(Punctuation Error)

3. Therefore, I strongly agree that students are making good use of mobile devices for learning (Punctuation Error)

First of all,why we eat to live?

Error 2:

With the development of the society,there are more and more delicious and engaging types of food appearing.

Error 3:

Can you imagine that if a person never eat anything for a long time,what will happen?

Error 4:

It is clear that an unhealthy diet will cause harmful physical issue.

Error 5:

Living to eat is a wrong idea to have a positive and healthy life.

 

Correction 1:

First of all,why do we need to eat to live?

Correction 2:

With the development of the society,there are more and more delicious and special types of food being created.

Correction 3:

Can you guess what will happen if a person eat nothing during a long period of time?

Correction 4:

It is sure that an unhealthy diet will affect your physical health.

Correction 5:

In order to have a healthy body and positive living habits, forget the idea about living to eat, start exercising and eat properly.

 

1) Some people think that getting a good food is a crucial experience. (Exp)

2) These people will use everything in their hand to pursue a cuisine that satisfy their palates. (Exp)

3)It is actually an effort to even more satisfy ourselves. (Exp)

4)The idea of eating to live just does not come to mind as most people are already thrived and survived. (Exp)

5)... but you cannot argue that this goal is a form of passion that managed to create the foods we have to these days. 

1) Some people think that eating delicious food is a crucial experience. (Use eating instead of getting as it is more suitable)

2)These people will use everything in their hand to obtain cuisines which are able to satisfy their palates. (The word pursue is not suitable for food but it is more suitable for a job or dream)

3)It is actually an effort to satisfy ourselves even more.(Wrong placement)

4)The idea of eating to live just does not come to mind as most people have trived over the past decades. (Change to a more suitable grammar)

5)... but you cannot argue that this goal is a form of passion that has led to the creation of the foods we have until this day.(Change the phrase as the word "passion" is not suitable for the verb "manage" because it does not represent alive subject)

Errors

Corrections

1.We enjoy eating  as it provides us with joy and happiness

2.People prefer to have a big meal after an exam

3.Some people always say that we eat not because of the food but who we are eating with

4.We need to ask ourselves if the food is awful and looks bad, will people still feel happy and joy while they are eating?

5.Foods can provide us energy and nutrition therefore we need to eat to live.

3. Therefore, I strongly agree that students are making good use of mobile devices for learning (Punctuation Error)
4. Following technological advancements, mobile devices has become more compact, yet able to store large amounts of data. (Subject-Verb Agreement)
5. There are detractors, however, who claim that mobile devices hinder students in learning as students are easily distracted by the tempting games and social media that mobile devices has to offer. (More Elaboration)
Corrections
1. Therefore, this provides students with the convenience of not needing to carry around school resources.
2. Some solutions he can choose may include asking his peers for assistance, referring to the instructional manual or searching the Internet. 

3. Therefore, I strongly agree that students are making good use of mobile devices for learning.
4. Following technological advancements, mobile devices have become more compact, yet able to store larger amounts of data.
5. There are detractors, however, who claim that mobile devices hinder students in learning as students are easily distracted by the tempting games and social media that mobile devices has to offer. As multitasking is near impossible, students may lose their focus in class when engaged on their phones, which can lead to heightened stress when they do not understand the chapter or how to do their assignments.

Error 

1\Nowadays, more and more students students start use the mobile devices.. 

2\they just use their phones to search, within few minute 

3\I need a few hours to finish my homework, 

4\A student who spend too much time in social media 

5\the mobile devices give negative effects to students. 

 

 

Correction 

1\Nowadays, more and more students students start to use the mobile devices.. 

2\they just use their phones to search and within few minute 

3\I need a few hours to finish my homework yet 

4\A student who spend too much time on social media 

5\the mobile devices brings negative effects to students. 

1.For instance, some teachers have been making use of he students’ mobile phones to keep track of their learning progress by conducting quizzes on their phones.[Expression Error]

2.These group projects encourage students to complete research and gather information from the internet.[Link to mobile devices!!]

3.Students also use applications on their devices to call their friends to avoid the trouble of meeting up.[More Examples]

4.The reason for this is due to the fact that the younger generation tend to fancy using their mobile devices for learning compared to reading textbooks and completing worksheets.[Subject-Verb Agreement]

5.Rather than for leisure sake and aid them in their learning process.[Sentence Structure]

Corrections:

1.For instance, some teachers have been making use of he students’ mobile phones to keep track of their learning progress by conducting quizzes online which students have easy access to through their mobile phones.

2.Thes group projects encourage students to complete research and gather information using their mobile phones to access the web.

3.Students also use application on their devices to communicate with their friends and avoid the trouble of meeting up.For example, they can call their friends and work on a group project without having to meet up in person.

4.The reason for this is due to the fact that the younger generation tends to fancy using their mobile devices for learning compared to reading textbooks and completing worksheets

5.Rather than for leisure sake and instead, help them in their learning process.