https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd en-us 2022-05-06 14:55:04 UTC 2025-11-10 03:33:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187564638 I am able to write more with more details.]]> 2022-05-17 12:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187564638 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187564997 i am happy that i got to write more .]]> 2022-05-17 13:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187564997 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187565780 2022-05-17 13:00:39 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187565780 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187566141 I got better at summarizing ]]> 2022-05-17 13:00:53 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187566141 kennedystanley https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187566346 i can summarize;0]]> 2022-05-17 13:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187566346 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187566409 2022-05-17 13:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187566409 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187568112 I learned to make an inference!]]> 2022-05-17 13:02:04 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187568112 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187568472 2022-05-17 13:02:19 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187568472 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187570779 2022-05-17 13:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187570779 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187570879 I got better at writing than last year.

]]> 2022-05-17 13:03:50 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187570879 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187571067 I've been able to write longer things and moe figurative language]]> 2022-05-17 13:03:59 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187571067 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187571096 I got way better at inferencing and summarizing]]> 2022-05-17 13:04:00 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187571096 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187572405 I learned what inferencing is! ]]> 2022-05-17 13:04:52 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187572405 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187578394 I learned to infer




]]> 2022-05-17 13:08:30 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187578394 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187582669 2022-05-17 13:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187582669 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187584241 i'm better at typing]]> 2022-05-17 13:12:01 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187584241 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187584954 I got better at writing passages and stories]]> 2022-05-17 13:12:25 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2187584954 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197689610 I got better at being more descriptive and vivid in my writing. I also learned how to stay on the topic and properly end a story. ]]> 2022-05-24 13:20:06 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197689610 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197690899 I know how to use different words in sentences instead of repeating sentences.]]> 2022-05-24 13:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197690899 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197691450 At the beginning of the year my writing was short and choppy with little descrpition and mine is now longer and full of adj and adv and figurative language.]]> 2022-05-24 13:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197691450 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197694571 i did better ]]> 2022-05-24 13:23:04 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197694571 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197694789 I got better at spelling this year.]]> 2022-05-24 13:23:14 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197694789 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197696133 I got better at writing more details in my stories and I have gotten better at writing more and adding more dialogue. ]]> 2022-05-24 13:24:01 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197696133 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197697057 I think I have gotten better at using vivid words, and grammar. I got better at doing this because I listened to other people's stories when we had our writer's celebration. I had the chance to hear other kids' writing. This helped me with my word choices and grammar.]]> 2022-05-24 13:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197697057 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197698531 My punctuation, and my imagery has improved massively. Also my figurative langue ]]> 2022-05-24 13:25:34 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197698531 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197700089 I have gotten better at using vivid words, commas, and punctuation . ]]> 2022-05-24 13:26:21 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197700089 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197701818 I got better grammar and I was doing  bad grammar to make it cringy.]]> 2022-05-24 13:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197701818 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197702015 I feel like i have improved in spiltting up the paragraphs. My words have been more vivid and more interesting. I have done a better job keeping my readers attention]]> 2022-05-24 13:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197702015 aversynbevers https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197704648 My first article had a choppy layout and poor vocabulary. My newest article now has a great vocabulary and an amazing flow. My new texts have proper punctuation and vivid words that can help the reader visualize what is going on in the story. When I look back at my old writing, I can see the great progress I have made in ELA.]]> 2022-05-24 13:29:17 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197704648 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197709739 I learned how to improve my spelling, and I also got better at using figurative language. I also learned how to type as fast as shrek can run.]]> 2022-05-24 13:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197709739 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197710557 My first piece of writing had  a lot of run-on sentences, and it was really out of context. ]]> 2022-05-24 13:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197710557 williamfortner0 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197719763 I got much better at imagery, shown below is an excerpt from Escape Jupiter Omega: "He could smell the salty bacon, the milky soft scrambled eggs, and the warm, fluffy, syrup covered pancakes."


