Author: Bryleigh bartow

Postive note: The one thing that stood out to me was the colors and photos she used they really caught my eye. The esssay looks very well organzied and put togethether well.

I learned that people with student loan can suffer mental health problems. Mental health is very important issue and schools should take it very serious. I learned about the benefits of implementing financial literacy classes.

the cover was mainly black and white but had pieces of neon blue and pink which looked very intriguing. I loved the way the headings were funny and how there was so many pictures and contrasting colors on the website.

Author: Parker B

Well done research, read and learned how much Juvenile prison affects the adolescent brain

reader carter may

Great job, One of the best essays i have read today

Tanish Muralidhar

I learned that people with student loan can suffer mental health problems. Mental health is very important issue and schools should take it very serious. I learned about the benefits of implementing financial literacy classes.

reader Carter may

In your conclusion you should connect your personal story to your answer

Author:David sullvian

the postives: The cover caught my eye he used a really good and vibrant photo.He used really good vocabulary and he made the article flow very well.

I learned that AI is affecting teens creativity

Article Read: In The Mind of a Gambler by Sylvia Arth

Positive about poster: the picture has something to do with the article topic and thought the general composition of it was nice.

Positive about article: grammar and composition were really nice, the personal anecdote in the beginning got me further interested in the topic/article

The text explains that LGBTQ+ youth face tough challenges because of stigma and discrimination, leading to higher rates of dangerous behavior and suicide. It argues that their identity isn't a choice but has biological roots, backed by brain research. It calls for support and understanding to create a safer environment for LGBTQ+ youth.

Author: Erick Duran

Your research was really informational!

Positive Note: One thing that stood out to me was the simplicity of the cover and just seeing the pictures you can tell what the article is about. The essay looks very nice with pictures and proper headings throughout the article

Author: Mose Allison

The article is informative and helps show a side of the topic that isn't talked about as much.

Tanish Muralidhar

I learned about the misbehavior problem. I also learned about why this happens which is informational. Your paper was really good and your paper was interesting.

Author: Bryce Johns

The cover was very appealing, because it had a football player from my favorite team, this is what made me want to read it.

I liked how his paragraphs show real life situations, like how teens in sports take desions making more carefully than those not in sports, because it could cost them scholarhips, and college opportunities

Author: Madi George

Good job on your research!!

The cover looked very mysterious and i was intrigued to see what aspect of tech the article was about.

The essay had interesting points about the way teen brains progress as they ingest technology and all the perks that come with it.

Author: Malakai E.

Love the research work on gaming, Learned the positive effects and the negative effects of video games on the adolescent brain. Talks about their behavior, the academic stress, etc. Good work

Author: Dnaz

I agree with your statement of teens being big risk takers, but you must also take into the fact that 99% of gamblers quit before they win big, so never stop spinning. I like the cover photo as well because I want to play poker and lose my life savings when I'm of age.

This informed me on how sports can clash with the brain together and how important sports are when the mind loves sports.

(Teen dating violence)

I really liked reading this article. It’s very educational and very put together.

Author: Ellis T

positive: The way they used a brain and keys and a check mark for the magzine makes it look like it will be intrsting. There intro is really eye catching and t really makes me wonder whats gonna happen in the article.

Author: Sofia Hernandez

Good job, very informational!!

reader Carter may

I loved your essay

Chris P.

AMAZING this article was so good chris!! i didnt know how much that tech really did end up helping kids through ADHD

Author: Aiden Unclebach

It shows that he has personal experience and is very informative and takes inspiration from professional research articles and he seems enthusiastic.

Adverse effect of child labor by Hayden

The cover of the magazine was simple but still had an interesting photo

The article wasn't accessible but the video was funny.

(How the teen brain reacts to stress)

This has a very bright cover, that is what drew my attention to this article. I enjoyed reading it.

The cover caught my eye I like that you could just look at the image to tell what you are going to learn about without reading the title.

Steven V.

The topic of the magazine was interesting and unique. The article was well organized and was able to keep my attention the entire time reading it.

title: teens v technology

author: Jaime T.

the cover has a lot of bright colors that draw people in and has a glow wording style that's interesting as well

the article has a bunch of information and is very long but also has a bunch of pictures and videos to go along with what the topic is.

The text talks about how depression affects teens differently and why it's important to understand and support them. It mentions factors like increased internet use and societal pressures contributing to teen depression. It also criticizes societal expectations and expresses concern about harmful substances. Overall, it emphasizes the need for empathy and awareness in addressing teen mental health.

The cover was very appealing and he used good vocabulary

Author: James Matthews

I really learned about what kleptomania is and its origins. I think its a very interesting topic and you did good.

Author: Tanish Muralidhar

I learned how living with adhd is instead of just knowing what it is. I also learned how adhd affects kids versus someone who does not have adhd. Your research was very informational and international.

Author: Malakai E.

I love the facts you stated and I agree that the usage of video games depends on self control with the teen themselves. I like your magazine as well.

JOHN love, this was soooo good john i love how you wrote the article and descirbed golf helping kids

I liked your article because it shows how the brain and sports go together, whether its happy or sad. Also sports is a grind and your mental health plays big into that.

Author: Georgia Miller

I loved you're article it was very informational and very enjoyable to read and learn about!!

Author: Sylvia Arth

The magazine caught my eye because of the roulette wheel, and the title caught my eye too.

I like how they used a real life story as an introduction to their article.

Jett K this was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing man!! good job this is one of the best i have ever seen!! i love how you wrote about online learning helping kids.

Author: Gavin Pedroza

Love the work you did on mental health, I learned why teens behave the way they do, the good they do, and the bad, and the effects of the way they behave.

Author: Jamie Enrique Torres

The organization of the article made it easy to read and understand.

I liked this article because sports can affect the brain in whatever aspect you want to take it is.

The text presents a thoughtful analysis of the effects of censorship on teenagers, particularly within the educational system. It begins by outlining the prevalent concern that preemptive censorship can infringe upon students' intellectual freedom and right to access information. The author delves into the nuances of banned materials in schools, explaining that controversial topics are often excluded due to parental discomfort or societal taboos.

