https://padlet.com/27ahagopian/ag9ixei19wr3ha9y Give feedback plz en-us 2022-01-31 17:41:31 UTC 2022-02-01 18:08:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/27ahagopian/ag9ixei19wr3ha9y/wish/2023914658 1 star I have for you is that the hook of your writing is really intriguing and is a great start to your piece. another star is that your data and citations are put together really well and smoothly placed into the paragraph, it makes the piece more persuasive altogether 

a wish i have for you is that you should check your gums more. ]]> 2022-02-01 17:48:46 UTC https://padlet.com/27ahagopian/ag9ixei19wr3ha9y/wish/2023914658 https://padlet.com/27ahagopian/ag9ixei19wr3ha9y/wish/2023956989 Star: Good hook, engages reader to read more
Star: Good claims and data with well worded warrants to back up your point of the situation.
Wish- Check for better places to break up the paragraphs.]]> 2022-02-01 18:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/27ahagopian/ag9ixei19wr3ha9y/wish/2023956989