https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck 1. Write your name 2. Write an old sentence from your quick write that doesn't have a literary device. 3. Change that sentence and make it better with a literary device. en-us 2017-09-20 15:37:26 UTC 2017-09-22 17:29:42 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189473044 Mrs. Curtis
People walked by me really fast.
Like a herd of bulls, the people pounded the pavements of NewYork City. (Simile)]]> 2017-09-20 18:06:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189473044 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735226 I was going to fall off the cliff.

I was going to frighteningly fall off the cliff that created an entrance to a monstourous dungeon filled with dead souls calling for help.
(Alliteration and Metaphor and Hyperbole)]]> 2017-09-21 13:31:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735226 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735248 We sank to the bottom of the pool.
The frigid water pulled me down to the bottom of the never ending trench
(Personification and metaphor)]]> 2017-09-21 13:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735248 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735414 I saw so many cupcakes!
I saw millions of cool cupcakes
(Hyperbole and alliteration)]]> 2017-09-21 13:31:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735414 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735424 There are Lego's on the floor

There were a million Lego's scattered all over the floor and were poking our feet like a million pins

(Simile and Hyberbole)

📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌

]]> 2017-09-21 13:31:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735424 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735575 My phone rang  and I answered and my boss yelled at me 

My phone yelled at me to pick it up my bosses voice is like a lions roar

(Personification,Simile) 

Hi]]> 2017-09-21 13:32:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735575 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735585 Pew pew went the lasers
Lasers,like birds,flew through the air and crashed onto there unlucky targets with a 'Pew!!!' sound
Simile,Imagery]]> 2017-09-21 13:32:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735585 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735671 I had to get through a crowd of people.                 I had to get through a crowd of busy bees.       (Metaphor,Alliteration)

]]> 2017-09-21 13:32:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735671 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735719 When I was at softball practice I hit the softball really hard.                           "Crackkkk!!"was the sound of the bat when I hit the softball like a pro. (simile and anamonopia )]]> 2017-09-21 13:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735719 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735936 I climbed the fridge and grabbed the van( simile , alliteration )

I climbed the fridge like Donald trump And hit the hard ground but landed on my feet like a cat 🐱 ]]> 2017-09-21 13:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189735936 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736093 2017-09-21 13:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736093 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736099 I have a hat. ]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736099 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736132 I was walking at the mall.
I was walking at the crazy packed mall like it was a celebrity meet up.
(Simile and imagery)]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736132 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736156 I am really tired.💤
I was so tired like a tired tiger.
(Simlie and alliteration)]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736156 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736296 I shot a three pointer🏀🏀🏀🏀🏀🏀
The ball wanted to go in when I shoot the Easy breezy three pointer🏀.

(Personification and Metaphor)👀

]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736296 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736315 I watched their sticks pound on the drums.
I watched their sticks dance through the air, like acrobats flying through the air!
(Personification and simile) ]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736315 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736322 I sounded horrible. 
The sound of the piano sounded like a screeching cat, it was a gloomy atmosphere after playing the piece.
Simile, imagery]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736322 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736337 It was hot that summer day, but it was nice,

It was a blissful beach, although it felt as if someone was boiling me alive.
(Alliteration, hyperbole)]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736337 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736536 The Great Wolf Lodge that is at Destin.

The Geat Wolf Lodge that is in destin it looked as big as 1,000 car together.

(Simile,hyperbole)]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736536 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736542 I am riding a unicorn.

I am playing football with my unicorn. It's hair is fluffy as cotton candy

]]> 2017-09-21 13:33:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736542 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736734 The beach had two big rocks
Walking to the white snow colored beach there were two rocks the size of a planet.
(Imer and hyperbole)]]> 2017-09-21 13:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736734 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736759 The beach was hot that summer day, but it was nice. 

