https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1 EL 2A1 en-us 2017-07-26 19:20:36 UTC 2017-07-27 03:39:18 UTC hello@padlet.com farahaqilahk https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179518425 Using the strategies for adding descriptive details, work in your groups to rewrite the following paragraph:

The car accident occurred on the Pan-Island Expressway. A lorry, a bus and a motorcycle were involved. There were a lot of debris on the road. The motorcyclist died as a result of the severe injuries he sustained.]]> 2017-07-26 19:22:27 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179518425 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549606 At about 11 pm last night, on the dimmly lit road of the Pan-island expresswaythere was a horrific car accident which involved a lorry, a bus and a motrcycle. Large chunks of concrete and scraps of metal were scattered along the section of the highway which blocked off incoming traffic on that section of the highway. The motorcyclist after a heavy night of drinking, collided headlong with the car causng the car to veer it's course towards a lorry in the next lane. The motorcyclist was lying in a pool of his own blood and his fractered bone was sticking out of his elbow joint and he lay there screaming in agony before passing on. Thankfully, the other two drivers and the three passegers in the vehicle only sustained minor cuts and injuries in this horrific accident. 

]]> 2017-07-27 02:55:14 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549606 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549640 At 9 o' clock in the evening a horrible car accident occurred on Pan-Island Expressway. A Mitsubishi lorry, silver Hyundai and black Ducati were involved in a fatal accident. There were broken glass , irregular pieces of were all over the road. Smoke wafted from the hyundai's deformed bonnet.]]> 2017-07-27 02:55:26 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549640 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549667 The motorcyclist was found in a pool of blood. The road was charred upon the impact of the vehicles involved. There was a crowd located around the vicinity. A layer of thick black smoke had infected the area making people cough and gasp for clean fresh air. Tons of scrap metal were littered all over the place it was an unsightful scene for all. A motorcyclist laid still on the hard rough gravel, wounds covered him completely, bones were broken. Jason Bourne,26 years old , was officially pronounced dead at 6.30am. ]]> 2017-07-27 02:55:34 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549667 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549683 There was a disastrous car accident which happen on Pan-Island expressway last evening. A lorry, a bus and a motorcycle crashed. There were lots of debris scattered all over the road, fortunately there was no other casualties besides Mr Tan,40 year old, motorcyclist, who died on the way to the hospital due to the sever injuries he suffered. The accident happened, the road was slippery due to a recent rain and the driver of the Toyota Corolla lost control of the car and crashed into the lorry which the motorcyclist crashed because he couldn't stop in time according to several witnesses who witnessed the accident. Thankfully, the lorry driver and the driver of the Toyota Corolla did not lose their lives. We hope accidents doesn't happen again.]]> 2017-07-27 02:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549683 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549695 On 26 July 6.30pm, the usual traffic jam at the Pan-Island Expressway was delayed even longer. A bright red motorcycle was driving against traffic flow and crashed into a SUV with a family in it,which swerved into a school bus of kindergarteners. The family of four survived but the reckless driver ,identified as Lim Ho Po, 23 did not.  Police investigation have showned that the driver did not have a proper driver's license and had some mental issues. "It happened almost 
instantly. We barely had any time to react to the situation and before we knew it, the car was on fire," Ms Loh, one of the people in the SUV, recounted. This fatal accident left other drivers stranded on the Expressway for hours. Ambulance from the National University Hospital (NUH) arrived at approximately 7pm and traffic was subsequently back to normal. The Land Transport Authority released a statement regarding the incident and reminded all drivers to be vigilant when driving and will increase safety measures to prevent such incident from happening again.]]> 2017-07-27 02:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549695 Listening_Sky https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549726 A disastrous accident took place around 7 am yesterday. A bus was on a blind turn and accidentally ollided with a lorry and a motorcyclist. Debris filled every inch of the hot tarred road. The motorcylist, Bob Lee, died before he could reach the hospital.

]]> 2017-07-27 02:56:11 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549726 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549741 There was a car accident that involved a delivery lorry, a tour bus and a Toyota motorcycle that occurred on Pan-Island. There was heavy rain and it was 10 at night. the only source of light was the dimly lighted street lights along the road. The roads were slippery. These were the possible reasons for the car accident. 
  The slippery road caused the motorcyclist to slip while drifting and crashed into the tour bus which halted after feeling the impact. Behind the bus was a lorry with 7 passengers which knocked onto the bus.
  It was a relief that the passengers in the tour bus and lorry escaped with minor injuries however, the motorcyclist died sadly due to a dislocated spine and fractured neck.
 ]]> 2017-07-27 02:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549741 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549772 Team 9
A fatal car accident occurred along the heavily congested Pan-Island Expressway at 10:00pm last night. There were 3 private vehicles involved in the accident, namely a truck, motorcycle and bus. Upon impact, a loud bang was heard and the motorbike burst into flames, spilling black fuel all over the highway. The motorcyclist was abruptly flung forward, causing him to hit the divider head first with a sickening crunch. Unconscious, he was pronounced dead on the spot when the paramedics arrived at the horrific scene.
 Additionally, metal scraps and shattered glass were bestrewed all over the road. ]]> 2017-07-27 02:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179549772 chenhan0221 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179550268 I was driving along the pan island expressway and I noticed all the cars in front of me coming to a halt. I craned my neck out the window and noticed a motorcyclist lying flat on the ground, his helmet smashed into smithereens. His head was twisted in a grotesque angle and blood was oozing out continuously. There was a lorry flipped over at the side of the road and one of the wheels had rolled off the corner of the road. Pieces of glass were scattered around the concrete surface of the road. A car had skidded off the expressway and spare parts were flung everywhere as though it had been in a washing machine .

]]> 2017-07-27 03:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179550268 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179550634 A devastating car accident occured on the Pan-Island Expressway during the evening peak hours. An enormous lorry, a double decked bus and a motorcycle of the latest model were involved. The scene was littered with shattered pieces of blood-stained glass and other debris. ]]> 2017-07-27 03:10:33 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179550634 https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179550722 A devastating car accident occured on the Pan-Island Expressway during the evening peak hours. An enormous lorry, a double decked bus and a motorcycle of the latest model were involved. The scene was overwhelmed with shattered pieces of blood-stained glass. According to Dr Kevinder Singh,]]> 2017-07-27 03:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/farahaqilahk/describe2A1/wish/179550722