Thesis Statements & Topic Sentences by Carol Wilson-Duffy (Work) https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis As a team you should add one thesis statement and whatever number of topic sentences you may need based on your thesis statement. en-us 2019-04-02 14:36:48 UTC 2025-10-13 10:42:20 UTC hello@padlet.com School grades are a necessary component to motivate students and ensure that teachers are meeting the required standards. https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349017225 2019-04-05 17:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349017225 Topic Sentence #1: https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349017878 Students need teachers' grades to motivate them to work hard.]]> 2019-04-05 17:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349017878 Topic Sentence #2: https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349018253 In order for teachers to follow the school' s curriculum properly, they need to develop grades for each student.]]> 2019-04-05 17:21:29 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349018253 Thesis Statement#5 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349782919 American workers should take a vacation in order to maintain their physical health, mental stability, and family relationships.
T1: In order to have a successful business or company, one needs employees with good physical health.
T2: Mental stability is another important factor to ensure active and motivated employees.
T3: Not only is physical health and mental stability important for successful employees, but having employees with healthy family relationships is also important.

]]> 2019-04-09 03:34:20 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349782919 Topic Sentence #1 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349783189 It is important for them to have a stable body condition.]]> 2019-04-09 03:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349783189 Topic Sentence #1 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349783266 They need time to recover muscles because of the labor work (this one is too similar to the first one)]]> 2019-04-09 03:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349783266 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349882778 In my view, young adults moving out of their parents’ house is beneficial for society because children can become less dependent on their parents, and parents may acquire more freedom in their later ]]> 2019-04-09 12:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349882778 6.Thesis https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349931741 Working and testing too much are two important causes of stress.]]> 2019-04-09 13:47:23 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349931741 First topic https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349932744 Testing is everyone’s adventure in their lives. (how is this related to stress]]> 2019-04-09 13:49:09 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349932744 Second topic https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349933318 We need to work for us to get money and living in this society. (again how is this related to stress?)]]> 2019-04-09 13:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349933318 This negative attitude TOWARDS young people living together with family is very harmful for at least for two reasons: 1) it shows a sense of disrespect towards young people's human rights and 2) damages the fabric of relationships in our society.(Sam) https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349943730 Young people have the freedom to live with their parents (given their parents' consent ),  disdaining this life style is a form of discrimination and violates young people's  human rights.
The criticizing  of young people living together with their parents, damages the family relationships in our society.]]> 2019-04-09 14:09:04 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349943730 Getting out of the disappointed mood of lost love needs a rational attitude and enough time. (Sam) https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349955560 Facing the ex-girlfriend rationally can ensure good relations in the future.

Time generally can cure all broken hearts.]]> 2019-04-09 14:30:39 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349955560 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349960899 Topic sentence #7
Seeking help from peers helps many people adapt to American life when they experience cultural conflict. (Where is the "roadmap?"

Topic sentence #8
Parents should give their children allowance according to their children's performance.(Where is the "roadmap?"]]> 2019-04-09 14:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349960899 Remember the ideal thesis statement has a "roadmap" that lets the reader know what your next paragraphs are going to be about. Now, please add your topic sentences. wilson77 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349986544 2019-04-09 15:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/349986544 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350017912 Thesis
It's better to have a smaller family these days because parents must handle the pressure of financial responsibilities, educating their children and having enough energy day to day. ]]> 2019-04-09 16:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350017912 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350020900 TS
1) The disadvantageous of bigger families is that they will pay more money than the smaller families which have to worry about how to rise two or more children. ]]> 2019-04-09 16:32:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350020900 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350021765 2) People think that educating one child is hard enough, but it is even more difficult to educate a big family.]]> 2019-04-09 16:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350021765 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350023002 3) Raising a child takes a lot of energy. ]]> 2019-04-09 16:36:28 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350023002 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350036043 10. thesis
It is impossible? meanlingless to stop the experimentation on animals.]]> 2019-04-09 17:02:05 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350036043 Thesis #1 wilson77 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350037113 I support the attitude of young people staying home with their parents after finishing their degree because these young people will bring both financial and emotional support to their parents.]]> 2019-04-09 17:04:06 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350037113 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350039430 1. It is hard to find other test animals for most experimentations]]> 2019-04-09 17:08:59 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350039430 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350040215 2. No one can take care of everything. Stop experimentation is not effective to help the animal. (not sure what you mean here)]]> 2019-04-09 17:10:32 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350040215 Thesis: wilson77 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350045264 Social interaction in a different culture helps us to learn more, develop social networks, and keeps us in a positive mental state. (This is a thesis with a "roadmap.")]]> 2019-04-09 17:20:20 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350045264 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350045310 3. There are not only negative effects for the animal. (re there some benefits as well? Is that what you mean?)]]> 2019-04-09 17:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350045310 Young people living with their parents can not only save money for the young people, but also benefit their lonely parents; furthermore, it may reduce the cost of elder care as the parents age. https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350145863 Young people need not pay for house and other conditions (amenities) for living.

Older parents can avoid the lonely life in an empty nest.

Taking care of one's older parents at home instead of using a nursing home facility is better financially for all those involved.]]> 2019-04-09 21:39:26 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350145863 One of the most important people in my life I met while living on a small island in the Western Pacific Ocean. Her interesting humor, dedicated friendship, and love of food has bound us together for more than 20 years. wilson77 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350764074 2019-04-11 13:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350764074 Topic Sentence #1 wilson77 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350764805 Each person has their own sense of what is funny, and my friend, Mellanie's humor has brought me so much laughter over the years. 

]]> 2019-04-11 13:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350764805 Topic Sentence #2 wilson77 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350765556 Even though we live thousands of miles a part, I still feel so close to her because she always remembers important events in my life.

]]> 2019-04-11 13:38:55 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350765556 Topic Sentence #3 wilson77 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350766236 Not only is she remarkable for her funny antics and deep friendship, but she and I also share a love of international food.

]]> 2019-04-11 13:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350766236 Thesis #3 wilson77 https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350771786 Although athletics are very enjoyable, I believe more money should be spent on academics & the arts because it would benefit more students in the long run and would help maintain top faculty at the university.

Topic Sentence #1:
Not all students are interested in sports, yet all students have to take academic courses and arts  to prepare for their professionals lives; so it's logical that universities should focus on maintaining and improving their academic status.

Topic Sentence #2:
Faculty will wear green and white on game days, but in reality, most faculty would prefer to see their departments flourish over seeing a Big 10 title. ]]> 2019-04-11 13:50:05 UTC https://padlet.com/wilson77/thesis/wish/350771786