In 1990 the email had rapidly increasing for communication. When 1998, 

the email was sent about 6 billion in the word wide. And it ups to 300 

billion in 2014 for social communication in early age of students. Email 

can used by government,*, and *.1000 email was sent to friends and 

family. The students studying in the university can sent email to the 

professor, lecturer, and ministorage. In this way can help them not only 

to express their affectional idea but also to have a good impression 

themselves. In addition, students need to write a formal email when they 

sent it to their lecturer. A title will make the email essay to preread the 

email. Try to make you sentences short and do not like a business email. 

Follow the layout as you had been asked to is also important such as the 

word size and the blank line. And use the capital letter will looks like this 

is not a lazy student, but use “bye-bye” will make the professor thought 

this is a negative student.to sum up, email is a method to instead of the 

communication. And  also a good way to take care the messages.  

 

groups and life experience. Williams, Whitehead and Lab had derived 

 

several statements about the relationship of intelligence and crime. In my 

 

opinion, I thought the crimes is more related with life experience than 

 

intelligence. And this essay will show the link between crimes[SC2]  and 

 

intelligences and life experience respectively.

 [SC1]Good to include some background information. But you could have mentioned about the environment as another factor.  

 [SC2]What is your position on this?

There is a theory of motivation which is  transeunt elements from other peoples or subjects 

named extrinsic  motives. It could be the praise from your boss, the title of your job and the 

salary you will be paid. That means extrinsic motives is uncontrollable by relying on your 

living and working conditions.

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