It was a blissful beach, although it seemed like someone was boiling me alive
(Alliteration, hyperbole)]]> 2017-09-21 13:34:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736759 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736889 I went to the Destin beach. I went to the Destin beach for a millionth time when I went in the water I saw fishes dancing in the water (hyperbole personification)]]> 2017-09-21 13:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189736889 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189737398 Da 🇦🇨🇳]]> 2017-09-21 13:35:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189737398 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189737741 My mom and I were on a walk around the neighborhood hood

My mom and I were on a walk around the very damaged neighborhood it was like a filled dirty dumpster.
(Simily,aliteration,imagery.)]]> 2017-09-21 13:35:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189737741 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189738094 We started having water leakage from a hole in the roof

Rain started pouring through a whole in the roof like it's going to  flood in our big brick house
(Simile alleteration)

]]> 2017-09-21 13:36:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189738094 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189738138 1. I screamed very loud.
2. My screeching scream was as loud as an eagle.

(Simile and Alliteration)]]> 2017-09-21 13:36:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189738138 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189738455

]]> 2017-09-21 13:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189738455 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189738489 There was a big brown dog that was singing. 
The dog was as big as a mouse and was dancing around singing. ]]> 2017-09-21 13:37:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189738489 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189739502 2017-09-21 13:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189739502 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189739566 I went to Disney.
I went to Disney for the 10000000th time Disney was as big as a city.]]> 2017-09-21 13:38:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189739566 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189739890 Claudia
I was on my way to the beach.
I was on my way to the sunny golden sanded beach a the water was as blue as a crystal.
(Imagery & Simile)

🏝🏖]]> 2017-09-21 13:39:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189739890 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189741978 Milk]]> 2017-09-21 13:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189741978 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189743183 Hyperbole]]> 2017-09-21 13:45:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189743183 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189743193 2017-09-21 13:45:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189743193 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189743516

]]> 2017-09-21 13:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189743516 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189745071 the icy mountain was cold as my sisters heart]]> 2017-09-21 13:48:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189745071 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189745520 It was raining
It was a thunderstorm and we heard a Big Bang we heard thunder the rain was as cold as dry ice(simile, odamadapia)]]> 2017-09-21 13:49:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189745520 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189745925 1000 crickets came into the classroom, a made up person became real (hyperbole) (personification) Jamie Bannerman]]> 2017-09-21 13:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189745925 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189746807 The sand was hot 
The sand was a hot stove beneath my feet,the sun we like I was being cooked 
(Simile & metaphor)

]]> 2017-09-21 13:51:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189746807 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189747101 My eyes are as bright as a Diamond]]> 2017-09-21 13:51:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189747101 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189747862 The water was cold.🐟
The water wanted to freeze me to death because it was as cold as absolute zero.🐟
 
(Hyperbole and simile)👀]]> 2017-09-21 13:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189747862 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189749823 I like cookies]]> 2017-09-21 13:57:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189749823 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189750227 It was a very hot day today.

The sun was blazing like the mane of a lion and danced across the ocean- like sky. 

Simile , personification, imagery

]]> 2017-09-21 13:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189750227 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824493 Snowman, the aamazing jumping horse, jumped the jump.  

Snow man flew over the jump like a snow Fox.]]> 2017-09-21 16:10:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824493 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824586 It was ]]> 2017-09-21 16:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824586 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824792 The heard the rain.

The rain souned like rocks slapping the window.

(Smile, presonifcation)]]> 2017-09-21 16:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824792 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824823 It was hot
 
It was so hot I felt like I was standing on a million suns.]]> 2017-09-21 16:11:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824823 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824847 The ocean was very pretty

The ocean shone bright like a diamond, glimmering like glass in the summer sun!]]> 2017-09-21 16:11:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824847 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824905 2017-09-21 16:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824905 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824914 The jumping beans went up and down. 

The jumping beans danced on the table like they were having a dance party. 
(personification and simile)]]> 2017-09-21 16:11:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189824914 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825097 It was a bright day on my birthday.

It was the brightest day ever on my birthday.
(Hyperbole)



]]> 2017-09-21 16:12:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825097 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825131 2017-09-21 16:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825131 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825142 We ate the popcorn.

We happily popped the perfect popcorn into our mouths as we sat in the dark theatre as if we were inside the movie.

