https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg Leave a nice detailed comment for Mandana! en-us 2017-04-03 12:46:09 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:59 UTC hello@padlet.com hewithan000 https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164310419 I love your enthusiasm toward the subject of females in war. Your story was very creative and cute. I'm so glad she didn't die in the end. ]]> 2017-04-03 12:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164310419 https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164310525 Your object that you used is very nicely distressed and used with the yarn and the food coloring. The story with the baby boot is  significant because it gives off the imagery with innocence of children in war. You presented very well keeping in character and answering any questions we had to offer.]]> 2017-04-03 12:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164310525 gellirya000 https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164310689 2017-04-03 12:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164310689 cruzjus0001 https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164311068 I like the back story of the item very creative. The end of the story was very good as well I liked the way you used the baby booty and distressed. You had very good voice and eye contact you didn't look at your story the whole time you also looked at your audience which was good. Good job overall ]]> 2017-04-03 12:49:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164311068 gellirya000 https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164318360 Eye contact and body language were non existent. She does however show confidence and enjoyment in her presentation. Organized well but there were a few spelling errors. ]]> 2017-04-03 13:09:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164318360 https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164319256 The symbolism of the baby bootie and the contrast between it and the war was really creative and interesting. The story is interesting and has a lot of emotional details, since families in real life are constantly separated as a result of being drafted into war.]]> 2017-04-03 13:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164319256 https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164321471 The story and presentation were very unique and creative. The storyline and symbolism of naming their child Alfio was very interesting. Overall, a very good project.]]> 2017-04-03 13:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164321471 rojaspre000 https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164323539 Very interesting. I never would have thought to use a futuristic setting as the background for the distressed item. When most people think of war they think of past wars but you didn't and I think that was really creative. I especially liked how you used the contrast of life and death and innocence and murder as a basis for the symbolism of the baby bootie. I never would have thought of that. Good job.]]> 2017-04-03 13:22:41 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/ahcqyzb4bomg/wish/164323539