Remake of Coming Home Again, Chang-Rae Lee by Susan Hudgins https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69 Criteria for POWERFUL Writing en-us 2021-04-06 17:46:13 UTC 2024-06-20 06:09:10 UTC hello@padlet.com Test - susan_hudgins https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1417968850 2021-04-14 18:33:20 UTC https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1417968850 Powerful Sentences https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1422048615
huddling together in the front seat. Are they sleeping? Or kissing? Are they all right?

And beneath the face of her worry, I thought, my mother was smiling.

These sentences are powerful to me because they are talking about his mother and her life. 


]]> 2021-04-15 16:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1422048615 Powerful Sentence! https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1422363947 "We often talked like this, our tone decidedly matter-of-fact, chin up, just this side of
being able to bear it." 
I believe that this is a powerful sentence because it shows how they didn't talk to each other like the normal Mother-Son would, and showed their affection and bond in other ways, like food, it gave an insight to how they normally were even in Chang-Rae's early life.]]> 2021-04-15 17:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1422363947 Powerful Sentences kellanhalsey https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1422514461 "Her manner grew playful and light, and I helped her
shuffle to her mattress, and she lay down in the place where in a brief week she was dead."
"She looked at him with her ashen face and she burst into tears."
These sentences where really powerful for the visual aspect of writing. When I read these sentences I almost bursted into tears and even though the author probably didn't want us to cry it was the image that he was trying to get across.]]> 2021-04-15 18:17:30 UTC https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1422514461 powerful sentence ( Hailey van cise) https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1427221927 When I was six or seven years old, I used to watch my mother as she prepared our
favorite meals. It]]> 2021-04-16 21:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1427221927 Powerful sentence https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1427343708 “Once, on ancient Earth, there was a human boy walking along a beach. There had just been a storm, and starfish had been scattered along the sands. The boy knew the fish would die, so he began to fling the fish to the sea. But every time he threw a starfish, another would wash ashore. "An old Earth man happened along and saw what the child was doing. He called out, 'Boy, what are you doing?' " 'Saving the starfish!' replied the boy. " 'But your attempts are useless, child! Every time you save one, another one returns, often the same one! You can't save them all, so why bother trying? Why does it matter, anyway?' called the old man. "The boy thought about this for a while, a starfish in his hand; he answered, "Well, it matters to this one." And then he flung the starfish into the welcoming sea.”]]> 2021-04-16 22:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1427343708 Powerful sentence antchr8489 https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1442447245 Every once in a while, when I think of her, I’m driving alone
somewhere on the highway. In the twilight, I see their car off
to the side, a blue Olds coupe with a landau top, and as I pass
them by I look back in the mirror and I see them again, the two
figures huddling together in the front seat. Are they sleeping?
Or kissing? Are they all right?]]> 2021-04-21 13:25:00 UTC https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1442447245 Powerful sentence https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1457026346 I remember not so long ago there was a tree in my grandparents back yard. I called it "my thinking tree" it was where I would go to either think or just hang from the branches but nothing is meant to last forever. So, I might have lost my tree but someone isn't truly gone until we stop remembering them. So my tree may be gone physically but the memories i had in the tree still stayed. As the plants that grow from where my tree once stood its still nursing that same backyard extending its branches waiting for me to climb up and hang there once again. ]]> 2021-04-25 21:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1457026346 Powerful Sentence - Sophia Baker https://padlet.com/susan_hudgins/abg6e28czudmbg69/wish/1522332112 "My own secret feeling was that I had missed my parents greatly, my mother
especially, and much more than I had anticipated."


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