https://padlet.com/23egoldstein/a5s4uvl08job en-us 2018-02-01 15:01:26 UTC 2018-03-28 14:23:06 UTC hello@padlet.com 23efang https://padlet.com/23egoldstein/a5s4uvl08job/wish/236956900 Hi Ella! I really enjoyed your essay and how your warrants clearly explained the data points. I also enjoyed how you were able to lead me in in a attention-grabbing hook. In the future, I suggest incorporating a stronger ending that makes the reader want to take action. But overall, your research simulation was excellent! ]]> 2018-03-01 15:19:22 UTC https://padlet.com/23egoldstein/a5s4uvl08job/wish/236956900 23mcutaia https://padlet.com/23egoldstein/a5s4uvl08job/wish/237400143 -Mia Cutaia 
Hi Ella! Your suspense narrative was incredible! Your intro was so detailed and descriptive, that it pulled me in wanting to read more. For example, my favorite part was, "Waves below fill with the silence of the river. Leaves fall into the rocky current a mile away and crash down every so slightly, creating ripples. Colors of all are floating and filling the trees. One strays off to the river bed. It floats slower than the others." Additionally, I really liked your suspense narrative, because your entire story was filled with lots of advanced vocabulary and descriptions. In the future, I would suggest to look over your grammar because you had some minor errors. But overall you suspense narrative was amazing!]]> 2018-03-02 14:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/23egoldstein/a5s4uvl08job/wish/237400143 23jnavarro https://padlet.com/23egoldstein/a5s4uvl08job/wish/246911683 Hi Ella! I really enjoyed your Magazine Article! I really liked the description you provided at the beginning of the piece, "Everyone in the airport needed to transport quickly as the hazy, crazy, chaos continued." I could easily picture a crowded airport. I also really enjoyed the overall idea of your piece. The idea was very that pronouncing Arkansas wrong was illegal was very creative. Next time, just check over your punctuation, there are a couple commas missing. Overall, great job! -Jessica N.]]> 2018-03-28 14:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/23egoldstein/a5s4uvl08job/wish/246911683