Example B by Frances Knight https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq Made with wonder en-us 2021-11-12 10:26:31 UTC 2022-02-18 17:13:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055619530 explained the quote well- and redefine in own terms. ]]> 2022-02-18 17:06:23 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055619530 https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055619944 at end of second para- but should be better signposted

]]> 2022-02-18 17:06:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055619944 The first sentence goes straight into discussing Coleridge, which was good. https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055623848 2022-02-18 17:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055623848 https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055624784 they don't address the second half of the title quote - aka what is the difference between legal law and moral law?]]> 2022-02-18 17:09:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055624784 A lot of the insights in the first paragraph seem quite disjointed/unrelated. https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055627143 2022-02-18 17:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055627143 Brought in other philosophers https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055628623 2022-02-18 17:11:58 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055628623 engages with how 'slavery' changes in sense over time and sets out that it will look at the objectification of the slave through sentimental literature, however seems not to deal with justice? could have said something on that https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055629168 2022-02-18 17:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055629168 the thesis statement seems to be in para 2...intro would work better having the first two paragraphs as one to cohere as an intro https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055629936 2022-02-18 17:12:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055629936 clear, could be more assertive though instead of using 'possible' https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055631679 2022-02-18 17:13:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lillianhingley1/9zkp5sfz4hl0h2mq/wish/2055631679