https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA For EACH category, award a number of points AND PROVIDE FEEDBACK - INCLUDE NAME en-us 2017-10-11 11:14:55 UTC 2017-10-11 16:33:14 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196102484 Points: 1/1
Inculdes good examples/factors to how globalization occured in that period]]> 2017-10-11 16:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196102484 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196102881 1. Restated and responded to the prompt]]> 2017-10-11 16:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196102881 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196103710 1 point, they respond to the prompt and establish the basis for their essay. ]]> 2017-10-11 16:18:31 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196103710 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196103762 1. They have a good thesis]]> 2017-10-11 16:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196103762 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196103798 1/1 because they had one ]]> 2017-10-11 16:18:42 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196103798 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196103863 1 point since they had a thesis]]> 2017-10-11 16:18:51 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196103863 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104120 1/1
because he does list stuff that is relavent to the prompt, even though it is ridiculously broad ]]> 2017-10-11 16:19:19 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104120 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104154 1 point, they answered the prompt ]]> 2017-10-11 16:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104154 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104229 1. They do a good job describing a broader historical event ]]> 2017-10-11 16:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104229 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104271 1 point, they describe broad historical events that relate to the prompt. ]]> 2017-10-11 16:19:39 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104271 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104499 0. Doesn’t include specific enough examples, all broad ]]> 2017-10-11 16:20:11 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104499 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104555 1 point, gave a clear thesis and gave an overview of key topics]]> 2017-10-11 16:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104555 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104612 1 point
They described an historical event even though it was broad]]> 2017-10-11 16:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104612 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104631 Points: 1/1
Guves good examples relating to the different regions and bring up historical events]]> 2017-10-11 16:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104631 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104734 1 point, he made a claim that responds to the prompt ]]> 2017-10-11 16:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104734 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104739 1 point, gave insight on a broader scale that related to their initial claim.

]]> 2017-10-11 16:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104739 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104848 1 pt, a claim is made that gives a response to the prompt. ]]> 2017-10-11 16:20:57 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104848 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104866 0 
General statement about Its effects]]> 2017-10-11 16:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104866 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104879 2. he knows what he’s talking about and we can clearly see he has the right idea]]> 2017-10-11 16:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104879 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104885 0/2 
his examples are horribly repetitive and so broad

]]> 2017-10-11 16:21:03 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104885 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104905 1pt. showed development of economies and causes and effects ]]> 2017-10-11 16:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196104905 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105319 1 point. we’re not supportive ofthe  content ]]> 2017-10-11 16:21:54 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105319 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105419 2017-10-11 16:22:07 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105419 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105650 1 point, they use one historical example]]> 2017-10-11 16:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105650 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105807 1 point, the historical context is relevant to the thesis and the prompt. ]]> 2017-10-11 16:22:54 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105807 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105839 1 point. ]]> 2017-10-11 16:22:59 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105839 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105841 1 pt, ]]> 2017-10-11 16:22:59 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196105841 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106016 1 point, ]]> 2017-10-11 16:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106016 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106149 1/2 
because he does use reasoning to explain his crappy examples, but even his reasoning isn’t very complex ]]> 2017-10-11 16:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106149 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106274 1 point because the person responded to the prompt instead of restating the question. ]]> 2017-10-11 16:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106274 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106344 1 point because they responded to the prompt]]> 2017-10-11 16:24:04 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106344 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106760 1 point, they use historical reasoning but it isnt very well explained and doesnt further the information given in the prompt. ]]> 2017-10-11 16:25:01 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106760 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106807 1 point because the person only provided some evidence of historical examples referring to World War II and did not put into context]]> 2017-10-11 16:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106807 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106812 1 point, because they related to first and third world countries ]]> 2017-10-11 16:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196106812 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196107935 Points: 1/2
Wasnt very specific with the evidence. Gave broad examples]]> 2017-10-11 16:27:43 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196107935 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196107974 1 point, very broad examples]]> 2017-10-11 16:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196107974 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196108423 1 point because the evi]]> 2017-10-11 16:28:56 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196108423 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109157 Points: 2/2
Gave good examples that were related back to the thesis and prompt]]> 2017-10-11 16:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109157 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109745 1 point because there is no reasonion]]> 2017-10-11 16:32:22 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109745 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109748 1 point because there is no reasonion ]]> 2017-10-11 16:32:22 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109748 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109786 1 point because there is no reasoning behind it]]> 2017-10-11 16:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109786 https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109804 1 point because there is no reasoning tic ]]> 2017-10-11 16:32:28 UTC https://padlet.com/melissamartin299/SampleA/wish/196109804