LO: to compare two poems by Staff Padlet https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems en-us 2017-09-06 20:37:08 UTC 2017-09-07 20:07:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png MYAF staffnoticeboard https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185422407 In Sailing Out To Space there are 4 verses, but in Song In Space there is one.]]> 2017-09-07 09:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185422407 ES + EM https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424400 Both poems have alitteration.

]]> 2017-09-07 09:21:11 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424400 MN https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424447 There is one set of ryming words in each of the four verses.

]]> 2017-09-07 09:21:29 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424447 JB https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424448
They both have metaphors and
They both have rhymes.]]> 2017-09-07 09:21:29 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424448 MF https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424455 both have some aliteration]]> 2017-09-07 09:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424455 HWTS https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424484 in sailing out to space there is ortomatopoeia eg:"sweep""plough"

]]> 2017-09-07 09:21:41 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424484 AW https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424504 Sailing Out To Space there isn't any similes, but in Song In Space         
there is one.]]> 2017-09-07 09:21:48 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424504 I think that song in space is a shorter poem but is a better poem because it has rhyming words on every line and has speech. JE https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424558 2017-09-07 09:22:09 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424558 ES + EM https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424596 both poems have rhyming words in]]> 2017-09-07 09:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424596 CS Poem comprision https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424625
In sailing out space there are 4 verses and 4 lines but in song in space has 1 verse with 8 lines.
Both of the poems have metaphors, similes, and onomatopoeia. They are both well described and both have many adjectives. I enjoyed reading both poems enjoyed I mostly enjoyed song in space due to the fact that is was short and quick and also because it was easy to understand. Also its was easy to read I would definitely recommend to anyone under the age of 7 to read both poems. I would recommend this to as a good read when your bored and it is a great way to learn about space. My friends who enjoy space I would definitely read this . ]]> 2017-09-07 09:22:36 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424625 OG https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424664
In song in space there is 1 
elllitiration and in sailing out to space there is 2.

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One poem has one verse and the other has 4 verses they are both about space in sailing out to space it's got 4 lines in each verse e ]]> 2017-09-07 09:23:07 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424726 MyaF https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424769 Sailing Out To Space has 4 verses and each verse has only 4 lines,but in Song In Space only has 1 verse that has 8 lines. In Sailing Out To Space, not every line rymes,but in Song In Space, every line rhymes. Sailing Out To Space is focusing on sailing in space,but Song In Space is focusing on the world and the sea's colour. ]]> 2017-09-07 09:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424769 MF https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424807 they all have three sets of rymes ]]> 2017-09-07 09:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424807 JB https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424816 They are both about space]]> 2017-09-07 09:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424816 ES+ EM https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424828
Song in space and Sailing out to Space both have anomatopoeia in.]]> 2017-09-07 09:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424828 MN https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424866 The peoms each have a different rythem.

]]> 2017-09-07 09:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424866 HerculesRissington https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424951 Thea are smiles in sailing out to space but Thea are no wince in song in space PG]]> 2017-09-07 09:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185424951 SM https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425028 One has 4 verses the other has one]]> 2017-09-07 09:24:38 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425028 JACK https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425323
Sailing out to space has more
adjectives then song in space]]> 2017-09-07 09:25:36 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425323 ES + EM https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425334 Song in space only has one verse but sailing out to space has four.

]]> 2017-09-07 09:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425334 MF https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425451 in Song in space it has rymes in each line ]]> 2017-09-07 09:26:08 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425451 HerculesRissington https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425573 In Saling out to space there are Simla but song in space has no simla]]> 2017-09-07 09:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425573 They are both about space JK https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425580 2017-09-07 09:26:49 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425580 The first poems title is sailing out to space and the second poem's title is song in space. https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425608                          JE]]> 2017-09-07 09:27:01 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425608 ES+EM https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425697 None of the poems have similies in them.

]]> 2017-09-07 09:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425697 MF https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425749 In sailing out to space it mentions two planets mars and saturn  ]]> 2017-09-07 09:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425749 Jk https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425751 Songs in space has 1 verse ]]> 2017-09-07 09:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425751 there are many adjectives like, strong, fluffy. https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425768
MN  p.s in sailing out to space.]]> 2017-09-07 09:27:53 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425768 JACK https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425775 gaze amazed
sweeping past
strong with spiders webs]]> 2017-09-07 09:27:56 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425775 ES+EM https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425923 Both the poems are about space.

]]> 2017-09-07 09:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425923 I found a lot more similes in song in space than in sailing out to space. HerculesRissington https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425925 2017-09-07 09:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185425925 https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426032 HH 

I enjoyed sailing out to space because it's quite adventurous

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in song in space and sailing into space there is illiteration in both poems

]]> 2017-09-07 09:30:01 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426160 EM+ES https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426190
song inn space has one metaphore and sailing out to space only has 1 to.

]]> 2017-09-07 09:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426190 Song In Space is shorter than Sailing Out To Space. https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426427 JE]]> 2017-09-07 09:31:09 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426427 EM+ES https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426476 Both the poems are very descriptive and have lots of adjectives and great words. 

]]> 2017-09-07 09:31:24 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426476 MF https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426702 I liked amagining  i ]]> 2017-09-07 09:32:22 UTC https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426702 HerculesRissington https://padlet.com/staffnoticeboard/poems/wish/185426765 Song in space is shorter then saling out to space.           PG

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