https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r Brainstorming what works... en-us 2018-09-06 14:02:13 UTC 2018-09-10 17:01:15 UTC hello@padlet.com angie_greiner https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278508490 List (3) Negatives]]> 2018-09-06 15:59:24 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278508490 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278512002 2018-09-06 16:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278512002 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278981877 2018-09-07 18:29:40 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278981877 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278982666 Pros: she was very passionate, knows what she's talking about, GRIT

Cons: She kept repeating herself, sexiest, she's a crazy feminist ]]> 2018-09-07 18:31:29 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278982666 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278983241 -descriptive about setting
-displays content well]]> 2018-09-07 18:33:01 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278983241 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278983826 pros: Conclusion connected everything, She was bilingual, diction
Cons: Transitions, Organization of her ideas, topic sentence]]> 2018-09-07 18:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278983826 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278983916 Pros:  Great conclusion, Boosts herself up, and good use of a simile
Cons: Hook could use some work, she rambles a lot, essay in general could be more interesting]]> 2018-09-07 18:34:26 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278983916 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278984894 positive 
-good work 
-shares a person experience 
-shows her strong points 

negative
-no flow 
-lacking imagery 
-lacking paths ]]> 2018-09-07 18:36:34 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278984894 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278985335 -awkward syntax
-no sophisticated vocabulary
-redundant
-not interesting]]> 2018-09-07 18:37:36 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278985335 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278986550 2018-09-07 18:40:22 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278986550 angie_greiner https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278989242 2018-09-07 18:46:45 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/278989242 https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/279515063 2018-09-10 17:01:15 UTC https://padlet.com/angie_greiner/a12xdfx2lm5r/wish/279515063