My luminous padlet by Dulce Burneo https://padlet.com/mary_dulc/aj0uuz3wvf3q Made with charm en-us 2016-06-15 16:30:11 UTC 2023-03-11 20:54:00 UTC hello@padlet.com                              Super Mario Bros mary_dulc https://padlet.com/mary_dulc/aj0uuz3wvf3q/wish/114743832 2016-06-15 16:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mary_dulc/aj0uuz3wvf3q/wish/114743832 Super Mario Bros has been the best videogame during the history of gaming because It is very fun and all kind of people can play it. The videogame consists Mario loves  the Princess Peach but  the princess is kidnapped in a castle by King Koopa , so he tries to rescue her but there is a big struggle to get the princess back. First, Mario has to cross the eight worlds of the Mushroom Kingdom, during that crossing he has to defeat creatures that have been coming from the sewers below New York. Futhermore Mario  possesses unique abilities such us power-ups  he can grow bigger with a mushroom and shoot fireballs with a flower, additionally he has the ability to spin-jump, which allows Mario to break blocks beneath him inside the eighth castle, also when he eats a special mushroom he becomes invible just for few minutes. When he crosses all the eigth worlds  Mario has a final fight with King Koopa and frees the Princess Peach. The videogame is always evolving for example adding new obstacles and adding new characters but in the other hand the videogame becomes a vicious because you ever want to play it. To sum up we recommend you to play Super Mario Bros to clear your mind and to release stress for a moment.  mary_dulc https://padlet.com/mary_dulc/aj0uuz3wvf3q/wish/114743974 2016-06-15 16:33:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mary_dulc/aj0uuz3wvf3q/wish/114743974 FeedBack by Jose David and Marcos David Castillo jdcs98 https://padlet.com/mary_dulc/aj0uuz3wvf3q/wish/115253430 1) The topic sentence is not clear, and is not according with the body of the paragraph.
2) We think that must use more cons about the game, the pros are very clear.
3) There are not enough linking words and the punctuation is not correct in some sentences.
4) One feature required is missing. There are not sentences about where the readers can get the product.



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