Team 2: Academic writing: how does the yellow passage compare to the red? by

Team 2: Academic writing: how does the yellow passage compare to the red? by https://padlet.com/AmyBrennanHELM/ahhulxjfe7fu3k49 Essay question: Compare and contrast the how directors Quentin Tarantino and Danny Boyle use music in their films. en-us 2021-03-19 12:40:45 UTC 2021-03-24 09:11:59 UTC hello@padlet.com These 2 picturs are the worst Ive ever seen. They dont have any similarities. They're 100% different. the only thing that's the same is they both use music. These two movies are called kill bill and slumdog millionaire. These 2 moves use songs to give the scenes a buzz. And they use it to show what they're feeling. AmyBrennanHELM https://padlet.com/AmyBrennanHELM/ahhulxjfe7fu3k49/wish/1329505169 2021-03-19 12:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/AmyBrennanHELM/ahhulxjfe7fu3k49/wish/1329505169 While Quentin Tarantino and Danny Boyle have different styles as film directors they are both known for the striking use of music in their work (Smith, 2017; Bradshaw, 2015). This essay will analyse how music is used in Kill Bill: Vol 1 (Tarantino, 2003) and Slumdog Millionaire (Boyle, 2008). It will explore the similarities and differences between these films to understand how the directors use music to create energy, atmosphere and excitement, and to develop their characters. AmyBrennanHELM https://padlet.com/AmyBrennanHELM/ahhulxjfe7fu3k49/wish/1329505171 2021-03-19 12:40:45 UTC https://padlet.com/AmyBrennanHELM/ahhulxjfe7fu3k49/wish/1329505171 How Does The Yellow Passage Compare? https://padlet.com/AmyBrennanHELM/ahhulxjfe7fu3k49/wish/1329777340 The yellow passage has numerous grammatical errors when compared to the red passage. Those being the following:
- Ive instead of I've or I have
- Using 2 instead of two
- Not using capital letters on the names of the films (Slumdog Millionaire and Kill Bill)
- The use of basic language
- The yellow passage is informal in comparison]]> 2021-03-19 13:45:31 UTC https://padlet.com/AmyBrennanHELM/ahhulxjfe7fu3k49/wish/1329777340 https://padlet.com/AmyBrennanHELM/ahhulxjfe7fu3k49/wish/1329780303 Pink Text is much more formal.

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