One key argument the text advances is the potential educational value of controversial topics. By exposing students to diverse viewpoints and challenging subject matter, educators can foster critical thinking skills and promote intellectual growth. However, the text acknowledges the need for sensitivity to age-appropriate content and parental concerns.

The author also explores the motivations behind censorship, questioning whether it stems from genuine concerns for student well-being or from discomfort among teachers and parents. This analysis invites readers to consider the complex interplay of factors shaping censorship decisions in educational settings.

Furthermore, the text examines the broader societal implications of censorship, highlighting how restrictions on information extend beyond the school environment. It discusses parental efforts to limit children's exposure to certain topics in public spaces, reflecting broader cultural debates about appropriate content for young people.

Finally, the text explores the disconnect between teenagers and adults regarding decision-making and risk-taking behaviors. It underscores the importance of understanding adolescent brain development and respecting teens' autonomy while also providing guidance and support.

Overall, the analysis offers a nuanced exploration of the multifaceted issues surrounding censorship in schools, encouraging readers to consider the implications for students' intellectual freedom, educational development, and societal engagement.

Article Read: What is ADHD? by Connor Thompson

Positive about poster: the font + color choices were a nice touch, and the picture with the kid is relatable.

Positive about article: the use of pictures kept me engaged, and the article overall was very informative :)

Author: Ben Griffith

I highly doubt about this, cause a lot of the teen drivers that i know of are 100x safer than the older people that be driving on the roads.

I liked this post because it stood out from the rest due to its black and white colors compared to the rest of the vibrant selection.

Author: Mason H.

I like the cover of your magazine it is very eye catching. I love your statements about music affecting your life and all its positive effects. I agree that music can combat mental health problems.

I liked this article because it was similar to mine.

The cover of the article caught my attention because of the military cover you can make an assumption about what the article will be about. The essay is also well put together and has proper headings and going into how boot camp can mentally and physically treat you

Author: RJ Skeen

Very good research, your magazine cover matched the mood of your essay.

Used really good wording and the cover really matched the mood

Jackson M.

The magazine cover was compelling and appealing and asked an interesting question. The article had in depth research into the topic describing specific effects.

Author: Evan Kipley

One of the best articles I've ever seen and the magazine cover is so creative.

Anthony Nisley

I learned that physical activity can help the teen brain

I like that you talked about the effects of music because people usually just talk about how it is helping them and how it is good to use it, but you showed that it can damage us as teens, and not a lot of us know that.

Author: Sean Nolan

it is important to include physical activity because of study showing that those who did had improved results

I really like the cover of the magazine, its eye catching but simple

I liked the topics and the way they were explained in the essay

Author: Alex Acosta

Very creative and very welll thought out research and article!

Reader Hunter S

I was interested in this article because it was an interesting topic and the magazine cover was appealing and mysterious. This topic is highly relatable to everyone. I like the use of pictures in the text. I learned what exactly makes teenagers so appealed to music.

author Mason H,

I like the work you dii on how the music can affect disorders and diseases.

The research was pretty good, your magazine cover matched the mood of the essay and the title

how school environment effects the way teens think about the future

the image of the two different expressions almost overlapping each other gives a good idea of the kind of mentality were dealing with

the way the article goes about expressing the issue is done in a way that feels very real and honest as someone on the scene so to speak

title: mentality and metal music

author: Mose Allison

the cover has a sick font and style all around that looks like a cover for a metal show

the article is very specific within the different topics and has really good wording with actually interesting information

I really like the way you put everything together, everything makes sense and is interesting. I respect that you did a topic about "Is fashion overlooked?"

The cover is a golden star aesthetic caught my eye to read it.

While reading this article I could understand the information it was giving me.

Article read: How Does Gaming Affect Teenage Behavior(?) by Malakai E.

Positive about poster: the photo used was nice and bright yet still relevant to the topic. The topic, gaming, up in big letters at the top was a good choice too.

Positive about article: it had a lot of good facts, and albeit perhaps a bit biased it did show video games weren’t just a negative.

This article gives a good perspective of the author describing her story, along with their interpretation of an adolescent viewing an activity differently.

The cover caught my eye because of the cartoon on the front that looks like a teen driving on the road. His article has quotes with the proper citations and proper headings for what he is talking about in that section.

The topic of the article was interesting to learn about. The article had a good hook adding personal experience of the topic.

Author: Nayelli Santanna

I was drawn to the cover because all of the main topics were colorful and popped on the black and white magazine cover. As far as the actual article goes, the entire layout wass done very well and it was easy to read and understand. It was also good how you showed the affect each relationship can have on you.

Author: Tanish Muralidhar

The cover caught my eye because it shows a young teen at work, and the words "Harsh Job Environments Can Lead To Abuse." This made me want to read the article.

I like how their article is structured, and I really liked the section "Mental Effects of Teenagers Working Minimum Wage Jobs"

I liked the poster to this one because the image alone drew my attention.

I like that you talked about what it is like to live with ADHD and how sometimes it is harder to do somethings and you have to move a little slower, and some people that don't have ADHD don't take that into account.

title: how injuries in sports affect teen brains

author: Caden A.

the cover has a cool effect on it helping the viewer focus on whats important there

the article was short and simple with good information that hits every question that some people would have

Author: Payton Schriber

It was a good article and I think it talked about the point really well.

Simple but cute cover that made me want to read it.

I like how she started off with writing a personal experience.

Author: Steven V

Very interesting topic with a very good and organized article.

Author: Talia Assouline

I liked how you used multiple specific examples.

Author: Malakai E.

Very cool looking magazine and very cool and interesting research about gaming.

Author: Mose Allison

I loved your article so much because it dove deeper into the history of metal and it was so crazy and cool to learn about!!

how might music affect brain activity and development

the cover intruiged me imediately with the image envoking tactile imagery of music and its effect on our brain and mood

one thing i liked about the article is how much it feels like testimony from someone directly involved and effected by the topic

Author: Talia Assouline

I loved reading your article it was super informational and helped me to understand so much I didn't know about!!

The magazine cover is very simple with a pop of color and it is eye catching

I like how a question was asked in the beginning of a subtopic and then answered thoroughly with good information

Author: Sylvia Arth

The cover stood out among the rest due to the unique issue your article is about. The article itself was as good as the cover, it was very detailed, laid out, and made sense. It was interesting to see the difference in age affects the two groups and how adaptable young adults, and teens can be.

