11108350 林奇衛 by 蔡涵瀅

我的初稿

11108350 — 2023-12-07 00:57:21 UTC

This is my favorite corner in my house. There’s a cute yellow cat with yellow eyes lying on a wooden scratcher. The bed of our cat Dudu is put under the dining table. It used to be gray one, but we bought a wooden one for him.

When we're having dinner, he will keep saying “meow” to us. Whenever we passed by Dudu, he will come out, lying in front of us and said something. He likes to interact with my family members. Sometimes we use cat teaser to play with him. We always have good times together. Sadly, his actions are limited by a red leash because he would fight with another cat in the house.

I love this place because Dudu always makes me laugh. Without Dudu, I wouldn’t choose this place as my favorite corner.

老師修改的版本

11108350 — 2023-12-07 00:59:12 UTC

This designated space within my residence holds a special allure for me. Resting upon a wooden scratcher in this cherished corner is a delightful yellow cat with captivating yellow eyes—our beloved pet, Dudu. The feline’s bed, once gray, now boasts a wooden replacement, situated beneath the dining table.

During our dinner gatherings, Dudu vocalizes with a series of melodic “meows,” seeking interaction. Whenever we traverse past Dudu, he emerges, reclining before us and engaging in what seems to be feline communication. His penchant for interacting with family members often involves playful sessions with a cat teaser, resulting in enjoyable moments. Regrettably, his movements are constrained by a red leash, necessitated by his inclination to engage in conflicts with another cat in the household.

The significance of this corner is heightened by Dudu’s ability to evoke laughter. Were it not for Dudu’s endearing presence, this locale would not have attained its status as my favored retreat.

新舊版本差異

11108350 — 2023-12-07 01:01:21 UTC

我覺得我原本寫的內容用的文字都很簡單，在情景描述跟氣氛營造這些方面做的非常不足，看到老師修改的版本之後我覺得不知所措，因為程度差異太大了，老師的內容完整許多，也很有連貫性，我當時覺得我沒辦法改得比老師的版本還好，所以就沒改了。

我和老師的內容差異

11108350 — 2023-12-07 01:18:58 UTC

在文章的開頭，老師寫出了這張照片對我的意義，可是我只是把內容寫出來，沒有帶什麼情感描述，而且老師的描述和形容詞都比我用的還有深度，更有詩情畫意的感覺，我覺得我最大的問題應該是單字量以及文章閱讀經驗不足，所以我應該要在空閒時間多多閱讀英文文章，看看別人都是怎麼表達出自己看到的畫面或情景，然後加以學習。

Benefits from sustainable tourism?

11108350 — 2023-12-07 01:38:47 UTC

I saw this in the article:

The importance of sustainable tourism is also highlighted in SDG target 12.b. which aims to “develop and implement tools to monitor sustainable development impacts for sustainable tourism that creates jobs and promotes local culture and products”.

It also said:

At the Johannesburg Summit, the launch of the “Sustainable Tourism – Eliminating Poverty (ST-EP) initiative was announced. The initiative was inaugurated by the World Tourism Organization, in collaboration with UNCTAD, in order to develop sustainable tourism as a force for poverty alleviation.

https://sdgs.un.org/topics/sustainable-tourism

What is sustainable tourism?

11108350 — 2023-12-13 14:02:41 UTC

Sustainable tourism is an approach to tourism that seeks to minimise negative impacts on the environment, society, and economy, while maximising the positive impacts. It can help to preserve natural and cultural heritage sites, and contribute to poverty reduction by creating job opportunities and income for local communities. This can be achieved by:

Protecting natural environments, wildlife and natural resources when developing and managing tourism activities

Providing authentic tourist experiences that celebrate and conserve heritage and culture

Creating socio-economic benefits for communities through employment and income earning opportunities

What Sustainable Tourism Is + Why It Is The Most Important Consideration Right Now - Tourism Teacher

What is sustainable tourism? - Travel Foundation (thetravelfoundation.org.uk )

My summary

11108350 — 2023-12-13 14:06:13 UTC

I think sustainable tourism is an important thing to do. It is said in these articles that sustainable tourism not only can eliminate poverty but also can protect the natural environment, animals and cultures. People can enjoy traveling to many places with the less destroy to the environment.

Outline

11108350 — 2023-12-21 01:07:12 UTC

1. Who - Me and my friends
2. Where - A big night market
3. When - A warm starry night
4. What - Visit the night market
5. Why - To enjoy the beautiful night
6. How - Visit the night market

Elements

11108350 — 2023-12-21 01:07:53 UTC

1. Setting - Visiting the night market
2. Characters - Me, Joanna and John
3. Plots - Buy food and take photos
4. Themes - Have fun with my friends

The story

11108350 — 2023-12-21 01:09:26 UTC

This is a warm starry night. I was lying on my bed, hungry and boring. Why do I have to stay at home in such a fantastic night? I tapped on my smartphone, the screen showed the time — it’s 18:01. “Maybe I can ask friends to go to the night market” I think. I sent a message to the group of me and my friends Joanna and John. After a short conversation, we decided to meet at the Jiantan MRT station.

We met in front of the 1 exit of Jiantan MRT station. On the way to the Shilin Night Market, I'm curious and excited. “Oh, such a wonderful night” John said. I thought I have the same feeling like him.

It’s almost dinner time, and I didn’t eat anything. All of a sudden, a tempting smell of potato showed up. There's a fried potato stand beside me! Too hungry to find another kind of food, I took my wallet and bought 4 bags of it.

Eating the delicious food, we passed by the photo booth, we turned our head strongly, and face to each other almost at the same time. The reason why we did this is because we already want to take pictures together in photo booth for a long time. Rushed to picked up things we want to wear on the shelf, we put money into the machine and start our performance. After an amazing and wonderful performance, we're delighted with the photos we got.

In the end of the date with my friends, we all felt joyful when leaving the night market. "Such a unforgettable night, we must come here again!", said to my friends.