 2017-07-07 00:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178226990 Disagreement towards death penalties for children. https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227044 Daniel Yap
Thesis: The death penalty should not be given to children due to their lack of life experiences, underdeveloped cognitive abilities, and poor parenting.

Topic:1
If children are to be given death sentences, they will not get to live their lives properly.
Supporting details:
1. They have not been introduced to the challenges of higher education.
2. They do not have the opportunity to explore their love life.
3. They will not get to travel to other places, to see different cultures and experience nature.
Topic sentence 2:
Giving a death sentence to a child is unjust due to their inability to think maturely.
Supporting details:
1. They are undergoing puberty and are experiencing a lot of hormonal changes.
2. A child can easily be manipulated.
3. They do not think enough about the consequences regarding their actions.

Topic sentence:3 
Providing a death penalty to children is one-sided, as their actions are widely affected by their parent's behaviour .
Supporting details:
1. Children who are ignored by their family, often seek comfort of friends, which may influence bad behavior onto them.
2.  Studies have shown that children who are abused are more likely to become bullies.
3. Parents who do not correct their child, merely condone the child's behavior.


]]> 2017-07-07 00:33:54 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227044 We disagree to sentence death penalty to children. https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227132
Members : Cheah Huai Kang, Suraj

Thesis Statement : It may be true that all human beings should be responsible to their own actions, but there are several reasons that the sentence of death penalty should not be applicable to children.

Topic Sentence 1 : A lot of things will be taken away from children if they are given a death penalty.

Supporting Details :
a) Children usually have a lot of big dreams, all of that cannot be achieved if they die.
b) Their future will be destroyed.
c) Parent's love will also be taken away.

Topic Sentence 2 : Children are like a piece of white cloth, a bit of ink can easily influence them. If the wrong colour is applied, if cannot be removed.

Supporting Details :
a) Children nowadays are always glued to their mobile phones, therefore social media plays the biggest role in influencing them.
b) Monkey see monkey do, parents also play a big role in guiding children.
c) A rotten apple spoils the whole barrel, one bad friend can easily influence a whole group of children.

Topic Sentence 3 : Parents are responsible to educate their children and to keep them from going rogue. 

Supporting Details:
a) Most parents are too busy with work to feed the family, therefore neglecting their children.
b) Some bad parents are bad role models for their children (drunkard, prostitute, drug dealer, gangster )
c) Parents should spend more time with their children, getting to know what they do and who they mingle with.]]> 2017-07-07 00:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227132 We disagree to sentence death penalty to children? https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227225 Members: Ng wei sheng and ian bay

Thesis statement: 
It may be true that all human begins should be responsible to their own actions, but there are several reasons thst the sentence of death penalty should not be applicable to children.

Topic sentence 1: 
One of the reasons that we disagree to sentence death penalty to children is because they will not have the opportunity to live their lives.

Supporting details:
a) Children have many goals and dreams that they want to achieve.
b) They are still very young to decide in life.
c) Life is very generous because it offer children new opportunities, and once they missed them, there will be no more chances.

Topic sentence 2:
Another reason why we disagree is children have not develop their maturity in cognitive and behavior.

Supporting details:
a) Children are still pure and innocent.
b) All children mature uniquely and at their own pace in each area of development.
c) Children may be matured in one area and immatured in another.

Topic sentence 3:
Lastly, parents' negligence and lack of responsibility is one other reason we disagree to sentence death penalty to children.

Supporting details:
a) Parents are so busy working and not spending time with their children.
b) Children look up to their parents as their role model.
c) For example, the parents' actions will affect their child's behavior.]]> 2017-07-07 00:36:13 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227225 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227266  Group Members : Lydia , Tracey , Deela

Thesis Statement: It may be true that all human beings should be responsible to their own actions, but there are several reasons that the sentence of death penalty should not be applicable to children.

Topic sentence 1:
The first reason why we disagree to sentence death penalty to children is they will not have the opportunity to live their lives.
Supporting details: 
- They still have not achieved their dreams.
- They still have a lot more to explore in this world.
-  They have not had a chance to learn to improve their behaviour.
Topic Sentence 2 : 
Another reason to why we disagree to sentence children to death penalty is because they have yet to develop their maturity in cognitive and behaviour. 
Supporting details:
- Boys tend to mature later than girls.
- Influence of siblings or friends who are older.
- Influence of media.
Topic Sentence 3 :
Lastly, the parents' negligence and lack of responsibility may also be the reason of the children's misconduct and this is why we disagree to death penalty on children. Supporting details :
- Parents are more focused on work to support the family.
- Physical abuse from the parents.
- Mental abuse from the parents.

]]> 2017-07-07 00:36:34 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227266 Disagree death sentence to children https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227442 Group member:Lum,Ian Shum,Marius Yap
Thesis Statement : It may be true that all human beings should be responsible to their own actions, but there are several reasons that the sentence of death penalty should not be applicable to children.
 
Topic sentence 1
1)Due to malleability and lack of maturity,children should not be held accountable to the standard for grown up
A)They may be influence by other to take the blame and allowing the perpetrators to stay free.
B)They may have commited crime to get attention from others to their mental duress
C)They are much easier to reintergrate to society as their mind is still mallealable thus can be saved.

2)Executing a minor is considered as a taboo in modern society.
A)The acceptance of execution of minor will cause breakdown of fabrics of a moral society.
B)Causing duress to the executioner as he will be forced to execute a minor thus causing mental breakdown and developing ptsd.
C)Civil society lacks the moral high ground to the execution of a minor.

3)Evidence of innocense may appear after the sentence is carried out.
A)There are time where the evidence or testimonies could appear after years thus it would be miscarriage of justice.
B) Murdering an individual even guilty is morally wrong thus could be substitude with life sentence.
C)They could still contribute to the society by doing labor or production in prison facilities thus killing them would be a waste of manpower.]]> 2017-07-07 00:37:58 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227442 We disagree to sentence. Death penalty to children https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/ak0bpqp1b77z/wish/178227601 Group members: Azra and Kaartika 
Thesis statement: It may be true that all human beings should be respond to their own actions, but there are several reasons that the sentence of death penalty should not be applicable to children. 
Topic sentence 1: The first reason that we disagree on death penalty to children is that if they are to be given sentence, they will not have the opportunity to live their lives. 
Supporting details: 
1. Instead of putting them in death penalty, they could re-evaluate their life purposes By going through rehabilitation. 
2. As a lesson of their crime, the prison life would educate them in terms of improving their behaviour. 
3. Since they have zero opportunity to set free, they could reboot their life in the walls of prison. 
Topic sentence 2: The second reason is that they have yet to develop their maturity in cognitive and behaviour. 
Supporting details:
1. The childrens using social medias like Facebook and YouTube without any adult supervision could influence them into committing the crime. 
2. The lack of maturity makes them do actions without thinking about the consequences that they're going to face later. 
3. In the research studies, they have proved that boys tend to have a slow development of maturity than girls. 
Topic sentence 3: The last reason is that the parents' negligence and lack of responsibility may also be the reason of the children's misconduct. 
Supporting details: 
1. Parents are more focused about their work life than keeping a track of their children's activities. 
2. The parents could be abusive like having a drunken father will mentally affect their children. 
3. Children's environment might not be as bright as any other kids. 
Conclusion: These are the solution that they can avoid death penalty on children by prisoning them, they are lack of maturity and parents' negligence and lack of responsibility. 

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