I liked the cover because of the main topics being colorful as far the article goes it is well written and allowed me to have a good understanding of the effect a relationship can have on you

Reader: Hunter S

The title "The Cost of a Hit" drew me in to want to read this article. I learned about the long term effects of contact sports that stem from teenage years.

how the teen brain reacts to stress

the images on the cover serve to illustrate the issue at hand while also being humorous to draw in intruige,

while the contents themselves are a surprisingly deep and well thought out summary of what effects stress can have on developing minds

I liked the article, the depth and detail of the history of metal and it's history is very interesting.

Reader: Hunter S

This article highlights the current crisis that has to do with depression. I learned how teenagers are vulnerable to these mental health issues in this generation.

I really like how the magazine is organized, its evened out with the person and the words.

The beginning being a personal experience is good because it allows the reader to connect to it

Author: Leonardo Cantu

The cover interested me because the mountain seemed to embrace the sense of the article which is that life can be a trecherous hike. The article itself was well written and used sources very well. The message of the article was very clear to understand and the organization of the article made sense.

I thoroughly enjoyed this article because i 100% agree with the message that is being displayed, Just the simple facts kept me intrigued. It is very informational and very well designed. Good job jay

The magazine cover was very colorful and it was appealing to the eye :)

The opener starting off with a question made me wonder why i wont be going to college

Positives:

Cover: I thought the cover was creatively designed, and it drew my eye in.

Article: The research was well woven and thought out, and specifications were made at the end based on the research they’d found.

Positives:

Cover: I like the cover! It caught my eye when I was walking past. I like the simplicity, because it makes it easy to see exactly what I’m about to read.

Article: The article was easy to read, and I learned a lot about how music positively affects teens.

Author: Malakai E.

Article: How does Gaming Affect Teenager Behavior

The cover really attracted me because it has a fancy look, cool headings and a video game background.

I like the story behind the article, it talks about how gaming affects teenagers and how it connects to school. Very nice

Author: Sasha P

The cover interested me with the cool vibrant image it had and it was in the same section as mine. The topic interested me because its unique and made me question if schizophrenia is becoming more common.

Author: Bryce Johns

Title: how do sports affect the development of the adolescent brain

this magazine cover is interesting because it is a Texas longhorns player and I like longhorn football.

I think the essay has a good format and gives good information about sports and how people view them.

Author: Mose A

Cover: I a bunch of people at a concert with bright colors and metal hand signs to lure my to it.

Article: I wish for this article to go a little deeper into the music to drug correlation and explain it the idea of it more than it did.

Author: Mason H

The white font stands out and brought me in cause its easy to read. The topic is interesting cause its about music development in teens brain which is a cool topic cause its something that revolves around me.

Title: How Does Fashion Affect Teens?

1. The colors are very simplistic, creates a modern atmosphere

2. I felt this as a personal connection as I am interested in fashion myself.

Garret C

the cover was pretty cool and anmie esc feeling the article is cool because it compares how the dna in us is the reason love at first sight is a thing. I found that interesting.

Author: Tyler Evans

Article: What happens from lack of sleep as an adolescent

I like the cover because it has a nice and background and it also contains an amazing background information.

I like the article, it talks about how lack of sleep can impact teens and it’s story is just amazing

No, yeah it was a good read if really showed how things are way different in perspective than i thought, previously i thought that when the abuse was over not much would happen, but it apparently effects way more than I thought

Author: Mason Rieger

Title: sleep deprivation

I think the magazine cover caught my eye because of the speech bubble and bright blue colors.

The essay itself is very well written and I learned interesting facts I never knew .

I think he made it intriguing and I enjoyed reading

Author: Sofia Alanis

Your article was very thought out and informative. I liked the way you structured your paragraphs and how you broke down the information. The impact of parasocial relationships on mental health has always interested me, so your article was very fun to read.

Author: Hunter S

The magazine brought me in with the bright pink colors I like the topic cause its over mental health and how it your brain might not function correctly which is interesting.

Mason Hagen

Article is cool loved learning about how music effects cancer and how it is like a drug and how he compared to alcohol

Author: Elyan B.

Article Name: How drugs become an addiction to the brain.

Article: I wish for this article to explain how the brain is changed for the future of the teen. For I think maybe some more things could happen depending on the drug.

Author: Bryce Johns

The cover was able to catch my eye with the colorful yet older look to it. It feel nostalgic. The title also got me because this is something that is always talked about and I have wondered for a while

Author: Leonardo Cantu

The cover was very interesting and had a calm look to it. Not only was the cover well designed, the article was as well. The article was very organized and an easy read making every paragraph easy to analyze and straight forward.

Author Bryce J

In this article Bryce does a great job laying out the positives and negatives of playing sports. He explains how sports can effect your decision making it good and bad ways without taking a side.

Title: Sports in an Adolescents Life

1. The color used in the cover makes it very noticeable and stands out.

2. I love how in this it focuses all sides of a teenager playing sports, not just them, but also the people around them.

Author: Bryce Johns

I like this article because it’s interesting to me because of football and it’s interesting to learn about how the brain can be affected from playing the sport and the dangers of it

Teenagers v. Technology

By: Jaime Enrique Torres

The magazine cover is interesting because it features a digitalized computer with objects popping out and the font looked really cool and trippy.

I like the essay because it is long but not too long and informative, there were lots of images as well. One thing I learned was that parents need to limit their children's phones but not too much so that they can grow independently. However, one critique of this essay is that it is too argumentative and not as much of a research essay.

Author: Logan Waters

Learning the impact fashion has on teen brain biology was very interesting. I liked how you pointed out how influential a teens peers were and how that affects a teens own fashion sense. Your article was very informative and fun to read.

I liked the connection between physical health issues and how screen time can better or worsen them. It effectively sends a message telling people about how dangerous screen time can truly be.

Author: Joshua Murphy

This cover caught my eye because of the blue faces everywhere showing the stress shown and the title caught my eye because this is a well thought out topic

Luke Baldwin

Loved how he said social media is killing you pretty funny.

How fashion Affects Teens Mentally

I liked the magazine cover, it was very simple and straight forward. The article was very informative and I loved how you included details about the various brands teens are interested in. Nice work!