(Alliteration and simile)]]> 2017-09-21 16:12:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825142 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825230 The water was cool 

The water was dancing rapidly to me


]]> 2017-09-21 16:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825230 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825330 2017-09-21 16:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825330 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825334 2017-09-21 16:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825334 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825409 The wind was so strong 
The wind was as strong as Dwayne The Rock Johnson]]> 2017-09-21 16:12:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825409 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825449 1. I ran as fast I could. 2. I ran as fast as a cheetah trying to catch their prey.
 
 
 ]]> 2017-09-21 16:12:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825449 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825474 It was so hot 

It was a blazing hot microwave that danced and laughed at us ]]> 2017-09-21 16:12:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825474 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825543 I was going to my cousins house 
It was Saturday night and I felt like I had fireworks going off in my brain I was really excited for the time to go to my cousins house]]> 2017-09-21 16:12:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825543 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825865 I heard thunder and lightning 

The thunder roared like a lion in the 
Jungle
( simile)


]]> 2017-09-21 16:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825865 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825909 The bus was hot
The bus was like a billion degrees ]]> 2017-09-21 16:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189825909 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826238 I ]]> 2017-09-21 16:14:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826238 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826353 2017-09-21 16:14:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826353 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826452 This was a big mess
I look so beautiful,said the elephant 

(Metaphor and personification)]]> 2017-09-21 16:14:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826452 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826484 It was so hot
 
That it felt like a million suns raining down on us]]> 2017-09-21 16:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826484 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826551 It was so cold

It was -1,000,000,000 degrees outside 

(Hyperbole)]]> 2017-09-21 16:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826551 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826630 I chased the car .

It felt like I chased the car for a mile

Hyerbole]]> 2017-09-21 16:15:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826630 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826784 I ran a lap

I felt like I had ran millions of laps.

Hyperbole]]> 2017-09-21 16:15:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826784 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826890 Due to my dog I got all muddy .

Due to my dog I fell and dropped the leash and after casing him , I felt like I was a spaghetti on a plate all messy ]]> 2017-09-21 16:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189826890 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189827041 2017-09-21 16:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189827041 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189827227 The ocean was pr]]> 2017-09-21 16:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189827227 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189827360 I am better than kaden]]> 2017-09-21 16:16:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189827360 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189827504 I ate the candy
The candy jumped in my mouth

]]> 2017-09-21 16:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189827504 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189828046 2017-09-21 16:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189828046 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189828506 I love to play volleyball 

]]> 2017-09-21 16:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189828506 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189828659 I threw the football in the air

The football flew in the air like a plane]]> 2017-09-21 16:19:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189828659 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829183 1) Jeffy hates green beans. 2) Jeffy hates green beans like as if it was trying to kill him.]]> 2017-09-21 16:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829183 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829195 I walked home from my new school 

I takes years to get home walking from school]]> 2017-09-21 16:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829195 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829363 2017-09-21 16:20:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829363 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829464 I heard the rain. 

The rain sounded like rocks slapping the window.

Simile personification )]]> 2017-09-21 16:21:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829464 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829639 I love volleyball 
 When I play volleyball I fell free like a bird flying

]]> 2017-09-21 16:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829639 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829738 Preston 
I looked at the clouds 

I looked at the clouds as if they were trying to tell me something ]]> 2017-09-21 16:21:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189829738 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189830164 1) Jeffy hates green beans. 2) Jeffy hates green beans like as if it was trying to kill him.]]> 2017-09-21 16:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189830164 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189830646 I am kaden]]> 2017-09-21 16:23:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189830646 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189831239 Lupin and James went to Hogsmeade.
Lupin and James floated like deadly dementors so that they could stroll Hogsmeade at midnight without becoming Animagi. (Personifacated Simile)

]]> 2017-09-21 16:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189831239 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189915752 2017-09-21 19:23:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189915752 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189915880 I saw rain pound on my window. 

I saw the rain jump on my powerful pane. (Personification, Alliteration)]]> 2017-09-21 19:24:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189915880 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189915991 The gaterad went down my Thourt 

The Gatorade went down my thourt like water falling of a waterfall!!

Simile]]> 2017-09-21 19:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189915991 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916002 I was up in the air drifting]]> 2017-09-21 19:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916002 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916008 The sand was burning my toes.

