Improve Writing: Write an opinion essay by Dilfuza Kalandarova

kalandarovadilfuza7 — 2025-07-05 23:10:24 UTC

Write about environmental problems in your area?

Use the following vocabulary: pollution, greenhouse gases, renewable energy, diesel vehicles, affect, climate action, and scientists.

kalandarovadilfuza7 — 2025-07-05 23:11:31 UTC

Activity 1: fill in the gaps

kalandarovadilfuza7 — 2025-07-05 23:21:56 UTC

1)__________ is one of the significant problems in all countries in the world today, which is mostly 2) ________ by human activity on our planet. There is a view by 3) ________ that the situation is getting even worse and there is a necessity for it to be 4)_________. Is it possible for this problem to be solved?

Firstly, one of the major causes is that of air pollution from petrol and 5)__________, which is affecting the health of people who work and live there. In recent times, there have been steps to change to electric vehicles, but this switch has been very slow-moving.

While activity

kalandarovadilfuza7 — 2025-07-05 23:23:29 UTC

Post your opinion with 50–80 words and state:

What the problem is
Why it is serious
What you think people/government should do

Use at least 3 new words from our unit vocabulary (for example: pollution, deforestation, greenhouse gases, sustainable, renewable energy, climate action).

Topic:

kalandarovadilfuza7 — 2025-07-05 23:30:40 UTC

“What is the most significant environmental issue facing your local area or country? Do you believe that enough is being done by individuals and governments to deal with it? What's the reason? Is there anything further that can be done?”

After writing:

kalandarovadilfuza7 — 2025-07-05 23:41:35 UTC

It is possible to include a picture or a link to bolster your argument.
Read the posts posted by your peers.
To express agreement or disagreement or to share your thoughts, write two comments. Use polite expressions:
I agree since....
I believe you are right since...
Perhaps you might also say...
Review the teacher's comments and respond if necessary.

Possibble answer:

kalandarovadilfuza7 — 2025-07-05 23:45:27 UTC

I believe that the biggest issue facing our city is air pollution. There are too many factories and a large population of automobile drivers. Strict rules should be passed by the government to promote the use of public transportation and renewable energy sources. The air will get worse every year if we don't take action on climate change today.

Useful Language:

Linking words: because, so, however, for example, also
Modals for suggestions: should, must, can
Cause/effect: If … will …

REMINDER

kalandarovadilfuza7 — 2025-07-05 23:56:16 UTC

Be respectful!
Use only English!
Be more accurate and creative!