Author: RJ Skeen

Very dark and broody magazine, yet helps me understand the broad message of the article and the way he addresses the audience.

Author: Tanish M.

Article Name: Minimum wage brains

Article: While reading this article the long term consequences I felt could've gone into more detail and I would've liked to learn more about it. The more I read it I wanted to learn about it.

Author: Lizzie Carey

Article: Why are mental health issues important to knowledge during adolescence

I like the cover because it has a sad background and it has an amazing quote.

I like the article because it talks about how mental health issues are important to teens and how it relates to teens

by: Jourden Cole

I am glad that you started by clarifying what perfectionism is it sets a very nice stage for the article and helps me reorganize how I see the rest of the article.

Author: Christian Palacios

The magazine cover was very creative and satisfying's colors.

The article was easy to read as it covered the issue it was addressing and the problems someone could face later on.

Author: Jacob Hullum

This cover caught my eye because of the cartoony character and h the speed he’s going. The title really caught my attention bc teens are typically painted in a bad light for driving so this article surprised me

Author: Duece Prather

I liked this article because it is nice to learn about music because I agree with mostly everything in this article and music does help a lot with stress and it is good to read the details about how it communicate with the brain

Author: Jayuan

Mason Rieger

In this article, Jayuan explains he history of music to a level that really informed me. Not only did I learn about the origin of music, I learned about how music can help and assist our brains.

Author: Slyvia Arth

Your article was incredible to read. Your words and sentences flowed very nicely together, keeping me interested as I read through. I liked that you tied your own personal experiences into the article as well as used scientific facts and data to back you up.

The Odyssey; Neural Symphony

By: Franco Diaz Arena

I liked the cover because it was mysterious and interesting but not so much that I'm overloaded with info.

One thing I liked about the essay was the specific articles provided and I learned that there was a disease called white matter disease common in older people who did not have much physical activity in their younger years.

-L. Couper

This personally conects to me as i can peer pressure alot of people to do thing without knowing if their comforable with it or not so that was nice to know

The article stood out to me because it highlighted how good music can be, especially when it comes to mental wellbeing.

-Sylvia

I like how you connected youre personal experiences with this as it was not only interesting but helpful to connect the education with it flueintly YIPPEE

Author: Mason Rieger

I am interested in this article because I myself have sleeping problems and it’s nice to read about the problems of sleep and how the brain can be affected by it and how you can prevent worse sleep

Author: Davide Sullvian

Outstanding magazine cover as the color choices matched the topic.

The article itself was great and can be seen as reliable for other people reading about depression and other stress factors amongst themselves or a parent figuring out their teen's trauma.

Author: Lee Lee

Your writing is so creative, it kept me entertained the whole time. I loved learning about temporal identity through celebrities. Also I loved the pictures you used, very creative!

Adolescents and Consumerism

I loved the cover and the clothes on the girl. The retro theme was nice. The article was very very informative and I loved how you weaved all the evidence into your sentences, I barely notice. You have well knowledge over the topic I can tell.. Nice work!

Author: Jase Atwood

Title: teen brain driving

This caught my eyes because the car is nice and bright.

His article is interesting because I learned new information. I think that it is factual and other people should read that.

How drugs become an addiction to the brain

Author: Elyan Carmelo Bahena

I liked the magazine cover because it was different from the others and featured a person on it, possibly a teenager who looked tired due to using drugs. It also had very soft colors.

I liked the essay because it was formatted similar to mine and by introducing how the teenage brain is developing and showing how the brain is affected because of that development and drug use. One thing I would recommend is to just add more info because there is more specific information to expand upon. Also no works cited

by: Judson Mann

your use of examples through out the article helps visualize the reasons and results better and help me understand the minimal can also have an affect on the brain, I also found it nice that you used CTE studies to back up your statements.

This article helped me understand how vulnerable teenagers are to mental disorders like depression. This information is concise and useful.

Author: Ben Griffith

In this article, Ben does a great job using statistics to explain his reasoning. He explains how and why teens are the largest group of people that are involved in car crashes.

Title: Peer Power and Social Bridges

1. I loved how you included how the relationships between everyone and teenagers affects the development of teens.

2. I like how your article relates to my article and how the actions of teens also affect their development.

Author: Joshua M.

Teenage mental health is understandably very important to many teenagers. This article covers many things I never even considered when it comes to this topic.

by: Garrett 5th

including physical changes/growth spurts on how people will view their love and who loves them based on changes of an awkward body and the brain's contribution to the viewpoint is interesting.

Author: Mason Hagen

It answers questions I didn't know I had about teen psychology. I didn't know music could have this much of an effect on the mind.

Author: Elyan B.

Drugs are pretty prolific for teens, so it's important they understand the risks through an article like this.

Internet Gaming Disorder: How Does Online Gaming Affect Adolescent's Brains?

I liked the design of the magazine cover with how it specifically focused on gaming in regards to the brain and not any other part of the body.

From the essay, I learned that the problem becomes more and more complex with every new generation as does the technology which makes their excessive time playing and impulsive attitudes worse.

This research was great and well put together. I can tell that a lot of effort went into finding this information.

Title: Adolescent Exercise: How exercise can affect adolescents bodies

I like the cover of this magazine and the overall structure of it, specifically with the depiction of the exercise of running on the front. The cover is well put together.

The essay was very nice, Caden does a great job focusing on the multiplicity of different impacts on Adolescents caused by exercise, whether it be physical, mental, and its benefits.

Very impressed with this research. No need changes.

Title: Driving: The Teen Slayer

The magazine cover has great structure and really gets the message across about the direct object that is impacting adolescents specifically teens.

Ben has made a solid essay, he goes into different variables and gives insight into the culprits plus the impact this is putting in the minds of teens about how to safely drive.

Well done!!!

By; Zander Siegfried

very informal and educational, the poster does catch ones attention on the bright color pallet, and all in all the title does get to the point; well done.

Sincerely, Noah J. Stevens

Reader: Mason H

I liked how you stated the importance of friends.

author: Sylvia Arth

author of comment: Joshua Murphy

I LOVE GAMBLING THE INDOMITABLE SPIRIT OF GAMBLING NEVER LOSES. NEVER.

