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         <title>3333 심연제(예시)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. 소재 선택 이유와 주제(주장) 요약<br>2. 출처:&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>3615 임지훈</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Three aspects that would have happened if North and South Korea had been unified</strong></div><div><strong>3615 임지훈</strong></div><div><br><br></div><div>We have a painful history, it is the division of Korea into north and south. Until now, a lot of efforts have been enacted from old times, there is no sign of unification of North and South. However, if North and South Korea are unified, what would happen?</div><div>First is the economical aspect. South and North Korea's income gap is fifty times.</div><div>So if unification of North and South had come true, the economy would have crumbled.</div><div>For instance, when East Germany and West Germany were unified, West Germany spent 3,000 trillion but they experienced economic recession for ten years.</div><div>Second is the military aspect. South Korea is enforcing a conscription system because South Korea is in a state of truce now. However, if South and North Korea are unified, Unified Korea may institute a volunteer military system. Also, right after unification, as neighboring states like Japan, China, and Russia take precaution Unified Korea’s military power, we should not institute a volunteer military system rashly.</div><div>Third is the diplomatic aspect. North Korea slanders South Korea and USA at the same time, it wants to turn the North into a country friendly to the USA.&nbsp;</div><div>As the North’s uppermost ruler Kim Il Sung said, “Don’t believe China.”, after unification, Us armed forces in Korea would have been maintained at a high probability.</div><div>In my opinion, to unify South and North, there are so many things and difficulties to do, we would need a lot of preparation.<br>1. 소재: 남북통일이 되면 일어날 3가지 측면<br>2. 출처: 네이버, 유튜브, 구글 </div><div><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>3610 신혜윤</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Changes brought about by self-driving cars in the future<br>3610 신혜윤<br>Have you thought of changes which self-driving cars will bring in the future? In the wave of the 4th industrial revolution, IT-based industries are showing strength. Among them, self-driving cars are especially in the spotlight.<br>The advent of self-driving cars will bring changes to industries, societies, and people's lifestyles. Looking more specifically, it is predicted that it will affect urban problems such as traffic jams and jobs and personal information. So let's take a look at how self-driving cars will affect our society.<br>First, they will solve the cost of car accidents and urban traffic jams at the same time. As a large population is concentrated in cities, related accidents are also increasing. With the advent of self-driving cars, there is a possibility to greatly reduce driver errors. Also, the cause of traffic jams will be greatly reduced.<br>Second, they will also affect job structures. As mentioned earlier, it is possible to efficiently utilize time that is difficult to utilize, which has the effect of increasing productivity. For example, demand for professional driving-related jobs such as taxi drivers will sharply decrease. The meeting of self-driving cars and the sharing economy will bring about changes in industries related to car production and related jobs.<br>Last, there will be privacy issues and new legal disputes. One of the most famous examples is ‘if a self-driving car causes an accident, who is at fault?’. There are also challenges to be solved about privacy issues. When a self-driving car emerges, it will collect the information related to the car's location, speed and driving behavior. It goes without saying that this should be protected as personal information.<br>There are challenges as well as benefits that self-driving cars can bring. But the benefits of self-driving cars also make them an attractive solution to many of the challenges facing society. However, the process from developing self-driving cars to actual mass production is very complex, and there are also processes that require compliance with regulations. Therefore, it is necessary to work together to make the self-driving car business successful.<br><br>소재 : 자율주행자동차가 가져올 미래의 변화<br>출처 : dbpia - 자율주행자동차의 현재와 미래_박만복(한국 교통대학교)</div>]]></description>
