https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4 Don't forget your name, the title of your book, to TTQA, and use complete sentences. en-us 2017-11-10 21:17:09 UTC 2023-05-24 14:32:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Thunder.png https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/206502175 I will change the part where he has to sleep with his Grandpa because it doesn't make this book sound so good.]]> 2017-11-13 21:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/206502175 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/206990470 I would change my book to where Greg could play technology all the time because his mom won't let him play. I know how that feels because my mom is like that to. I want to help Greg out.]]> 2017-11-14 22:11:22 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/206990470 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207189617 In my book I would change when Ivy and Bean where  yelling because it made them sound mean]]> 2017-11-15 14:08:23 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207189617 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207470641 I want to change Gemma because she will be go at gymnastics.]]> 2017-11-15 22:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207470641 jennymorgan05 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207482531 I would change Amber because she is being very roude.



]]> 2017-11-16 00:21:27 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207482531 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207499167 I would change the part where Ivy,Bean,Sophie W.,Leo,Sophie s.,Prairie,and prairie'so little brother,Isaiah.]]> 2017-11-16 02:00:05 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207499167 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207500389 I would change the part where Ivy,Bean,Leo,Sophie S. Sophie W.,Prairie,and Prairie's little brother named Isaiah play in the dirt, while Sophie W.'s parents were gone. They were playing in the dirt in her front yard that her parents are going to use in the backyard.]]> 2017-11-16 02:09:01 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207500389 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207501629 I would change when McKenna breaks her ankle because she cried and made me sad.]]> 2017-11-16 02:17:33 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207501629 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895016 I want it to be more scary because I love really scary books]]> 2017-11-16 20:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895016 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895724 I would change where they were being
rude because being rude is not good ]]> 2017-11-16 20:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895724 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895727  no penguins because robin got basted!!!]]> 2017-11-16 20:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895727 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895954 I would make people be nice to harry because everybody was being mean to him.]]> 2017-11-16 20:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895954 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895955 2017-11-16 20:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895955 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895956 2017-11-16 20:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895956 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895963 2017-11-16 20:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207895963 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207896259 I would change how rude Rodrick because he is so rude to Gregory.]]> 2017-11-16 20:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207896259 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207896720 I would change when he gets cot because he can't go back]]> 2017-11-16 20:36:34 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207896720 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207896848 I would change where Bean scrams because it sounds like they are mean. ]]> 2017-11-16 20:36:54 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207896848 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207898697 I would make it funnier because it's not very funny.]]> 2017-11-16 20:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207898697 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207898701 I would change giving up to bleve in your self because it is in criging.]]> 2017-11-16 20:40:16 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207898701 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207898707 That there afread from the Te-rex]]> 2017-11-16 20:40:16 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207898707 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207900115 I would chang where he does not loos his bat because he gits mad]]> 2017-11-16 20:44:00 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207900115 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207911467 I would change the part where Arthur's teacher is teaching him at Arthur's house because it's Christmas vacation and teachers don't teach on Christmas vacation.]]> 2017-11-16 21:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207911467 https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207953532 That Froggy would have sat nicely at the table so he wouldn't have ]]> 2017-11-17 01:22:43 UTC https://padlet.com/danielle_bridge/ab6imksxlep4/wish/207953532