Author: Alysha Borrego

I like the design on her magazine cover, and her research is focused on teenagers mental health and how it caused by social media. Her magazine cover also bring out her article research.

Reader: Andrew Huber

I can tell you are very experienced with this topic and know what you are talking about. You did a fantastic job.

Insightful info good wording making it easy to understand what I'm reading.

The magazine cover could use some REVAMPING.

Title: Driving: The Teen Slayer

Author: Ben Griffith

I thought the article was very informative and I actually can relate to the effect of friends being in the car. I have a friend who as a driver in general is fine, but with friends is quite a danger. He has been banned from a family car for drifting in it already just because of friends being present. It was cool to see that there is actually research within that area of study.

Author: Mason Hagen

I really liked your poster. It caught my eye instantly and I couldn't stop reading. Keep up the good work!

“Mental Health”

By: Chris DeLagarza

I really loved the graphics within the article.

Author: Steven V.

the cover is legittamantly concerning. really good hook.

Reader: Mason H

I really enjoyed reading your article, and it was very visually appealing .

Author: Jourden Cole

The pictures and organization of the articles are nice. The topic itself is incredibly interesting and my only advice is to be more specific (so instead of saying "they", say what it is) because I got a little confused.

-Keely W.

Author: Madi G

I love her magazine cover it bring positive, and bright colors her article goes base on what happens and what goes on with teenagers on this generation.

Reader: Andrew h

This is a very well written article and I love the cover of your magazine especially the part that says "They simply are not there" its perfect to describe this.

Title: Does Bullying Have Lasting Mental Effects?

I love that you further explained how cyberbullying can affect others and also how it works. And you did great on the explanation for it and all the evidence that goes with it.

The article I read: How Anxiety in teens influences more risk-taking actions. by Callum Lucas.

I like the imagery you used to describe your topic about how anxiety influences teens

to make riskier decisions, the second image on the right really makes you feel how crushing the anxiety can truly be.

Reader: jullian Torres

I like how Malakai uses image through out the text

By, Jaden Winslow

I feel like this article was very help-full and helped me understand there problems a lot more.

Author: RJ Skeen

The statistics you choose to use were fascinating. I really learned a lot about bulling and the affects from it.

Title: Screen Time and Health Issues

I really liked your magazine cover. I also liked the Pictures you used to talk about certain things cause they correspond to what your talking about. The pictures also popped out. I also it was really informative how you talked about how children spending hours on there screen can cause obesity.

Reader: Andrew h

This topic highly interests me and you perfectly captured it in the magazine cover. I also like how you describe the addiction to gambling your article.

Title: How Can Music Effect Disorders and Diseases

Author: Mason Hagen

Seeing that music has a beneficial effect on cancer treatment is very interesting. Knowing that a calmer body can more effectively treat the medical processes is cool to know, and I feel like it would lead to many other benefits too.

By: Will Tisdale

Your title was well done, the photo, a wise choice for people to get what your trying to lay down. I understand everything you had to say in the article and, I as a Christian absolutely agree with you that there are a lot of people from many religions who use said religion to their own benefit and twist it to fit their beliefs, it is a constant problem, but trust me when i say that using the morals from a religion isn't as easy to put on to children or even a family in this modern day in age; other than that i would say your article was well done, and was a very interesting view point on the other side of religion.

Sincerely, Noah J. Stevens

Author: RJ Skeen

Title: Does Bullying have Lasting Mental Effects

I like the overall layout and theme of this one.

Author: Jourden Cole

Reader: Georgia Miller

Awesome magazine cover, it caught my eye and made me want to read your article!!

Good organization of your research, loved how you mentioned the possible good effects but restated how hard perfection is to achieve and such... great job!! :D

Title: How Military Training and War effects Teenagers?

I love how you even give the simple words and the definition to them to give more of a better explanation, And I love the simplicity of your explanation, It makes it less stressful to try and read.

Author: Ashlee English

i thought that your research was an interesting topic and i couldn't stop reading it. Your magazine caught my attention right away.

Likes uses of imageS

Reader: jullian torres

Author: Christian Palacios

Cover positive: The shades of purple were really appealing.

Article positive: I like the way the author uses evidence for their claims, they fit in nicely.

"How Anxiety in Teens Influences More Risk Taking Actions." By Callum Lucas

I wanted to read this article due to the Jujutsu Kaisen cover of Sukuna and Mahoraga which is very eye-catching to me.

I liked how you gave multiple perspectives on anxiety and how parents have affected them. i also liked how you included a story in the beginning in order to make it seem more relatable.

Author: Cooper Dye

Title: How Military Training and War Effects teenagers

I liked the theme and facts about this one and I was fascinated by the statistics.

Author: Steven V.

The cover is kind of spooky, but I am a big fan of it. The pictures are super cool and I like that you used one from America Psycho because it is a good representation of your topic.

-Keely W.

By: Ayden Thurman

Your title and front photo were very well chosen, the article beginning and overall format was good, and overall i would say that your article was very well written and pretty factual, however i would recommend you to put in a little more effort in finding stone cold reliable sources; everything els was great though.

Sincerely, Noah J. Stevens

Author: Caden Ohara

Title: How Exercise can Effect Adolescents Bodies

I liked how this one was very similar to mine and we had some of the same facts and effects.

“In The Mind of a Gambler”

By: Sylvia Arth

I really enjoyed that you used the story of you winning, and subsequently losing, as an introduction into the decision making topic.

Like this use of powerful cover image

Reader: jullian Torres

Author: Jett Kinslow

Your research about online learning is very interesting. You clearly stated the pros and cons of learning and the effects it can have on students.

Author: Malakai E.

How does gaming affect teenage behavior.

The cover got my attention because it has a lot of bright colors I like the background in combination with the text. Overall very nice cover.

The essay was very well structured and got to the point. The ideas this person said were very well thought out. Great essay!!

"How Anxiety in Teens Influences Risk Taking"

Author: Callum Lucas

I was drawn this article because it goes over a serious subject. I really enjoyed this article because of the different connections it was able to make and I had no idea these two issues "risk taking" and "anxiety" were connected in any way. Good Job.

By, Jaden Winslow

I feel like this article helps me understand why we need sleep and helps me realize I need more sleep as a teen.