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         <title>fibromyalgia3612우서연</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I wrote an essay on fibrous muscle pain.<br><br>The reason why I chose this topic is that I like to exercise, but if I use muscles that I don't use because I exercise excessively, I get muscle pain, and I am interested in fibromyalgia among the types of muscle pain, so I chose this topic.<br><br>Textile muscle pain is&nbsp;<br>It is a pain syndrome in soft tissues such as tendons and ligament fascia, muscles, and fat tissues that cause chronic musculoskeletal pain, stiffness, sensory abnormalities, sleep disorders, fatigue, and painful parts when pressed throughout the body.<br><br>Causes of fibromyalgia<br>The cause of fibromyalgia is not yet known, but it is believed to be due to perceptual abnormalities in pain.‘<br>The central nervous system of people with fibromyalgia has reduced the metabolism of serotonin, decreased the secretion of growth hormones in the body, decreased adrenal cortical hormone response to stress, increased P substance in cerebrospinal fluid, and malfunction of the autonomic nervous system<br><br>symptoms of fibromyalgia<br>First, it may feel tingling or stiff, or it may hurt deeply and subtly, showing various aspects. Light exercise also causes pain. In some cases, they usually complain of stiffness, and when they wake up in the morning, they experience stiff muscles and joints.<br><br>The second prominent feature is fatigue. I often feel tired, continue to be tired even when I wake up, and often wake up during sleep. These symptoms may cause memory impairment, cognitive impairment, headache, anxiety, and depression. It also has a tender point where normal people feel pain sensitively in areas where they do not feel much pain.<br>1. 섬유근육통, 운동을 하면서 생기는 근육통을 찾아보다가 이름이 특이한 근육통에 관심이 가서 주제로 글을 씀<br>2. 출처: 서울대학병원 의학정보</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3609 손가영</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. 우리 사회를 비추어 시사할 점이 있는 주제를 찾다 문화지체 현상의 한 사례인 이 주제를 선정하게 됨, 디지털 족적으로 인한 사생활 침해 문제-명시적인 피해가 없어 가해자-피해자 간 경계가 모호함</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3602 김성원</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Three reasons why Seoul is the capital of South Korea.<br></strong><br><br>&nbsp; &nbsp;We all know that Seoul hasn’t been the capital all the time in the history of Korea. Then why is Seoul the capital of Korea now? In this essay, I will introduce three reasons why Seoul is the current location of the capital of South Korea.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;Firstly, Seoul became an important city with the growth of the Joseon Dynasty. So Seoul became the capital of the dynasty. The Joseon Dynasty constructed various buildings and facilities to make Seoul the political and economic center of the country. These facilities showed the dynasty's power and governance system and laid the foundation for Seoul to become the political center of Korea.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;Secondly, Seoul was an important transportation hub. Located at the center of the Korean Peninsula, Seoul was a vital transportation hub in Northeast Asia. Previous dynasties also recognized Seoul as a crucial transportation hub. Moreover, most importantly, Seoul's geographic location, having the Han River in the center, played a significant role in its importance as a capital city.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;Lastly, Seoul held an important military position historically. The Joseon Dynasty constructed the Gyeongbokgung in Seoul, and the city became an essential defense ground. So Seoul played an important role in protecting the country from foreign invasions.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;In conclusion, there are various reasons why Seoul became the capital of Korea historically. Seoul became a vital city with the growth of the Joseon Dynasty, played a crucial role as a transportation hub, and held an important military position. These reasons made Seoul the best choice as the capital of South Korea.