Edit: visit my far superior Padlet, The K-9 place, at https://padlet.com/williamfortner0/re8zzd7a75ko11ov]]> 2022-05-24 13:38:15 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197719763 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197738554 I got better at dialogue and summarizing. ]]> 2022-05-24 13:49:30 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197738554 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197739772 I got better at making my story longer.]]> 2022-05-24 13:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197739772 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197747576 I got better with putting inferencing in my stories]]> 2022-05-24 13:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197747576 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197865292 I feel like in my first story I didn't have good spelling. In my most recent story I had great spelling. I have improved in ELA. ]]> 2022-05-24 15:06:46 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197865292 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197869302 I learned how to improve my spelling.I got better at being more descriptive and vivid in my writing. I also got better at using figurative language.]]> 2022-05-24 15:09:25 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197869302 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197871341 I've got better at not repeating words a ton and other stuff.]]> 2022-05-24 15:10:47 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197871341 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197873009 At first I wrote almost nothing I wrote only a few pages and now I do pages. another thing is paragraphing through out the year I did not paragraph but on my last paper i did. ]]> 2022-05-24 15:11:57 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197873009 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197873193 I learned to use punctuation correctly. My writing was more detailed. Paragraphs became easier through the year.]]> 2022-05-24 15:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197873193 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197873360 In my first story my words did not make any sense and. Now  I  learned how to improve my spelling and I got better at making my story's longer.]]> 2022-05-24 15:12:13 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197873360 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197874291 In my first story of the year, my spelling was off, my sentences were dull, and I added way too many verbs and adjectives. My new writing has improved greatly. I now can plot my stories on a story mountain, and they are vivid, but not too many verbs in every sentence. Overall, I have improved in ELA.]]> 2022-05-24 15:12:51 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197874291 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197875088 I noticed that I had choppy sentences. My grammar was bad so was my visualizing in my story was bad. Now I look back and noticed that I have fantastic sentences. My grammar is wonderful. You can also visualize or feel like you are in my story and not get lost in the middle of the story like you did when I first started writing my stories.]]> 2022-05-24 15:13:20 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197875088 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197875783 I have improved on my grammar and punctuation, but at the start of the i had short sloppy sentences and not a lot of paragraphs and now i have improved.]]> 2022-05-24 15:13:47 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197875783 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197876189 I think that I got better at punctuation and paragraphs. I am happy that I learned new things in my writing ]]> 2022-05-24 15:14:00 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197876189 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197876692 When I wrote at the start of the year It was really short like two three of one lines on each paragraph and 3 paragraphs for the body and rushed.]]> 2022-05-24 15:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197876692 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197877153 Gotten way better , like how do you think i made Super Frog. And it's not what i did it's what the teacher taught me.]]> 2022-05-24 15:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197877153 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197877217 In my first story, I didn't have good grammer(spelled wrong on purpose) or proper punctuation, but in my last one, I did so good, that I made a 13 page story]]> 2022-05-24 15:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197877217 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197878056 At the beginning of the year I was writing like I was a 4th grader, but now I write like a 6th grader and I am better at it. I think I am really good at writing now. ]]> 2022-05-24 15:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197878056 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197878282 My first writing and my newest are really different. I can tell that in my first writing I did not go back and read because, of that it doesn't make sense. In my new writing I  did go back and read I also added details and more interesting words/events. so I think I improved a lot in ELA.

]]> 2022-05-24 15:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197878282 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197879066 In my first writing I did not use figurative language, and it was repetitive with words. My most recent writing was more descriptive and I got better at punctuation, and improved my spelling overall with my writing. I think that I have improved a lot in ELA.]]> 2022-05-24 15:16:02 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197879066 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197880007 My first story had too many miss spelled words and long sentences.I have got better at punctuation and spelling .]]> 2022-05-24 15:16:34 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197880007 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197883571 I got a lot better at Inference and my tying.I use to chicken peck. My writing has got in longer and more heather. I am so much better summarizing and dialougue. ]]> 2022-05-24 15:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197883571 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197903080 My writing got way better by slowing down the moment and got my stories to be longer then I ever thought they could be.]]> 2022-05-24 15:30:33 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197903080 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197925485 At the beginning of the year my story used to be so bad because of my spelling. Now my vivid words and my grammar are actually better than my first story. Now I have a lot of personification and punctuation.]]> 2022-05-24 15:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197925485 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197931338 Before I used to make choppy sentences, short or no  paragraphs, little to no figurative language or vivid.... anything

Now I  make long and descriptive paragraphs and less run on sentences and more stories that are easier to read

Overall,  I've improved at a rapid rate and hope to improve further ]]> 2022-05-24 15:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197931338 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197936464 With my first story I started off the story with have you ever wanted to know about Perseus, and my last I started off the story with   One summer day Erik Wanted to go to the museum to see real life dinosaurs, 

With the conclusion of the first story I ended it with   as you can see Perseusis is brave, tricky, and serious, and with the conclusion of my last story I ended with   when Erik woke up he heard the sound of his moms voice yelling " Your late for school".

I'm changing.]]> 2022-05-24 15:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197936464 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197938781 2022-05-24 15:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2197938781 https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2200829602 My writing got better by not ending my senteces with things that dont make sense to the story. I also feel like I added more to the stories I make and make them have a lot of detail.]]> 2022-05-26 12:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/chogue10/ae4qt12xlr84mkyd/wish/2200829602