https://padlet.com/27ajuckes/aj8r8i0k2h4qy45l Made with swagger en-us 2022-02-01 13:28:27 UTC 2025-11-28 14:53:46 UTC hello@padlet.com 27kreinemann https://padlet.com/27ajuckes/aj8r8i0k2h4qy45l/wish/2023915023 My first star is your claims. I thought that they really helped support you ideas and thoughts and overall it made your essay better. 
My second star is your warrants. I liked your warrants because it worked well with your data and explains why you put the data in the first place. 
My wish is your citations. When you cited the data it wasn’t right and it should be like (source) at the end of the data unless you put the author in transition to data. 

Overall I really like your persuasive essay and your idea worked well. ]]> 2022-02-01 17:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/27ajuckes/aj8r8i0k2h4qy45l/wish/2023915023 https://padlet.com/27ajuckes/aj8r8i0k2h4qy45l/wish/2088866056 Hey allister!! 2 stars i have for you is how well it is put together, nsd how theres a lot of data that persuades the reader to want the cup. But one wish i have for you is that it could’ve been more organized because it was a little bit unorganized but thats all. ]]> 2022-03-10 17:54:36 UTC https://padlet.com/27ajuckes/aj8r8i0k2h4qy45l/wish/2088866056 27jmoudiab https://padlet.com/27ajuckes/aj8r8i0k2h4qy45l/wish/2139104473 Hey Alister 2stars that i have for you are theme and fonts i really like them because 1 the theme wasn’t extra but wasn’t boring and 2 the font wasn’t bold one wish that i do have is that you make your font smaller i think it would help your article because in your article there where parts when some of the words where stuck together but overall i really liked your article.

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