https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q Made with love en-us 2018-04-25 14:50:10 UTC 2024-06-16 18:28:56 UTC hello@padlet.com westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/255275069 Rocky, ice, tall, camps, white, ]]> 2018-04-25 15:07:07 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/255275069 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/255281450 Snow, ice, cold]]> 2018-04-25 15:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/255281450 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256036819 we could make the backpack more confortable]]> 2018-04-27 14:44:30 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256036819 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256047965 2018-04-27 15:11:41 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256047965 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256048713 2018-04-27 15:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256048713 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256049750 2018-04-27 15:15:56 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256049750 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256051869 2018-04-27 15:21:06 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/256051869 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/257679379 Anders, M. "Backpack Basics" Boys' Life Mark Anders talks about the basics of backpacks and how to were them. He says that there are two different types of backpacks, Internal and External. He also talks about how to make them fit comfortably.

This is helpful because we need to make the backpacks more comfortable for the hike to the summit . This article better explains how to do this and how to keep it as comfortable as possible. ]]> 2018-05-03 14:36:56 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/257679379 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/257700955 Regenold, S. "Everest Climbing Gear" Steven Regenold tells about what Mt. Everest explorers pack for their hike. He says the best type of backpack for this type of hike is an External Backpack. He also talks about the other stuff they need for this hike including helmets, boots, pick axes, and more.

This is helpful because we need to know what type of stuff they need to pack to survive up in 33% oxygen. This helps us better understand how big packs must be.

]]> 2018-05-03 15:13:08 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/257700955 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/257707244 2018-05-03 15:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/257707244 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/258554895 We need to make the backpack more adaptable and less heavy and to give it more storage]]> 2018-05-07 14:45:08 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/258554895 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/258556937 We need to make the more adaptable.]]> 2018-05-07 14:49:39 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/258556937 westmat000 https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/258558673 The KEMZ Elite was developed specifically for weight distribution adaptability and extensive storage. In the coldest temperatures, this backpack can distribute weight easily, making the climb easier. It is also adaptable or acclimate to the snow and freezing cold, allowing it to not freeze or rip from the ice. The backpack also makes the climb to the Himalaya Summit easier. If this is what you want or need, the KEMZ Elite is the backpack for you.]]> 2018-05-07 14:52:41 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/258558673 mstrock https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/262370867 Revise your paragraph in the following ways:
 
Word choice selection needs improvement (wider variety of general vocab--not so repetative)
 
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More transitions, overall flow, and clarity ]]> 2018-05-21 14:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/westmat000/a3oh65opqp6q/wish/262370867