https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x Leave me feedback en-us 2022-01-31 14:55:31 UTC 2022-04-11 14:24:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://inst-1.cdn.shockers.de/hs_cdn/out/pictures/generated/product/1/350_650_100/papa_schlumpf_maske-blauer_kobold-zeichentrickfilm_held-8801288.jpg 27lkoehler https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2023506325 I loved your word choice
Your claims were amazing
One thing I wish you could’ve added is some sensory detail]]> 2022-02-01 14:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2023506325 https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2023519241 Good claims overall really enjoyed them. The clarity of your story was very clear easy to read and understand. One wish i would have had was to use a little more detail but that it]]> 2022-02-01 15:04:53 UTC https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2023519241 27jacevedo https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2023579590 I love your figurative language! Your smilies and metaphors because they bring a spark to the essay and it gives your essay some spice. Another thing i liked about your essay is your warrants. They explain what the data means and why it matters, so they are very helpful for the reader. One wish I would have is to add more reasoning for how it would effect the towns happiness. Other than that, i love your essay! ]]> 2022-02-01 15:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2023579590 27bbalestrino https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2023929818 I think that the idea of the community pool was very good and you used a lot of persuading words and claims to make your point. My wish is that I think that you should’ve added a bit more sensory detail to make the essay more enjoyable to read. ]]> 2022-02-01 17:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2023929818 27nderienzo https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2027958992 I like how you want our town to have a pool and i feel like it would be cool as well i really Ike you writing Peice in general tho bye now!]]> 2022-02-03 17:09:30 UTC https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2027958992 27tsmeltzer https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2088313078 Hello there, I love how you go over what the movie box has vs what the other streaming services have. I also love how you came up with the idea by browsing around Netflix. However i wish you showed your Movie box in the slideshow because i didn’t get to see what it looked like

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Hi Tommy! I really enjoyed viewing your presentation! I thought that your 20% deal was a very smart choice for going higher or lower. Another strong choice was to add in all of those “future attachments”, they were fun and gave me hope for your company. I think that your last slide was a bit unprofessional with the “funny” characters. But that was a very small part. Great job!]]> 2022-03-10 17:22:06 UTC https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2088805783 https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2139251789 2022-04-11 14:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/27tdreyer/a6c4g5h2n7nbj20x/wish/2139251789