<br><br><br>1. 서울이 한국의 수도가 되어온 역사에서 주요한 원인들과 그 중에서도 건물이 가지는 상징성을 전달하려고 했다<br><br>2. chatGPT<br><br>3. chatGPT로 에세이를 써달라고 했다. 그런 다음 과한 내용은 빼고 배경지식으로 알고 있는 내용으로 영작하여 필요한 내용을 추가하였다.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3603 김지환</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. 양자컴퓨터와 양자정보등에 관해 관심이 있어서 글을 씀<br>2.출처 :디비피아</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3607 성가은</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. 스페인과 관련한 주제를 찾던중 스페인 빌바오의 도시재생 계획에 대해서 더 알아보고 싶어서 선택함.<br><br>2. 출처:해외 도시재생의 성공사례 Top 10%</div><div>스페인 빌바오 사례를 중심으로(디비피아)</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3621 최서진</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. 크로이츠펠트 야콥병의 치료가 어려운 이유<br>이 병에 대해 관심이 생겨서 주제로 정함.<br>2. 출처: msd매뉴얼, 동국대학교 논문, 한국질병관리청</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3604 박지환</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Essential Qualities Every Engineer Should Have&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 3604 박지환</div><div><br>Engineering is a demanding field that requires a diverse set of skills and qualities to succeed. Whether you're an electrical, mechanical, or software engineer, there are certain qualities that are universally important for anyone pursuing a career in this field. Here are three essential qualities that every engineer should have:</div><div><br></div><div>1. Analytical Thinking: Engineers are problem solvers, and one of the most important qualities they need to possess is analytical thinking. This involves the ability to break down complex problems into smaller, more manageable components, and then analyze each component to come up with an effective solution. Engineers who are skilled in analytical thinking can quickly identify the root cause of a problem, evaluate multiple possible solutions, and choose the best course of action based on data and evidence.</div><div><br></div><div>2. Attention to Detail: In engineering, even the smallest mistake can have significant consequences. Therefore, it's essential that engineers have a keen attention to detail. Whether they're designing a complex system, writing code, or testing equipment, engineers must be meticulous in their work, ensuring that every aspect of their project is executed flawlessly. Attention to detail also means being able to spot potential problems or flaws before they become major issues, which can save time and resources in the long run.</div><div><br></div><div>3. Creativity: While engineering requires a lot of technical skills and knowledge, it's also a field that benefits from creativity. The most successful engineers are those who can think outside the box and come up with innovative solutions to complex problems. Engineers who are creative are able to approach problems from different angles, experiment with new ideas, and take calculated risks. This can lead to breakthroughs in technology, as engineers discover new ways to design and build systems that are faster, more efficient, and more reliable.</div><div><br></div><div>In summary, engineers need to be analytical, detail-oriented, and creative. By cultivating these essential qualities, engineers can become highly effective problem solvers who are able to design and build innovative solutions that have a positive impact on the world</div><div><br>1. 나의 꿈 공학자가 되기 위한 자질을 알고싶어서 이 주제를 선택하였고 이번 활동을 통해 추상적이기만 했던 공학자의 역할과 자질을 알게 되었다.&nbsp;<br><br>성공적인 엔지니어가 되기 위해 갖추어야 할 자질에는 문제의 근본 원인을 찾고 여러 해결책을 제시할 수 있는 분석적 사고와, 잠재적인 문제가 주요 문제로 발전하기 전에 문제를 발견할 수 있는 세부사항에 주의하는 능력, 그리고 효율적이며 더 신뢰할 수 있는 해결책을 찾는 창의력이 있다.&nbsp;<br><br>2. 출처: chat gpt</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3617 정민아</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Three Effects of Sleep on Mental Health</div><div><br></div><div>These days, most people around the world suffer from drowsiness, lack of sleep, or insomnia due to rising demand for social media. We may have experienced chills and irritations if we don't sleep well at night. But have you ever thought about the effects of sleep on mental health? Today, we're going to look at how this sleep affects mental health.