https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 18:40:01 UTC 2021-06-17 18:35:20 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co/wish/1074623816 JUSTIN!!!! Your piece...was AMAZING! Very detailed and adventurous I absolutely loved it! You did an amazing job!]]> 2021-01-11 15:50:18 UTC https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co/wish/1074623816 https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co/wish/1502919532 I liked how you made up your own story to show that video games isnt the problem its the parents saying it is because the fact they dont like video games]]> 2021-05-07 15:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co/wish/1502919532 27tsmeltzer https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co/wish/1502927053 Hello Justin,
I like your essay about video games. I enjoy where you describe the mother grounding the kid story. I also like the story where the kid being bullied gets revenge on the bully. I wish you described more about what happened to the bully]]> 2021-05-07 15:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co/wish/1502927053 27tsmeltzer https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co/wish/1612861728 Hello Justin,
Your story was great. You made this eye monster guy sound evil which he is but does he eat the eyes? I wish you said that the teen named Justin pulled out his phone to see what was there instead of him looking there a second time without the phone.]]> 2021-06-17 18:35:20 UTC https://padlet.com/27jau/abnbciohvy6xj9co/wish/1612861728