https://padlet.com/24ndematteo/ae228h1lzij8 Please comment positively and appropriately! Thank you for leaving me feedback :) en-us 2018-12-05 13:50:41 UTC 2018-12-07 13:52:41 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png 24jpinsky https://padlet.com/24ndematteo/ae228h1lzij8/wish/312217355 Your story was written very well. I liked how you expressed your characters emotions throughout the story. This gave me a good look of the character's personalities. Another great thing about your story was the feeling of the atmosphere. You kept repeating the same moment where the character almost dies which is very suspenseful to see what happened next. One suggestion that you should use in the future would be adding more sensory details and more upper vocabulary so your story can be even better]]> 2018-12-07 13:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/24ndematteo/ae228h1lzij8/wish/312217355