</div><div><br></div><div>First, lack of sleep also reduces the ability to control emotions and social interaction. Fatigue can also affect the ability to respond to humor and express sympathy. Also, people who often sleep short are more likely to be alienated from social gatherings and experience loneliness. Therefore, a good night's sleep can help restore relationships with others and improve social skills.</div><div>Second, getting a good night's sleep regularly helps you control minor stress. On the other hand, if you don't sleep well, it becomes much harder to manage and today's hassle can be a major cause of frustration. Even daily irritation will make you feel tired, impatient, and frustrated. This lack of sleep increases negative emotional responses to stressors and decreases positive emotions.</div><div>Third, sleep is conducive to various aspects of brain function, and sleep deprivation can negatively affect cognition, concentration, productivity, and performance. On the other hand, getting enough sleep can improve the academic performance of children, adolescents, and young people. In addition, deep sleep has been shown to develop problem-solving skills and improve memory in both children and adults.</div><div><br></div><div>In conclusion, sleep is an important component of mental health. Strategies such as establishing a consistent sleep schedule, creating a comfortable sleep environment, and seeking treatment for sleep disorders can all contribute to better mental health outcomes. It should not be forgotten that getting enough sleep is the top priority in order to continue healthy well-being.<br><br>1. 우리의 삶에서 많이 차지하는 잠이 우리의 건강에 얼마나 중요한지 알기 위해 찾아보다가 수면이 정신 건강에 미치는 영향을 주제로 선정함<br>2. 출처 : 네이버, 대전과학기술대학교 간호학과 논문</div><div><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>3625정경민</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>글의&nbsp;소재: 태권도로 인해 얻을수 있는 이득과 태권도의 대중성</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3605 배서현</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. 새로운 언어를 배울 때 자기계발에 끼칠 수 있도록 도약할 수 있는 부분에 대해 알아보고자 글을 씀 <br>2.출처:유학 가이드,아디노 미디어</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3623 최원우</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>With the current Korean wave, K-Pop is also gaining popularity. It is necessary to make good use of this period to raise the status of K-Pop.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There is one anecdote about Pythagoras, who had no choice but to know. It was when he was passing near the blacksmith one day, following some unknown attraction. It must have been a normal hammering, but a phenomenal mathematical order was felt in his ear. The noises struck by hard metals were harmonized by making different sounds. It was a kind of music for him. I began to look deeply into the secret. Surprisingly, if you hit a hammer with a 2:1 ratio of hammer weight together, it will make the same sound that differs only in height. It was as if we were talking about a pitch between two notes, which we now call octaves, which are twice as different in frequency. Depending on the specific integer ratio between the weights, the degree to which the sounds match varies. There was a pleasant sound, and a noise that wanted to cover the ears.<br><br><br>오직 수밖에 모르던 피타고라스에 대한 한 가지 일화가 있다. 그가 어느 날 어떤 알 수 없는 이끌림을 따라 대장간 근처를 지나가고 있을 때였다. 분명 평범한 망치질 소리였을 텐데, 그의 귀에는 경이로운 수학적 질서가 느껴졌다. 단단한 금속이 부딪히는 소음들이 각기 다른 음을 내면서 조화를 이루고 있는 것이었다. 그에게는 일종의 음악이었다. 비밀을 파헤치기 위해서 깊이 들여다보기 시작했다. 그러자 놀랍게도 망치 무게의 비율이 2:1인 망치를 함께 두드리면 높이만 다른 동일한 소리가 나는 게 아닌가. 마치 우리가 현재 옥타브라고 부르는, 주파수가 두 배 차이가 나는 두 음 사이의 음정을 말하는 것 같았다. 무게 사이의 특정한 정수비에 따라 소리들이 어울리는 정도가 달라졌다. 듣기 좋은 소리가 있고, 귀를 막고 싶은 소음이 존재했다.<br><br><br>1. 음계의 발견<br>2. 네이버 블로그</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Marketing of market approach strategies that value conservation of natural environment and ecosystem.</div><div>Do you have any information about green marketing?</div><div>Green marketing is not just for the purpose of selling products, meeting customers' needs and demands, but rather for the preservation of the natural environment and the balance of the ecosystem.It began in early 1980 in Europe by selling green products that reduce environmental pollution.</div><div>In other words, it appeared to realize corporate profits with environmentally superior products and eco-friendly corporate images.Green marketing is eco-friendly that consumers can relate to</div><div>It began with value.