https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl Leave me some feedback on my writing pieces en-us 2022-01-31 14:55:33 UTC 2022-04-21 01:42:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2023562773 Amazing essay really enjoyed reading it ]]> 2022-02-01 15:22:12 UTC https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2023562773 27lawaitey https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088325502  - Your presentation was emasculate and very descriptive it had all the information anyone would need to purchase
- It was also very well organized by category and the background was beautiful 

-I wish there was a box for teens or pre teens because we are not full women yet.]]> 2022-03-10 13:33:54 UTC https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088325502 27jrebuth https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088369887 Hi Devasrigauri!, 
One star that I have for you is I love how you made the boxes look neat and creative and how your slides where neat and creative to because it really caught my attention! 
2nd star I love how you  gave reasons  that its better then shopping! 
A wish, I wish that you explained if you did not buy it what benefits would you lose? (Example then it would take more time to buy everything one by one?) 
Overall amazing job! 
Your friend, 
Jojo!]]> 2022-03-10 13:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088369887 27klee https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088412664 I really enjoyed looking through your slideshow! One great thing about it is how your slides didn’t have too many words on them. This made it easier on the eyes and allowed me to take in more of the information being presented. Another thing that made your slideshow stand out is how you described why you created Life Box. It gave your slideshow a more personal touch and would also help persuade your audience. 

One thing you could improve, however, is that your slides lack a lot of punctuation. Without punctuation, your sentences can seem run-on and lengthy. Punctuation would also help separate your ideas and organize your thoughts. Other than that, I really loved looking at your slides, and hope to see what you will do in the future! -Kensie]]> 2022-03-10 14:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088412664 27kvelizacuna https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088783134 I really liked the presentation,  the slides were very neat and organized. You did a really good job putting little information in each slide, it made much easier to read and understand. Another thing that I liked were the boxes design, you made it very colorful and eye catching. My one wish for you is to check for G.U.M.S errors, there were some lack of punctuation and misspelled words, But overall you did an amazing job with this presentaion.]]> 2022-03-10 17:09:14 UTC https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088783134 27arebuth https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088879682 Hi, Devasrigauri! A star is that you had a very good eye catching slideshow and looking at your product made me want to learn more about it. 
Another star is that you had a lot of information on your slides which answered most questions that sharks ask. It is also is good cause it prepares you for similar questions or a question that a shark forgot the answer to.
A wish is that you would look over your punctuation but otherwise, great job!]]> 2022-03-10 18:02:13 UTC https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2088879682 https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2139440880 I loved the essay, it was very easy to understand and very engaging. I really like the pictures that you used it kept me very engaged and it made the article more eye catching. One thing that you could’ve done better is adding bullet points, but overall great job!]]> 2022-04-11 16:17:36 UTC https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2139440880 https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2139846672 I loved how neat your article was because that made it much easier for me to read it. I also liked how your article had lots of information that wasn't the obvious facts about marvel and how because I would have never thought much about how marvel has impacted Hollywood and the movie industry. I can't think of a wish to accept that the writing was in big paragraphs but I don't think that is much of a problem.

- Savannah Hudson]]> 2022-04-11 21:22:35 UTC https://padlet.com/devasrigauri/ab66h2hzqkyfgutl/wish/2139846672