Author: Bryleigh Bartow

I really enjoyed the cover she made i think it was really creative. I liked the way the article was laid out, it was very informative and made sense.

Author: Ashlee English

Cover positive: The image set up what the article is going discuss really well.

Article positive: This article describes both positive and negative effects well.

Author: Caleb Zapalac

Reader: Georgia Miller

Super cool cover! The art caught my eye.

Very interesting topic, I hadn't thought about it before!! Very thought-provoking article!

By Strider Williams

Reader: Furqaan Joyo

I like your article because its the first time I'm hearing that playing a team sport can actually help a teen, like when you say it can even make you happier when you play the sport, I also learned it can do things like help with quality of sleep.

Author: Bryce Johns

Your magazine cover jumped out at me and i liked your topic and the picture you used. The essay was well written and i liked how interesting it was.

How will fitness benefit the brain

Sean Nolan

I like the cover cute colors😘

Title: Why are Mental Health Issues Important To Acknowledge During Adolescence?

I like the look of the article and the design you chose, It helps gives off the mood of wanting to cheer others to understand the importance and care for the mental health of adolescence and giving spotlight to mental illness in them.

Author: Mose A.

Metal is my favorite genre of music so I really enjoyed reading this. I like that you talked about the good and bad that comes with listening to it because people have very different perspectives on it and you addressed both. Great photos too.

-Keely Walters

"Teen Brain Development in Relation to Crime." By Emberlyn Ashley

I chose this article because I already watch a lot of crime documentaries and shows so I was interested in what the article was about.

I like how everything is separated and gives information on what that section is about but also stays on the topic of your question/researchwritten, it is very well writtan.

WHY ARE TEENS SO PRESSED OVER BEING "PERFECT" 😒

I really liked your magazine cover, I liked how it pops out among the other. I liked how I know understand why Teens want to be perfect cause they want other people to appreciate what we do.

Author: Eden Kosacz

How does junk food affect brains of adolescents Vs healthy food

The cover got my attention because it shows the bright colors of vegetables on the white background. Overall very nice cover.

The essay made some really good points. Their essay made me rethink my choices. Great essay!

What happens from a lack of sleep as an adolescent?

By: Tyler Evans

I liked that you gave a fact that hooks in potential readers to make them wanna chick on the article. It gave a lot of information about sleep that I didn't know before. Overall, it was a very well written and interesting article.

Article: What are the effects of too much time online?

By: By Owen Ramirez

The cover is easy to look at and sets itself apart from the covers next to it.

I like the images used throughout the article.

Author: Amber Mattson

Your magazine had bright colors and the picture really drew me in. Your essay was great and i liked the research of your essay.

"How Video Games Affect Social Development in Teens"

By Aryan B

Cover postive: Very good setup and make sense with the article

Article postives: Gives a good explanation of their question

"Why Aren't Teens Sleeping?" By Ava Huber

I chose this article because me and many of my friends can relate due to how little sleep we all get, the picture also caught my eye.

I love how you added your own personal experience, it made the article super relatable and not just something that gets straight to the point. It was refreshing to read and I enjoyed how you worded everything.

Magazine cover: Very clean magazine cover and in nice detail

Article: Very organized and nice pictures

I chose this as it's a very common problem

by Steven V.

Read by Caleb Haden

I thought your article was both very interesting and written in a compelling way. your writing feels very personal and it seems like you truly care about the topic. I think you could maybe use different/better photos though? To me, it seemed like the photos were mostly either uninspired or unrelated. Otherwise, it was great!

Author: Bryce Johns

How does sports affect the development of the adolescents brain.

I like the cover of this article because it shows UT player. That caught my attention. I also like the color scheme of the cover.

This article was very well structure and made a lot of good points. I enjoyed my read of this article very good job!

Reader: Duece Prather

I really liked the topic because it's talking about music being positive. I also really liked the pictures displayed the topic of the paragraph

How dose religous trauma affect the teen brain

by: Whitney Warshack

Overall, i really loved the article. despite the jarring topic, i loved the way it was written. it gave information i didn't know before about the subject.

Daryl Guzman

Magazine cover: Good cover connecting with the article

Article: Good article to read and connects with each and the pictures being used are relevant

Dan M

Interesting cover for magazine caught a lot of attention.

by Parker Brown

Read by Caleb Haden

I overall thought this article was very informative and gave me a great inside into the juvenile prison system. Personally, I would have made a better introduction because you kind of jumped into it without introducing the reader to the concepts. But besides that, it was great!

Article: Effects of Social Media on teenage behavior and mentality by Albert Carrillo

The cover is amazing. Theres so many pictures and it is so appealing. Drew me in as soon as i saw it. THe research is very good and summed up perfectly.

Article: What happens from lack of sleep as an adolescent?

By: Tyler Evans

I really like the art style and text placement in the cover.

I’m interested in the topics presented in each section.

Author: Neil Barton

I really like this topic i think Neil did a great job on informing the reader. There was nothing left to question, he hit any question i couldve asked about the topic. i liked that he showed us whats its like when you have ADHD and whast problems come with it.

How AI effects children at learning by

Isaac V

I like how it's short and has a lot of detail

It stays on topic and supports the theme/topic

How dose gaming affect teenage behavior

By: Malakai E.

Overall, i liked the way the information was presented and written. i learned a lot about how gaming can affect the teenage brain.

by Deuce P.

Read by Caleb Haden

I really liked the topic of this article and I think you discussed it in a mature and informed way. I especially liked your intro, because it explained some of the concepts of the article in a really natural way. I think your conclusion could have been a bit beefier and you could have drawn more conclusions from what you had learned. Otherwise, great job!

Author: Neil Barton

Reader: Georgia Miller

Super informative! Great job! Well organized and easy to read while staying interesting!

Video Games V The Brain

It is very informative and has many information

How it relates to modern day

by Caleb Haden

Read by Mason Howard

I really liked the topic of this article and agree with the statistics and points made in the article. I think this topic and dangerous and should be covered

Driving: The Teen Slayer

The cover is very appealing and cool. Caught my eye and i had to read. The paragraphs were very well flowing and connected. Overall, enjoyed the essay and cover. Enjoyed it all.