</div><div>Now consumers can feel the seriousness of environmental pollution.</div><div>There is typically COVID-19 due to abnormal weather caused by global warming.</div><div>Because of this, consumers can take immediate inconvenience if they can protect the planet</div><div>It began to show that it was willing to pay more expensive money.</div><div>In line with the movement of consumers, the trend of the times changes</div><div>The awareness of environmental pollution has increased,&nbsp;</div><div>As a result, ESG management began to emerge in companies.<br>1.소비자들에게 좋은 영향을 주는 마케팅을 전하기 위해<br>2.네이버</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1.진로와 관련된 주제를 생각하다가 내가 생각하는음악에대해 얘기해보기 위해 주제로 선정함.<br>(주장)음악엔 힘이 있다<br><br>2.출처:음악치료에 관한 내용 - 네이버</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3620 최문선</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Do you know that music is closely related to our memories and emotions? When we listen to certain music, we can experience memories and emotions related to it. It is understood that music sends specific signals to our brains, and activates networks where memories and emotions are connected.<br><br>Firstly, listening to specific music from our childhood can remind us of memories from that time. Music is connected to our memory system, helping us recall memories related to specific times, places, people, and experiences effortlessly.<br><br>Secondly, music stimulates various areas of the brain. When we listen to music, it engages multiple regions simultaneously, such as visual processing, motor control, and emotional processing. This deepens the connection between music, memory, and emotion.<br><br>Thirdly, music can have a positive impact on memory and learning. Studies suggest that learning with music in the background improves information processing and memory retention. Music associated with past memories can be particularly effective in stimulating the memory of individuals with conditions like dementia and memory impairments.<br><br>In summary, music forms strong connections with our memories and emotions, allowing us to vividly recall specific moments in our lives.<br><br>1.소재: 음악이 우리 기억에 미치는 영향에 대하여 주제로 씀<br><br>2.출저 챗 gpt</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>As science and technology have developed and entered the multimedia era, the role of a designer who efficiently delivers information through various visual images has become important. As IT devices such as smartphones develop, demand for various programs and mobile web designs used online continues to increase, and demand for designers who can reflect advanced video technology is increasing. In addition, when the virtual reality market opens in earnest, the possibility of product design, game products, and video content that combines augmented reality and virtual reality-related technologies is expected to increase. So, what skills do you need to become a designer like this?<br><br>The first is creativity. A high level of creativity is required to present a unique and attractive design concept that delivers messages clearly and effectively. You have to be able to create new works with your own color that can be distinguished from other things.&nbsp;<br><br>The second is technology. Designers don't paint and create all their works by hand. Based on sketches, it is based on sketches such as implementation and printing in 3D models using various technologies and functions of computers.&nbsp;<br><br>The third is communication skills. Communication skills are also important because designers cannot complete everything themselves. You can explain your design to others, receive feedback, improve it, and develop your work to a higher level.<br><br>1. 4차산업 시대와 관련있는 직업에 디자이너가 있다는 것을 알게 되어 디자이너가 되기 위해 필요한 능력들에 대해 찾아보게 되었다.<br><br>2. 구글, 네이버</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3611 옥정민</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. 도수치료 과정 중 성추행 문제 해결방법<br>   최근 도수치료에 대해 관심이 가서<br>2. 자생한방병원&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <title>3613이세찬</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&lt;African-American Civil Rights Movement and importance of legislation&gt;<br><br><br>1.