WR task 2 WR- Reasons Reasons/ Solutions by Hân Nguyễn

WR prompt

nguyenbaohan1911 — 2021-10-04 09:59:44 UTC

The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the solutions for this phenomenon?

Reason 1

nguyenbaohan1911 — 2021-10-04 10:00:51 UTC

main idea: More and more family members have developed a habit of using technology gadgets while having meals, including both young children and adults.
supporting:
Do nguoi lon khong biet cach kiem soat thoi quen xau nay cua chinh minh va tre con, boi vì reliance on high-tech devices/ addiction to high-tech devices.
---> consequence: mất hết sự family bonds --> disappearance of family meals

Solution 1

nguyenbaohan1911 — 2021-10-04 10:01:03 UTC

Adults should designate technology timeout

Reason 2

nguyenbaohan1911 — 2021-10-04 10:01:50 UTC

Main idea: modern parents - busy work schedule -....
supporting ideas: financial pressure - overloaded coursework
---> thời gian (schedule của những thnahf viên strong gia đình nó khác nhau/ ko đủ thời gian cho gia đình) --> ko tg ăn chung.

Solution 2

nguyenbaohan1911 — 2021-10-04 10:02:16 UTC

cải thiện time management

Agree or disagree with this opinion

nguyenbaohan1911 — 2021-12-03 08:39:18 UTC

Topic: The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

BODY 1:

nguyenbaohan1911 — 2021-12-03 12:09:58 UTC

- MAIN 1: S + are equally responsible for their children's delinquent behaviours...
(1) In the modern world, it is not just maternal responsibility but both mothers and fathers should shoulder an equal responsibility in child-rearing. Since mothers are now able to find more well-paid jobs and contribute to their household earnings, needed time for their children would be cut down to pursue their careers as much as men. As a result, it would be unfair for women to be solely responsible for parenting while the financial burden of fathers in families can be reduced compared to two decades ago. Therefore, modern fathers must be further involved in parenthood, which makes their responsibility for the law-breaking deeds of their children equal to their counterparts.

- MAIN 2: The wrongdoings of parents also negatively influence their children's behaviours. In the very first years of a child, children are likely to take their parents' behaviours as the moral standards to act upon since they are the prime figures contact to that child. normalise the wrong-doings> As a result, problematic behaviours against the laws such as stealing or physical violence made by parents can be mirrored by their children.