https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97 Please post some positive comments about POLISH for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-10-30 12:44:25 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:47 UTC hello@padlet.com RoshinSam https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708342  I love how well thought out her video is, from the beginning to the very end. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:33:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708342 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708361 It was very creative and I throughly enjoyed it and the background music was very fitting although the audio levels were a bit low. It was nice that your family participated in your commercial.]]> 2017-10-30 13:33:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708361 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708407 The video was good but I felt that the audio levels varied a bit too much. I still rather enjoyed it and you had everything else you needed.]]> 2017-10-30 13:33:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708407 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708421 Had good transitions with different edits and sound effects.]]> 2017-10-30 13:33:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708421 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708472 2017-10-30 13:33:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708472 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708524 Sarah that was extremely well polished and it fit exactly to what you were trying to say. I really like your commercial and it can be seen that you put lots of effort into it and in planning it. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708524 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708851 It was very polished and the idea was very clear and humorous :)]]> 2017-10-30 13:34:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201708851 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201709254 The video had a very smooth progression and it seemed like you thought out your video very well. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:35:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201709254 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201709531 The project seems well done and planned. The execution looks smooth and in order with that of a cliché food commercial. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201709531 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710256 Really funny and creative! Was organized well and clear with what you were presenting]]> 2017-10-30 13:37:44 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710256 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710328 Very well made video. I found it very funny and entertaining, I also enjoyed the format of the video, and how Sarah presented the diet to appeal to people.]]> 2017-10-30 13:37:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710328 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710362 I enjoyed Sarah's video. I liked the idea for the diey and the comedy aspect she incorporated into her video.]]> 2017-10-30 13:37:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710362 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710382 This was really well done especially with the side effects ]]> 2017-10-30 13:37:58 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710382 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710459 The commercial was very organized and had a lot of humor, the collaboration of your family made it an overall a great presentation. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710459 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710460 Very cute commercial! Kept the audience engaged and it was funny. You had great advertising techniques with a lot of information.]]> 2017-10-30 13:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710460 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710537 Great use of family members to really shape the commercial. The side effects was well portrayed. Overall the project seemed well thought out and planned.]]> 2017-10-30 13:38:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710537 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710552 Your video was pretty wel polished and I genuinely enjoyed the comedy that went into a lot of the different scenes, speacily the listing of different side effects, sometimes the volume would fluctuate a little but other than that great presentation.]]> 2017-10-30 13:38:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710552 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710603 The commercial was well planned and polished]]> 2017-10-30 13:38:25 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710603 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710745 Very clear and confident. You seemed very well informed ]]> 2017-10-30 13:38:38 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710745 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710785 I loved the use of family members in your project. Your mom seems really fun and it was nice of her to participate! I also really like the edits you made and creative twists.]]> 2017-10-30 13:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710785 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710856 Very well planned and great job keeping the audience entertained. I loved how you used your dogs at the end when you talked about the negative factors of the promise ice cream plan, very hilarious. Great job!!! ]]> 2017-10-30 13:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201710856 https://padlet.com/elsong/a75rfnasay97/wish/201711554 You did a good job and it was really cute and funny. 

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