&nbsp; Montgomery Bus Boycott, 1955<br><br>On December 1, 1955, Mrs. Rosa Parks refused to give up her seat to boarding whites. This brought about her arrest, conviction, and fine. The boycott began December 5, the day of Parks' trial, as a protest by African-Americans for unequal treatment they received on the bus line.&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>Refusing to ride the buses, they maintained the boycott until the U.S. Supreme Court ordered integration of public transportation one year later.&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. led the boycott, the beginning of the modern Civil Right Movement.&nbsp;<br><br><br></div><div>&nbsp;2. African-American Civil Rights Movement<br><br></div><div>In 1863, President of U.S Abraham Lincoln announced the Emancipation Proclamation. Blacks obtained the status of free men through the American Constitution. Eventually, blacks in the South could enjoy all the rights as free people just like whites.&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>After the Civil War, thanks to the progressive Republicanpolicies, such as emphasizing humanitarianism and insisting on the abolition of slavery, the South Blacks were allowed to participate in elections and had the right to vote. In addition, radical white supremacists were limited in their suffrage. Hundreds of senators and members of the House of Representatives were thus produced. However, this trend did not last long.</div><div><br>After Lincoln's death, Democratic Party's Andrew Johnson, who had been opposed to the Republican Party, was elected President of U.S., and the Southern states began to deprive them of their rights. In 1876, the Jim Crow Laws was enacted to separate whites from people of color in public facilities in 11 states of South.</div><div><br></div><div>After that, the efforts and sacrifices of the just people were accompanied for about 91 years until 1965 to protect the human rights of black people and guarantee the dignity and value of all human beings without discrimination despite the opposition and oppression of many people.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;3. Civil Rights Act Of 1964<br><br></div><div>In 1964, the Civil Rights Act was enacted after the long&nbsp;</div><div>Black Civil Rights Movement in U.S. Supreme Court.</div><div>So, various types of discrimination, including racism, were legally prohibited in public facilities and in various societies. It is the fruit of the black civil rights movement that has continued for nearly a century. This law abolished discrimination based on race, gender, and nationality, and resulted in a more integrated American society.<br><br><br>4. My Personal Opinion</div><div><br>Until today, we have made a lot of effort to obtain human rights. That is why I know that human rights are not freely given. The just and right beliefs and bold actions of many people guaranteed our freedom and rights. We should always remind ourselves of these facts and not lose our gratitude. In addition, when we faced with such a situation again, we must boldly make the right decision immediately without delay, and execute it to defend our free, peaceful community, the dignity, values of individuals.</div><div><br></div><div>I take it for granted that there is differential treatment&nbsp;</div><div>in the world for good reasons. However, as a person, I think that it cannot or should not exist to discriminate against people without justifiable reasons based only on their external characteristics. In order to abolish and prevent unfair discrimination in our community, I believe that it should be compulsory. To do that, legislation is necessary.&nbsp;<br>I hope that we will become a society in which legislation that pursues justice naturally proceeds just like the Civil Rights Act of the United States, in which the saying 'What the people say is the law' has come true.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;1.&nbsp; 1955년 몽고메리 버스 탑승 거부 운동<br><br></div><div>1955년 12월 1일, 이 자리에 있던 버스 정류장에서, 로자 파크스는 백인들에게 자리를 양보하기를 거부했다. 이로 인해 그녀는 체포되었고, 유죄 판결을 받았으며, 벌금을 선고받았다. 보이콧은 파크스 여사의 재판기일인 12월 5일, 흑인들이 버스에서 받는 불공평한 대우에 대한 항의로서 시작되었다. 버스 승차를 거부하는 그들의 보이콧은 미국 연방 대법원이 1년 후 대중교통에서의 흑백 분리 금지를 명령할 때까지 계속되었다. 마틴 루터 킹 목사가 보이콧을 이끌었고, 이는 현대 시민운동의 시작이 되었다.<br><br><br></div><div>&nbsp;2. 흑인 민권 운동<br><br></div><div>1863년, 에이브러햄 링컨 대통령은 노예 해방 선언을 발표했다. 