Nur Aida Sakinah binti Muhammad Sukri

Matrix Number : 19DAT24F1065

Alia Nazira Binti Md Amri

Matrix Number : 19DAT24F1077

Putri Nur Irish Sofyea Binti Bahari

Matrix Number : 19DAT24F1071

Rabiatul Adawiyah Binti Mohammad Zamri

Matrix Number : 19DAT24F1080

Script is too general, your headline indicate "at least one man" as the keyword and I expect your news script contain detail story about the man and how he involves in the accident.

I suggest aside of this tragic story of the uprooted tree, you add an even sad story of the victim..maybe he is still young and only recently become a father but the tragedy left the 3month old baby lost his father in this unwanted event...

I approve the headline.

I approve of the headline

No news script. I would like to see the full news.. what information is highlighted. How serious is the injury?Doc view on the injury?

This headline will leave you a challenge to present the media that originally yours. but im excited to see how you will portray your content.

You mention in your storyboard to interview aina..what is her role? why she is selected to be interviewd? where is your script. how do I know whether the script is originally yours and not copied from the internet.

I approve this headline with slight changes “26 students including staff at Muadzam Shah Polytechnic suffered from food poisoning”

Relevence: Environment information is newsworthy and relevance for students and citizens that are studying and stay in university, especially Polytechnic Muazdam Shah. This is because they can help raise awareness about environment protection. From this issue students and citizens can learn about waste reduction, recycling and composting a culture of responsibility- What does this has to do with your headline????? copy and paste??

Your script is out of context.

I approve the headline with slight change.

Visual presentation enable to enlighten me on how you want to carry out your news.

Script and Interview questions are ok.

Why Government Provide Free Device for Students To Support Online Learning during Pandemic. This headline is ok but issue about pendamic is no longer recent. News should be something that is newly happened. Please propose new headline.

I approve this topic.

Very good storyline, proposal presentation give me a clear overview of how you want to conduct your news.

I approve this headline

Story board is to general, unable to picturize how are you going to deliver your news.

Script still not being fixed as what has been commented in class

Approve the headline with slight changes : Police hut three teenagers for violent act killing a cat.

I don't understand your storyboard. Not portraying clear idea of how you want to present your news.

Script is too general does not deliver enough information

I approve the headline.

I don't understand what do you want to display in frame 3? article? Story board seems not clear.

Headline mention about khairul aming but in script is totally different story.

I approve the headline with slight changes- A TEENAGERS TOOK HIS/HER THEIR HER OWN LIFE AFTER BEING SUBJECTED TO HARSH CRITICISM AND BULLYING BY NETIZENS ON SOCIAL MEDIA

The script is too general..how does the incident happen? who involved? what is the chronology of the case?

I approve this headline.

Please ensure that you have your original work in this news not taken from other sources and make it yours.

Good effort to draft your proposal.

I approve this topic the figure made me wonder how many candidates for SPM in a year if those who do not want to study further are up to 300,000.

Why do you think this news is worth to be broadcast in TV. What is so hype about it?

The heavy workload of what? assignment? part time job? to what extent it becomes too serious is not being mentioned in the script. Issues in MIT about the students is not being reported in detail.

This is article NOT news. Who is the subject that you are reporting? merely an article that talking about mental strain generally in Malaysia. No factual information, chronology of incident.

Please propose new headline.

I want the whole team come and meet me.

Script is out..plus proposal is totally NOT as what have been told to do in class

A student commits vandalism by scratching the wall of the kamsis using spray- Is it worth to highlight this kind of new on TV.. seems like a small issue to be reported to HEP.

Please propose new one

I approve the headline

Good organization of visual presentation

POLYTECHNIC STUDENT RECIEVES RM35,000 SCHOLARSHIP AFTER WINNING
   ADOBE CERTIFIED PROFFESIONAL WORLD CHAMPIONSHIP COMPETITION.

The headline said scholarship but the script mention that the money is the winning prize they receive.. which one? winning prize is not a scholarship..scholarship is when you are sponsored by a authority..news is missleading

Fix the script..

I approve this headline

ensure it is originally a news constructed by you and not 100% taken from other sources

Please insert detail about the suicide attemt. How did it happen? who saw it? condition of the suspect during the suicide attempt? any witness? where did it happen.

I don't quite get the meaning of grooming there.

I don't get the idea even when reading the script.

She got groomed like how??? suddenly you jump to the result that she is depressed. what? where? when? how? please insert these wh question in your news report

I approve the headline. but im quite lost reading your script? who involve? what happened to the suspect? when it happen? how it happen is not being mention.

Your script is too general. Only talk surface about traumatrauma in what aspect?

I approve the headline.

please proceed