https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3 Element? en-us 2017-10-24 11:51:18 UTC 2017-10-31 12:33:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996117 2017-10-24 14:14:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996117 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996393 suspense- The caurosel suddenly started to turn on and play old music. The creaks of the ride make my ears bleed of discomfort.

mood- A shadow suddenly appeared in the moon's glow and slowly walked towards me.]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996393 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996500 suspense - In one scene a character will turn on the lights and it will make a lot of noise before going silent, after that the lights will turn on

foreshadowing - there will be some sort of news article warning the characters that the place is dangerous]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996500 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996582 Suspense- I'm going to have different noises coming from the house and the door shut quickly when they get in, locking them inside]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996582 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996644 Foreshadowing: Going to have the instructor warning about heat stroke and insanity]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996644 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996662 suspense
There's going to be a strange noise and the character will be completely still and silent for a while. ]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996662 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996679 Suspense: The corn maze lights will go off and it will be silent where the killer crows glowing face will come up]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996679 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996721 Mood: Ways that you can set the mood to be creepy, you can use large words to create the mood.]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996721 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996734 Suspense: The room will be quiet and you will only be able to hear the creak of the wooden floor boards. Character: The main character is very curious about the truth and wants to know everything.  ]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996734 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996799 Foreshadowing: Have flashbacks that are scary, or do that thing in Thats So Raven when she like looks into the future or whatever]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996799 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996824
Suspense: I might have teenagers on Halloween having fun and all when one suddenly collapses along with the rest. The wake up in a creepy mansion while nursery rhymes song by a little girl is being played. The song warns them that someone is after them and if he catches you, you will also fall down too.

Characterization: Two guys two girls. One blond hair, one black haired, one red head, and one brown hair. Two couples. Murderer has a mask and has trapped the house. All of them like to sing the Little Einstein theme song]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996824 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996859 Suspense: I'm going to have a scene where it goes quiet and a sound slowly get louder and louder until the killer attacks]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996859 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996885 Suspense-  I'm going to have a scene where my character sneaks out the house knowing that she's not supposed almost getting killed]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996885 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996933 Mood- have a dark graveyard at night with a large dead tree in the center]]> 2017-10-24 14:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199996933 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997030 Characterization:
My main character (Mike Myers) will try to communicate with my antagonist, to no avail. Eventually, after the antagonist kills his friends, he goes into a rage so deep manages to defeat the antagonist, and kills them, keeping his ear as a trophy. Mike Myers goes from being a soft hearted, peaceful man to becoming an violent, hateful person after his experience]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:02 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997030 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997118 Suspense: 
I'm going to have a scene where the character wakes up to knocking on glass and there's a child in their mirror that's all bloody]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997118 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997131 Mood: I am going to have a scene where the character feels a chill down his spine. The setting will be cold and dark and the character starts to feel frightened]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997131 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997160 Suspense- I will incorporate a part where there is a long pause, silence, or a part where nobody seems to breathe.]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997160 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997165 Mood- It is thundering and lightning out. My Main character's car breaks down 50 miles away from any civilization. He is forced to take shelter in a broke down and abandoned house or so he thinks.]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997165 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997204 suspense- footsteps in hall
Characterizations- character worried about dying 
mood- red moon


     ]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997204 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997331 Foreshadowing: when the guy gets into the abandoned space stations he says "wow what happened here aliens or something"

Suspense: before he turns the corner there will be suspenseful words like "he slowly turns the corner" ]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997331 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997340
Foreshadowing- I'm going to have rumors that hint to the character's fate

Suspense-Have the Character here screams and shadowy figures]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997340 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997382 Foreshadowing, Suspense and Characterization
I could create foreshadowing by having a random character suffer the same fate as the main character at the beginning of the story.
I could create suspense by giving a lot of imagery and descriptions while dragging an event along for a long time
I could create characterization by making a character go through certain events to show his or her character traits.]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997382 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997527 Suspense-A mother and daughter moves into an old house. Everything is going fine until something is taken out of the attic. A box with an old-time men's clothing and a toy doll. that's when everything goes wrong.]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997527 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997653 Foreshadowing- I am going to have a wooden rocking chair be the first thing the characters see when they first walk into the abandoned hotel.  That same chair will be the difference between life and death for the characters.]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997653 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997715 Mood
There is an eerie red glow from dark abandoned house during a cloudy night
Suspense
I would create suspense by making the red glow move and no specific reason why it is moving]]> 2017-10-24 14:16:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997715 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997864 Foreshadowing- my character is going to be writing in her diary and she is hinting that she thinks someone is following her, soon to become that he kills the character.

Suspense- Weird, supernatural events will happen for the past week before death visits. 

]]> 2017-10-24 14:17:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199997864 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199998124 Suspense - I'm going to use short sentences that show how the story moves (Ex. Gone...Just. Like. That.) I will also use repetition to show suspense.
Characterization - I'm going to use actions and emotions to develop characters and their traits.]]> 2017-10-24 14:17:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199998124 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199998204 In the foyer of Myrtle Manor at exactly 3:00 AM, Halberd Myrtle goes into the attic and finds his childhood puppets and an old diary. He finds an ominous incantation in the diary and recites it, but (Foreshadowing) nothing seems to happen]]> 2017-10-24 14:17:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199998204 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199998502 suspense: I'm going to leave the story on a cliffhanger                                   mood: its going to be bad and ery weather ]]> 2017-10-24 14:17:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199998502 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199998687 Suspense: I will have my character standing on a cliff at a sun set. the character starts to here noises and  tries to find out where they are coming from. this ends up being his or her downfall.]]> 2017-10-24 14:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/199998687 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/202094528 2017-10-31 12:33:22 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd3/wish/202094528