흑인들은 미국 수정헌법을 통 해 자유인의 신분을 획득하였다. 드디어 남부 지역의 흑인들도 백인들과 마찬가지로 자유인으로서의 모든 권리를 누릴 수 있게 된 것이다.<br><br></div><div>남북전쟁이 끝난 후, 인도주의를 강조하며 노예제 폐지를 주장하는 등 진보적 성향을 띄던 공화당의 정책들 덕분에 남부의 흑인들은 선거에 참여할 수 있었으며, 투표권도 행사할 수 있었다. 게다가 극단적 백인 우월주의자들은 참정권을 제한당하기도 하였다. 그렇게 수백 명의 상원, 하원의원이 배출되기도 했다. 그러나 이런 흐름은 오래가지 못했다.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>링컨 대통령이 죽고 난 후, 공화당의 반대진영이었던 민주당의 앤드류 존슨이 대통령으로 당선되고 남부 주들의 정권이 민주당에게 넘어가고 남부 주들은 흑인들의 권리를 박탈하기 시작했다. 그렇게 1876년, 남부의 11개 주에서 공공시설에서 백인과 유색인종을 분리하는 ‘짐 크로우’ 법이 제정되었다.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>이후 많은 이들의 반대와 억압 속에서도 흑인들의 인권을 지키고 모든 인간들의 존엄성과 가치를 차별 없이 보장하기 위해 1965년까지 약 91년간 정의로운 사람들의 노력과 희생이 수반되었다.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br>3. Civil Rights Act Of 1964&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>1964년, 오랫동안의 흑인 민권 운동을 통해 연방 민권법이 제정되었다.<br><br></div><div>이를 통해 공공시설과 다양한 사회에서의 인종차별을 비롯한 여러 차별이 법적으로 금지되었다. 1세기 가까이 이어져 왔던 흑인 민권 운동의 결실인 것이다.<br><br></div><div>이 법을 통해 인종, 성별, 국적에 대한 차별이 철폐되었고, 미국의 사회가 보다 통합되는 결과가 잇따랐다.<br><br></div><div>4. 개인적인 견해<br><br></div><div>지금까지 우리나라도 인권을 쟁취하기 위한 많은 노력을 해왔다. 그렇기에 나는 인권이 거저 주어진 것이 아니라는 것을 알고 있다. 많은 이들의 정의롭고 바른 신념과 대범한 행동이 우리들의 당연한 자유와 권리를 보장시켰다. 이러한 사실들을 늘 되새기고 감사함을 잃지 않아야 한다. 이에 그치지 않고 또다시 이러한 상황에 직면했을 때 지체 없이 즉각적으로 올바른 결정을 과감히 내려야 하고 이를 실행해서 우리의 자유롭고 평화로운 공동체와 개인의 존엄 및 가치를 당당히 지켜내야 한다.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>나는 세상에 정당한 이유를 가진 차등적인 대우가 존재하는 것은 당연하다고 생각한다. 그러나 한 인격체로서 외적인 특징만으로 정당한 이유 없이 사람을 차별하는 것은 있을 수도, 있어서도 안 된다고 생각한다. 우리 공동체 속에 부당한 차별을 철폐하고 방지하기 위해서는 이에 대한 강제성을 규정해야 한다고 생각한다. 그러려면 입법이 필요하다. '국민의 의사가 곧 법이다'라는 말이 그대로 실현된 미국의 민권법처럼 정의를 좇는 입법이 당연히 진행되는 사회가 되길 바란다.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>내 생각을 간결히 정리하자면 부당하고 잘못된 차별을 없애기 위해서는 당연하고 정의로운 입법이 필요하다는 것이다.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>A public official is a person who is in charge of the affairs of a national or local public organization. He/she shall be divided into national and local public officials according to the scope of his/her duties, and shall be divided into general and separate positions according to the method of appointment and service. I'll look for a seventh-grade prosecutor who is a state official here.<br><br>&nbsp;First, it is a test subject for level 7 prosecution. PSAT can be said to be the first common subject to be taken in the national level 7 civil service exam starting in 2021.PSAT consists of language logic, data interpretation, and situation judgment. After the first test PSAT, the written test for the specialized subject of the second test<br>I'm waiting for . Specialized subjects are the Constitution, Administrative Law, Criminal Law, and Criminal Procedure Law tests. After that, you will prepare for the 3rd test. The third test will be an interview.<br><br>Second, it is the qualification to apply for level 7 prosecutorial civil service.Only those aged 20 or older and those aged 18 or older in Grade 9 can apply, but those who are disqualified under Article 33 of the National Public Officials Act, Article 74 of the National Public Officials Act, or have been suspended under related laws.<br><br>Finally, a seventh-grade public official refers to a Korean state administrative official who works at the Ministry of Justice, Seoul, and each local prosecution office, or branch office, and assists in prosecution affairs such as receiving, handling, and prosecutors.The main tasks, such as running or interrogating for cases under the prosecutor's command, include investigation affairs, such as interrogation, investigation, protection, observation, and preparation and preservation of criminal records. In addition, while operating litigation affairs and compensation review meetings related to the understanding of the state, there are rare cases of acting as some judicial police officials.<br><br>Since I was in 6th grade, I wanted to read movies and novels and become a vague police officer with curiosity about the police, but I got interested in profiler job and direct pressure on the prosecution using my middle school career. So, I wanted to study police administration at Dongguk University, but I gave up the university due to personal reasons and decided to become a seventh-grade prosecutor. John F. Kennedy said, "The Chinese use 'crisis' in two letters. The first word means danger and the second word means opportunity. In a crisis, beware of danger, but remember that there is an opportunity."I'm in danger of giving up college like this, but I'm not going to give up this opportunity because I have my last chance as a civil servant.