Article: How video games affect social development in teens

By: Aryan Boujabadi

I like the use of gray on the cover, it contrasts with the purple and blue of most others in that section.

I like how this article has a section advising parents about preventing video game addictions.

by Tyler Evans

Read by Mason Howard

not getting enough sleep can really damage the development of our minds, when we sleep we grow in just about every way, and skipping out on sleep can have so many consequences. This article is incredibly informative and I'm glad I read it.

Author: Jett Kinslow

I think your cover was so wonderful and well thought out. Your reaserch was extremely wonderful and well spoken. You were informative and got to the point. I enjoyed reading this.

The development of a psychopath: Steven V.

Most interesting topic and article i have ever seen. I never even looked at something like that before. The cover caught my eye immediately and made me want to read. THe article overall was very cool and i would definitely recommend this to anyone looking for a good and different read. Well done.

Teen brain development in relation to crime by Emberlyn A

The cover and the colors really caught my attention. The human brain isnt fully developed until 25, and even then they are still not as mature as they should.

Teenage Brain Biology Development

I liked the simple look of the magazine, also very straight forward. Loved the article and how you included different aspects to why teenagers act the way they do. Was easy to read! <3

Author: Tatum Honeycutt

I thought your magazine cover was very colorful and eye catching. It stands out and makes you want to look at it and see what it’s about. Then the article itself is very well written and contains a lot of helpful information. Overall good magazine cover and article good job.

Author:Alex Malone

I love the image on the front of your article. The image of the money and all of the colors catches the eye and makes you want to read more to see what it’s about. I also like the article itself, it is to the point and contains helpful information.

the cover of your magazine was awesome and your view point was also understanding and easy to follow

Sincerely Garrett Cremeans

Author: Bryce Johns

I love the image of the football player on the front. It is very captivating and makes it feel like a real sports illustrated magazine. The article itself is very well written and it sounds like this is something you truly know a lot about. GOOD JOB.

The cover draws attention as its black and white and the background picture really pops out. The topic itself is interesting and could have potential uses in the future.

-Chan

I struggle with this problem and it was eye open thank you for your insite

Sincerely Garrett Cremeans

as someone who is in auto this was great to read and your cover was awesome

sincerely Garrett Cremeans

I thought your article was very well written, and easy to understand. Your cover was also very well done, and was what drew me to read your article.

- Caden Ohara

The cover is great and does a good job of conveying emotion about the topic. The topic is also interesting and well-written

-Grant Jackson

That cover is awesome and the article was cool asf

Pretty good cover, and the topic of anxiety was well covered and was overall good in my opinion!

I really enjoyed this article, similar to mine, we both wrote about sports and there effects on the adolescent brain.

-Caden Ohara

Cover was cool and the article cooler

the magazine cover got my attention really quickly and stood out compared to the others. I really liked the creativity and matching of colors on the magazine.

Corbyn Orlikowski

the cover was easy to look at and the article was informational

Great perspective as well as personal experience on a very life-altering topic

-Owen Ramirez

The magazine cover looks good and helped draw me in to read it. I also really liked the video and your article. The article is short and to the point

-Grant Jackson

By: Parker B.

Juvenile Prison

This article is well organized and each section is explained simply so the audience understands exactly what the author is trying to say. The cover of the article caught my eye because of the bright colors. I learned that YIM is an acronym that means Youth-Initiated Mentoring.

i learned how sports can cause stress or anxiety on the adolescent brain because you are worried on how you will preform during your game or competition.

corbyn orlikowski

I really like the cover of the magazine. It caught my attention and caused me to want to read your article. I also like how you have pictures throughout your page along with a graph. The article is well written as well

-Grant Jackson

By: Sean Nolan

Physical Activity and the Adolescent Brain

This article was organized so that the audience could find the information that they are interested in. The cover caught my attention because of the different photos. I learned that fitness can reduce brain fog in teens.

By: Liya Gomez

How Screen Time Affects Young Consumers

The cover caught my eye because of how colorful the picture is. This article is well written and organized. I learned that being on your phone and other technology for too long can stunt your brain development.

The cover really caught my eye and the article was really nice to read, great job.

-Matthew Dippel

The description of feral child syndrome is very clear and concise. This article was very informative and I learned a lot. This taught me about some cases and the condition of these poor children.

-Ellis T.

I found your article interesting, great job

_ Gabriele Oddo

the cover is great and does a good job all the article is very interesting.

_Gabriele Oddo

I really like your article because I discovered things I didn't know before, great job

_Gabriele Oddo

I enjoyed the cover of your article it really caught my eye. After reading your article I became more informed on the mental health side of teens.

-Havana H

I enjoyed the cover of your article it really caught my eye. After reading your article I became more informed on how politics and the teen brain connect.

-Havana H.

The magazine cover really captured my attention and the amount of new information I learned was really interesting.

-Izzy Gallagher

Title: The Cost Of A Hit

I really like the title of the magazine and right as i looked it caught my eye.

Very well formated and the design is amazing.

-Bryce J

The black and white magazine cover really stood out among the rest and the quote really reflected what the story is about.

-Izzy Gallagher

The big quote and picture on the magazine cover really drew my attention to the article.

-Izzy Gallagher

I really related to your section about anxiety, anxiety is a really big part of why some kids fail in sports and it should be recognized more.

-Isaiah Scott

This artical was a really easy read. I feel like you could have added more material though.

-Luke G

The first impression of the cover is clear and understandable. I enjoyed the magazine because I relate to it. Author makes a clear statement and a valuable input of information.

-Franco

This was a nice and informative read. The main body was dense and fulfilling.

-Luke G

Title: Physical Activity and the Adolescent Brain

The magazine is put together wonderfully and has a lot of information.

The pictures used are a perfect touch to the article and give it more depth.

-Bryce J

I loved the cover of your article because it is very minimalistic with very good font types and font sizes. Everything is very proportionally correct and it is very pleasing to the eye. I also loved the article just as much because it helped me learn about parasocial relationships and how they work and the adolescents being affected by them.

-AU

Title: Mental Health

The information on the magazine is very helpful and gave me a little preveiw into the article.

The article is formated perfectly and the colors give it a great amount of contrast.

-Bryce J

I thought the artical was informative and dense. Good job!

