https://padlet.com/29meyzaguirre/a7wg7psxrtajnlit Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2022-10-21 15:31:20 UTC 2026-01-12 21:53:27 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f34c.png 29mnewell https://padlet.com/29meyzaguirre/a7wg7psxrtajnlit/wish/2357725032 I got to say your memoir was really good, good sensory details, good descriptive language and more! This is a memoir I think a lot of people can relate to. Being scared, at the hospital or somewhere else. The ending is the best and it raps up the memoir really well. However, I feel like you could’ve made the sensory details relate more like what’s going on in you’re memoir. But over all this is a really good memoir! ^v^]]> 2022-10-26 17:36:36 UTC https://padlet.com/29meyzaguirre/a7wg7psxrtajnlit/wish/2357725032 https://padlet.com/29meyzaguirre/a7wg7psxrtajnlit/wish/2525875768 Hi, Micheal! a strength in your essay is your explanation because it clearly states your point, and is very long. However, I did find some errors that could be corrected. After your explanation I found that there is no second evidence, or explanation, which you should add.  I also found that in your theme there were some bolded words that did not need bolding. Lastely, I found that your theme and sum up do not really connect, so you should somehow try to find a way to connect them.]]> 2023-03-21 18:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/29meyzaguirre/a7wg7psxrtajnlit/wish/2525875768