https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks Made with the best of intentions en-us 2022-02-18 01:30:34 UTC 2026-02-26 06:33:37 UTC hello@padlet.com rleong3644 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2062517008


]]> 2022-02-23 12:53:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2062517008 rleong3644 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2062518099 2022-02-23 12:54:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2062518099 rleong3644 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2062522556 2022-02-23 12:57:19 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2062522556 rleong3644 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2062523925 2022-02-23 12:58:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2062523925 ecolivingsg https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2080584436 The stories become more details with all the background information, it can shows more emotion side of Ben and what Ben had was thinking at that point shows in the video. 

]]> 2022-03-07 02:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2080584436 ecolivingsg https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2080587673 with both audio and video it will completely show all details and understand the whole plot better ]]> 2022-03-07 02:17:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2080587673 ecolivingsg https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2080589001 Ha Ha .... make it more romantic with background music 

]]> 2022-03-07 02:17:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2080589001 datosrialan https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2083955085 Excellent piece of story telling! 
Maybe consider wider range of tonalities.]]> 2022-03-08 13:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2083955085 rleong3644 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2084155534 Yes I think some light music will make it more sentimental, something like korean drama music lol]]> 2022-03-08 14:53:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2084155534 rleong3644 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2084159242 Thanks Alan. I think its a good tip to have good range of tonalities such as different tones for different characters in the story]]> 2022-03-08 14:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2084159242 datosrialan https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2084935961 Yes, I do agree that the introduction of relevant music will greatly appeal to the emotions of the listeners]]> 2022-03-08 22:25:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2084935961 datosrialan https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2085064403 If your main intention is for the betterment of your listeners/receivers, then the idea of "thick skin" will not surface into your thinking process]]> 2022-03-09 00:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2085064403 gbasu01 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2085370934 I think Roy clarity in the entire story is very clear - may be a little mild background music will make the environment a little softer. 
The tonality could be a little better (consider high and lows) depending on the story. When the Ben was depressed and subsequently when the signboard was changed and more people responded etc. ]]> 2022-03-09 04:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2085370934 rleong3644 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2085443664 Yes Gurudas, I think some emotions for the characters will have a greater impact. ]]> 2022-03-09 06:07:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2085443664 gbasu01 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2085454708 Yes Roy - one is depending on the situation and also another with respect to the different characters. 
It is important, and you have done that nicely in the story when in the last part we remind ourselves for not to take everything for granted.]]> 2022-03-09 06:19:09 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2085454708 wsheikh39 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2092240706 a) Done well
Clarity: - spoken language was clear, with all words articulated well.

Vocal Variety: - Tonality was present and well done to create moments in the audio reading. 


]]> 2022-03-13 11:23:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2092240706 wsheikh39 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2092242323 b) Suggestions for improvement
Pauses: The story spoken had no pauses to give an impact to the reader. Perhaps more emotional parts could have a pause to create impact to the imagination of the reader.

Melody: Just like music, some parts are softly, some a louder; some are mellow, some are hyped. The different melodies in reading the story lets the reader create his/her own feel as if they are part of the story.]]> 2022-03-13 11:26:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2092242323 rleong3644 https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2099129444 agree, needs more work to make it more impactful :)]]> 2022-03-17 01:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/rleong3644/Bookmarks/wish/2099129444