<br>공무원이란 국가&nbsp;또는&nbsp;지방&nbsp;공공&nbsp;단체의&nbsp;사무를&nbsp;맡아보는&nbsp;사람.&nbsp;사무&nbsp;범위에&nbsp;따라&nbsp;국가&nbsp;공무원과&nbsp;지방&nbsp;공무원으로&nbsp;나누며,&nbsp;선임&nbsp;및&nbsp;근무&nbsp;방법에&nbsp;따라&nbsp;일반직과&nbsp;별정직으로&nbsp;나눈다. 저는 여기서 국가직 공무원인 7급 검찰직 공무원을 알아보겠습니다.<br><br>&nbsp;첫번째로 7급 검찰직 시험 과목입니다. PSAT은 2021년부터 국가직 7급 공무원 시험에서 가장 먼저 해야 하는 공통 과목이라고 할 수 있습니다.PSAT은 언어논리, 자료해석, 상황판단 분야로 구성되어있습니다. 1차 시험 PSAT 이후에는 2차시험 전문 과목 필기 시험<br>이 기다리고 있습니다. 전문 과목은 헌법, 행정법, 형법,형사소송법 시험을 보게 됩니다. 그 이후에는 3차 시험을 준비하게 됩니다. 3차 시험은 면접 시험으로 진행됩니다.<br><br>두번째로 7급 검찰직 공무원 응시자격입니다.검찰사무직 7급은 만 20세 이상, 9급은 만 18세 이상인자만 응시가 가능하며 학력 및 자격, 거주지 등의 제한이없으나, 국가공무원법 제 33조의 결격사유에 해당되거나, 국가공무원법 제 74조(정년)에 해당되는 자, 또는 법원공무원 규칙 등 관계법령에 의하여 응시자격을 정지당한 자는 응시할 수 없다고 합니다.<br><br>마지막으로 7급 검찰직 공무원은 법무부 또는 서울 및 각 지방 검찰청이나, 지청의 각 과 또는 검사실에서 근무하며 범죄사건의 접수, 처리 및 검사가 행하는 범죄수사, 공소제기 유지등의 검찰 사무를 보조하는 대한민국 국가직 행정 공무원을 의미합니다.단순히 사무만 보는 것이 아니라, 담당 검사가 맡고 있는 사건을 위해 뛰거나 취조 업무를 담당하기도 하는 등 주된 업무로는 검사의 지휘에 따라 수사에 관한 사무, 이를테면 피의자 심문, 조사, 보호, 관찰에 관한 사무 및 형사기록의 작성과 보존 업무 등을 다룬다고 할 수 있겠습니다. 이외에도 국가의 이해와 관련된 소송 사무 및 각급 배상 심의 회의를 운영하는 한편, 일부 사법 경찰관리로서활동하는 경우도 드물게 존재합니다.<br><br>저는 초등학교 6학년때부터 영화와 소설을 읽고 경찰에 대한 호기심을 가지고 막연한 경찰을 되기를 희망했지만 중학교 진로시간을 활용하여 경찰에 대한 다양한 종류와 그 종류에 따라 하는일을 알게 되었고 그 중에서 저는 프로파일러라는 직업과 검찰에 대한 직압에 관심을 갖게 되었습니다. 그래서 저는 동국대학교 경찰행정학과를 희망했지만 개인사정으로인해 대학교를 포기하고 7급검찰직 공무원을 하기로 하였습니다. 존 F. 케네디가 "중국인은 '위기'를 두 글자로 씁니다. 첫 자는 위험의 의미이고 둘째는 기회의 의미입니다. 위기속에서는 위험을 경계하되 기회가 있음을 명심하십시요." 라고 말했습니다.이렇게 대학을 포기해야하는 위험에 처해있지만 저는 공무원이라는 마지막 기회가 있기에 저는 이 기회를 포기하지 않을것입니다.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There have been 3 jobs that I want to have since I was young, and today I'm going to talk about those 3 jobs.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>I have liked children since I was in elementary school. I liked to teach someone, and I liked to make. So my dream was to be an elementary school teacher since I was an elementary school student. However, after coming to high school, I constantly heard that the appointment of teachers was decreasing due to the low birth rate, and after consulting with my parents, I decided to find another career path.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>My second dream is to become a psychological counselor. This is because the teacher recommended that I would be suitable for me who likes to listen to what others say and is good at giving appropriate reactions. Also, since I have been interested in psychological counseling for a long time, I thought it would be good to become a psychological counselor.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>My third dream is to become a nurse. After obtaining a nursing certificate, I felt interested in being able to get a job in various fields such as health teachers, nursing professors, and nurses, and dreamed of entering the nursing department. After that, I have been working toward my dream by designing and studying for a career with the goal of entering the nursing department.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>I hope that after a long effort, I can achieve good results of entering the nursing department.<br><br>어렸을 때부터 지금까지 나는 갖고 싶은 직업이 3가지 있었는데, 오늘은 그 3가지 직업에 대해 이야기해보려고 한다.</div><div><br></div><div>나는 초등학생때부터 아이들을 좋아했다. 누군가에게 가르침을 주는 것을 좋아했고, 만들기를 하는 것도 좋아했다. 그래서 초등학생 때부터 나의 꿈은 초등학교 선생님이 되는 것이었다. 하지만 고등학교에 올라와서 저출산율에 따른 교사임용이 낮아지고 있다는 소식이 끊임없이 들렸고, 부모님과 상의 끝에 다른 진로를 찾아보기로 했다.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>두 번째로 가지게 된 꿈은 심리상담사이다. 남들이 하는 얘기를 듣는 것도 좋아하고 적절한 리액션을 잘하는 나에게 어울릴 것 같다는 선생님의 추천이 있어서이다. 또 예전부터 심리상담에 관심이 있었기 때문에 심리상담사를 진로로하면 좋겠다고 생각했다.&nbsp;</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>세 번째로 가지게 된 꿈은 간호사이다. 간호자격증 취득 후 보건교사, 간호학과 교수, 간호사 등 여러 분야로 취업할 수 있음에 흥미를 느끼고 간호학과 진학을 꿈꾸게 되었다. 그 후 간호학과 진학을 목표로 진로설계도 하고 공부도 하며 꿈을 향해 노력 중이다.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>긴 노력 끝에 간호학과 진학이라는 좋은 결실을 맺을 수 있으면 좋겠다.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2023-05-29 15:48:29 UTC</pubDate>
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