Lucas Google Sites Peer Feedback 2019 - 2020 by Lucas Cacciatore https://padlet.com/26lcacciatore/afykx8erlmeu Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 19:28:50 UTC 2019-12-12 19:22:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/410914063/cb9d383c9798a466b7d02ddd0d7465f0/dd59ebcde314cdf0e556362c173bb4f9.jpg 26jabadeir https://padlet.com/26lcacciatore/afykx8erlmeu/wish/420958890 I really like the story line of the story. And it is a good story and the title is amazing as well.I also like the suspense in the story on how he was about to get kidnapped by the guy who found out his information.what i think you should change is that you have too many quotations in your story it should be about 30% dialogue and 70% narrating.   


]]> 2019-12-06 19:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/26lcacciatore/afykx8erlmeu/wish/420958890 Story feedback - Noah 26nnocum https://padlet.com/26lcacciatore/afykx8erlmeu/wish/421708599 I thought it was funny how the teachers name was Mr. Krabs.The introduction to the story was interesting and kept me reading on.

]]> 2019-12-09 16:52:58 UTC https://padlet.com/26lcacciatore/afykx8erlmeu/wish/421708599 Jay https://padlet.com/26lcacciatore/afykx8erlmeu/wish/422473376 Don’t let anyone bully you, be brave it doesn’t matter what other people say about you. Be yourself and don’t let anyone change you, ignore the people that think your weird. I really  like how you ended this story i like the theme  in you story. 
 Don’t let anyone bully you, be brave it doesn’t matter what other people say about you. Be yourself and don’t let anyone change you, ignore the people that think your weird. I like how you made your story so realistic like if i was a new id i would be scared to. I wish you added more in your  about the guy that tried to steel Feilex. I also wish you added a little more detail about Bob like is Bob from italy to like details like that.
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