The sand was like a million degrees to my toes!!!
( simile and hyperbole )]]> 2017-09-21 19:24:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916008 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916018 The sandy sand was now water]]> 2017-09-21 19:24:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916018 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916030 It was a really hot day in Hawaii,,,,,,,,,,,,.............It was like fire outside in Hawaii.]]> 2017-09-21 19:24:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916030 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916168
The shark was ]]> 2017-09-21 19:25:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916168 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916430 I was drifting though the air

I was drifting like a race car  racing   Alliteration
Hyperbole]]> 2017-09-21 19:26:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916430 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916563 Kyle 
Personally I didn't get hit by the hurricane.....................I personally didn't get hit by the angry hurricane that destroyed Texas 
(Personification and hyperbole)]]> 2017-09-21 19:26:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916563 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916583 We had to bring our dogs with us

We had to bring our loud,lazy dogs who was as loud as a truck horn]]> 2017-09-21 19:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916583 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916650 2017-09-21 19:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916650 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916778 I called "hut" then no one moved I called "hut" again and the play started 
And the ball came to me.
I rored like a lion "hut" no one moved it was like the world stoped I rored again and the ball flew to me ]]> 2017-09-21 19:27:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916778 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916785 I jumped on very hot sand



I jumped on lava that is like a lion biting my feet and it was burning more than a gazzilion degrees

(Simile hyperbole)
     

]]> 2017-09-21 19:27:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916785 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916852 I fell asleep. I was alsleep on the clouds.]]> 2017-09-21 19:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916852 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916940 My dog was scared  the water was high

My dog was scared as a cat the water was 100 feet tall (simile,hyperbole)]]> 2017-09-21 19:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189916940 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917011
The shark was at least 10 feet tall.

The shark was as big as 100 feet tall.
(Simile & hyperbole)

]]> 2017-09-21 19:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917011 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917182 I jumped on the sand and my feet were burning as well as my face


I jumped on the sand of a million degrees and the sun was like a fire burning me.]]> 2017-09-21 19:28:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917182 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917547 I got a paper cut.  
 
OWW I just got stabbed. 

Anomonopia]]> 2017-09-21 19:29:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917547 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917551 FIFI 

Metaphor,hyperbole
I fell asleep. I was asleep on the clouds. ]]> 2017-09-21 19:29:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917551 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917643 We packed pancakes into the long gray and big truck.I used alliteration and imagery]]> 2017-09-21 19:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189917643 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918265 The feeling of riding a dirtbike 
is like the wind blowing in your face, it is like driving in a car with the windows open. ]]> 2017-09-21 19:32:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918265 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918285 2017-09-21 19:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918285 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918289 Lucy said that the beach was beaut. ]]> 2017-09-21 19:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918289 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918546 2017-09-21 19:32:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918546 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918580 2017-09-21 19:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918580 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918969 The life guard blew the whistle as loud as he could 

]]> 2017-09-21 19:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918969 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918972 Ariana was going to the blue beach,but saw that it was pouring rain.]]> 2017-09-21 19:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/189918972 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190226863 I thought to my self that I had to take it into my own hands 

I thought to my self that I had to take it into my own hands like taking candy from a baby]]> 2017-09-22 17:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190226863 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190226937 2017-09-22 17:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190226937 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227000 I was almost pounded by skiers going down hill like a ragging river.
#simile & personification]]> 2017-09-22 17:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227000 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227257 2017-09-22 17:20:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227257 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227299 I gazed upon the mountain covered in snow.
I gazed upon the lonely mountain, covered in the purest snow.(imagery & personification)]]> 2017-09-22 17:20:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227299 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227677 I ran out of the ocean
I ran out of the clear blue water like a wild child
                                                     (Simile,Imagery)]]> 2017-09-22 17:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227677 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227943 The life guard blew the whistle as loud as he could like a dog whistle and my ear hurt so bad . Simile ]]> 2017-09-22 17:22:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190227943 https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190228956 I just got a paper cut
Owwww I just got stabbed!

Onomatopoeia , personification ]]> 2017-09-22 17:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jacquelineacurtis/a51a5sd871ck/wish/190228956