-Luke G

what is adhd?

i feel that the colors are vibrant and the pop well together I found as a great resource and it helped me learn a lot very informative. - Myilani Thompson

I found her article very interesting because it went into depth detail about a topic that we usually don't talk about because no one thinks about it that way

I love the art style of the cover being comic-inspired and I love the idea of E3 magazine being the superhero going to save the people being abused or at least shed light on it. Furthermore, I love how the article is very easy to read and it is very straight forward with the points and it doesn't beat around the bush.

-AU

I loved the thrash metal-inspired cover of your article coming from the text and the picture of the concert. I think your cover perfectly embodies metal. Furthermore,

I love your article because you address the stereotypes that lots of different people have about rock and metal in general and prove it wrong.

-AU

How does screen time affect the Mental Health?

I feel that this shows me the statistics that I have seen before and change my point of view on the subject

- myilani thompson

Radically Queer: How Does Adolescent Brain Biology Relate to LGBTQ+ Youth?

It gives us a look into a community that you might not recognize if you are not a part of, the site is well done and has a lot of contrast.

It is a article about teen trying to make everything perfect. It also said that social media make this being worth

---Shufei L.

The magazine cover piqued my interest and I really wanted to learn more about the shocking statistics of child labor. Unfortunately, there was no article, but, I'm sure the statistics were shocking.

-Parker B

I used to work a job and I felt like I improved my work ethic, so, I wanted to see if there was a correlation between work ethic and a job. The article was easy to understand and kept me interested.

-Parker Brown

Your cover was really great at depicting what your article was about. Child labor is a very important topic to talk about and you did a great job talking about it.

Callum Lucas

i am extremely disappointed by the lack of article, i was very intrigued and determined to learn the absolute devastating effect of child labor, only to find out that there was no article. i am assuming he forgot to put it in the link, what a silly goose.

but the magazine cover on the other hand was absolutely elegant, i would bow down to that article cover, for my lord hayden king. we thank you sir, king.

Reader: Chris D.

I thought your article was really good. it gave a lot of information about mental health and what it is. Good Job

im only saying good job and great work just because of the blue emojis didnt even read it

read by noah t

Really liked the cover page. Essay was well written and organized.

The article was well written and put-together. I learned about the effect of impulse control and how money affects obesity. Great job.

-Parker Brown

It's nice to read about the Satanic Panic because it feels very forgotten despite it being very recent in history.

-Moth A

I LOVE the man on the cover, what a fine specimen. From the sparkle in his eyes to the rectangular nature of his name tag. He is perfect. The article was so-so.

-Hayden King

you single handily want to make me go to juvenile prison. it was a very easy read, but it was geared in the wrong direction. okay tootles.

I thought the magazine cover was awesome and the article was great.

-Zander Siegfried

Reader: Chris D.

I think your article is great. it had a lot of good information

10/10 very mentally healthy

-Hayden King

Your article was really informing on the juvenile prison system. it really made me want to go learn more about juvenile but also the prison system more.

Callum Lucas

I really liked your article because I can relate to it and I agree with all the topics you mentioned. I liked that it is well organized and easy to understand.

- Delia Garcia A.

This article made me aware of the influence that anxiety has on a teen. Really enjoyed the video too. I also learned about the parental affect on the teens brain. Great article.

-Parker Brown

my health is mental now, i know how my brain works since hayden's passing.

I though the magazine cover was nice and I liked the idea of the article

read by alex m

I liked the cover page and the information of the essay. Well organized and with very interesting information.

-Delia Garcia Alegria

I though he made a great magazine and I though his article was nice

Splendid! 🤰

-Hayden king

I really like how it looks like soundwaves connecting to the brain, because it kinda is really like what you wrote about which is what this is about

read by alex m

this article really showes the effect that anxiety has on teens and made me lucky that I don't have that, so thank you for this article

read by alex malone

Consumerism is a pretty common problem as of recent times, and it's cool to see people talk about it.

-Moth A

Reader: Chris D.

I think your article was great. it was really interesting

I've always liked anything related to the brain and how it works, and tbh I really liked your essay and all the information you provided.

-Delia G.

good stuff 10/10 agreed?

Your article on teenage work effort really was enlightening to me as I work as a teenager. The different view points really let me see what work does to a teen. splendid.

Callum Lucas

read by noah t

Very informational and organized. I like the detail and the structure.

The magazine got me hooked and made me want to ready it. I thought your article was great aswell

-Braden E

I thought your magazine cover really drawed me in and made me want to read. Your article was also very good I now understand dealing mental health more.

-Braden E

I like your topic a lot and wanted to read it and really liked your article, it was very informing and helped me understand how lack of sleep can effect the brain.

-Braden E

depression among teens

davids cover had more of a darker theme to it, its an important topic and i think ppl shld tlk abt it more, it had some good information in it

“which sport works best for you”

isaiah’s font was big

i think this is good for those who are unsure about what could work well for them, i thought it was well written

the cost of a hit

i thought the cover was cool

and the topic is good for those who need support on there side to understand what’s really worth it

I really liked the magazine cover and your article was thoughtful, I enjoyed reading it

-amari moore

The article was very detailed and contained everything that was mentioned in the title

-amari moore

His article was very well put together and told me a lot about how anxiety affects teens. The cover was also organized and well put together.

-amari moore

This was a very thorough article that demonstrated multiple examples of parasocial relationships. It also described the different levels of obsession which really helps the reader understand better. I also like how Sofia describes a healthy parasocial relationship.

-Ellis Taylor

I like how he gave multiple examples of why teens are sleep deprived and didn't just blame it on electronics. He added multiple statistics which make it easier to understand and put in perspective.

-Ellis Taylor

One thing that caught my attention was the cover of his magazine because it was one of the only teen brain development while driving ones and he used a bright orange car aswell as his article was factual and giving me insight on knowledge I dont already know.

-Jaydn Jacsaint

I chose this article because the poster was very eye catching aswell as the article wasnt over informal aswell as it was still good read but there was alot of mispelling atleast that I noticed. 7/10 read

-Jaydn Jacsaint

I chose this not only for the eye catching poster but because as a friend of Jayuan this is a side of him I haven't seen before it was a very good read and I enjoyed it highly

-Jaydn Jacsaint