https://padlet.com/27jacevedo/9wzydbua17dxhblw Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 14:58:41 UTC 2026-02-10 09:09:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 27ssaraiva https://padlet.com/27jacevedo/9wzydbua17dxhblw/wish/1067468447 An amazingly well written story and it real captured my feelings and made me want to read more. but i would have hoped for a more captivating title.]]> 2021-01-08 15:43:30 UTC https://padlet.com/27jacevedo/9wzydbua17dxhblw/wish/1067468447 https://padlet.com/27jacevedo/9wzydbua17dxhblw/wish/1502592834

  This is a good essay it gives amazing evidence and. Also helps captivate me ]]> 2021-05-07 14:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/27jacevedo/9wzydbua17dxhblw/wish/1502592834 27mmartucci https://padlet.com/27jacevedo/9wzydbua17dxhblw/wish/1612416465 Hi Jayden! Good job on describing the log I liked all the action and sounds you put into it such as “I pushed open the corridors” so great job on your log. Another thing I liked is how you elaborated a lot on the story about billy and what had happened on him also I liked where you were talking about the kid who was training his teeth. But one wish I have for you is to write more at the end because I was into the last slide but al of a sudden it just came to an end when I was really into your story but otherwise great job!]]> 2021-06-17 14:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/27jacevedo/9wzydbua17dxhblw/wish/1612416465 https://padlet.com/27jacevedo/9wzydbua17dxhblw/wish/1614800176 Hi Jayden, You did a good job on your writing. I liked all the action words you used. The action words made it more interesting and made what scene you were describing  more vivid. It was also good  how you described what happened to someone how had zombie teeth. You could have added how the government figured out about what billy  did.

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