[K2401 Speaking Writing] 246 19h30-21h30 OFFLINE by Quyền Ngô

Paraphrase these sentences, using 1 underlined key word as the subjects

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 08:41:06 UTC

Children should be taught how to manage money.
Technology has improved how we communicate with each other.
Using mobile apps offers many benefits.
Having too many apps on a phone can have many drawbacks.
Most government money should be invested in teaching science rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.

Example for you

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 08:45:06 UTC

It is important to teach students about environmental protection in school.

The importance of teaching environmental protection at school should not be ignored / overlooked.
Teaching students how to protect the environment is necessary.
Teaching students about protecting the environment is of fundamental importance.
Students should be taught about how to protect the environment.
Environmental protection should be taught to students in schools
Environmental protection should play an important role in a school’s curriculum.
Environmental protection should become a subject at school.
Schools should educate students about protecting the environment.

Hồng Khoa

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 08:46:09 UTC

1. Children should learn how to manage money.
2. Technology improvement has made us communicate better with each other.
3. There are many beneficial aspects in using mobile apps.
4. Having the phone over-crowded with apps can have many bad effects.
5. Most of money from government budget should be spent on science education rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.
6. Disadvantages can be seen when having too many apps on a phone.
7. Scientific-related subjects should be invested by government rather than any other ones.

Hồng Đào

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 08:46:23 UTC

Hoàng Phú

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 08:46:39 UTC

It is important for student to learn about managing money.
The improvements in the way we communicate have been made by technology.
It is beneficial to use various mobile apps.
There are some disadvantages for having too many apps on a phone.
Teaching science needs more investment from government money rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.

Trung Tín

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 08:46:48 UTC

1. Managing money should be taught to children.
2. The improvement of the way we communicate is thanks to technology.
3. A number of advantages can be offered when mobile apps are used.
4. Too many apps on a mobile device may cause a lot of disadvantages.
5. Investing government money in teaching science is more necessary than any other subjects to develop and progress a country.

Ái Vân

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 08:47:23 UTC

1. The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 08:59:09 UTC

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2. Governments should encourage industries and businesses to move out of big cities and into regional areas.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 09:00:23 UTC

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

3. Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on other factors.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 09:01:40 UTC

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

4. In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 09:02:02 UTC

What problems will this cause for individuals and society?

Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Choose 2 topics and write your own introductions

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-21 09:04:35 UTC

Using the below techniques to paraphrase:

Synonym / Antonym
General - Specific

Using one of the useful phrases that have been given to you in a handout

Hồng Khoa

2024-02-21 15:31:52 UTC

Some people claim that it is best to solve the environmental problems of the world by pricing up fuel. In my opinion, i disagree with the idea of bearing extra cost on fuel usage, because i believe that this measurement would significantly worsen the living conditions of people in the society.
Many believe that relocating industries and businesses from big cities to regional areas should be supported by governments. It seems to me that the advantages are more significant than the disadvantages it may have.
People are divided in their opinion on whether a person's happiness relates to economic success or depends on other factors. Although it can be argued that economic development plays an important role in personal happiness, i believe that other factors will decide the truly happy and satisfying life.
These days, especially in the developed world, the expectation for the average living standard is higher. This matter will lead people to a stressful lifestyle and create a burden for society. You should also address your recommended measures

The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-26 10:29:42 UTC

Write an introduction and an overview

Correction codes

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-26 10:33:22 UTC

Tenses = T

Word form = WF

Spelling = S

Nhi

2024-02-26 14:08:21 UTC

Hoàng Phú

2024-02-28 07:56:18 UTC

1. Expanding the cost of fuel is the foremost productive way to decrease natural issue in our world particularly pollution. I completely agree with this arrangement as it can empower citizen to utilize renewable source of vitality.

3.There are those who believe there is a clear correlation between financial success and happiness on a personal level while some contend that other elements influence happiness. We can not deny that economic development has a crucial part in personal happiness but in my opinion, I think that other factors effect directly happiness.

Question 1: Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 08:49:21 UTC

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Question 2: In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 08:50:17 UTC

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Question 3: With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 08:50:54 UTC

What is your opinion?

Question 4: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 08:51:26 UTC

How do you think it will change in the future?

Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Question 5: There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 08:56:09 UTC

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

List of perspectives:

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 08:57:18 UTC

technological
employment
health / medical
economic / financial
social
age (young/elderly)
personal
familial
local vs. regional
national vs. international/global

Question 5: There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 09:04:25 UTC

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Broader meaning of Stakeholders in IELTS Writing Task 2

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 09:06:15 UTC

= different groups of people who will benefit from a good thing or suffer from an issue:

age
gender
income
educational background
employment status
occupation

Vân

truongaivan2007 — 2024-02-28 09:31:13 UTC

1. These days, many people argued that the price of fuel should be increased because it’s the best way to solve the world’s environmental problems. In my perspective, i strongly agree with this statement. you need to briefly mention the reasons why you agree with this

2. Nowadays, there are many citizens who are dissatisfied with factory take the land in city so they report to government should motivate industries and business to relocate to another place out of big cities and into regional areas.

Tín Đoàn

TinDoan398 — 2024-02-28 12:47:10 UTC

2.Many people claim that governments should keep factory and business companies away from large cities and residential area. I support the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

3.Happiness is one of the most important human’s emotion. Some people believe that they just feel happy when they get rich, while others said that happiness based on their factors.

T1

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 13:39:38 UTC

T2

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 13:39:43 UTC

T3

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 13:39:47 UTC

T1

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 13:58:29 UTC

T2

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 13:58:31 UTC

t3

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-02-28 13:58:34 UTC

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-04 08:52:09 UTC

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Marking codes

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-04 08:53:28 UTC

Verb form = VF

Tenses = T

Spelling = S

Subject + verb agreement = SVA

number = countable / uncountable / singular / plural nouns= N

Tất cả mọi người không thích đi đến nhà hát.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-04 10:43:26 UTC

Người nhập cư đến từ nước không nói tiếng Anh thích đến thư viện hơn là sở thú như người nói tiếng Anh.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-04 10:43:36 UTC

Đi coi phim là hoạt động ưa thích của khá nhiều người, bất chấp việc là dân bản địa hay không.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-04 10:43:42 UTC

Tín Đoàn

TinDoan398 — 2024-03-04 14:18:17 UTC

tranquockiet2412 — 2024-03-04 14:19:12 UTC

Kiệt

hongkhoanguyen85 — 2024-03-04 14:19:35 UTC

Mỹ Nhi

mnhi — 2024-03-04 14:20:11 UTC

Hoàng Phú

2024-03-04 14:20:58 UTC

Hồng Đào

2024-03-04 14:21:49 UTC

Khoa Phú

hongkhoanguyen85 — 2024-03-06 13:22:53 UTC

Kiệt - Tran

tranquockiet2412 — 2024-03-06 13:30:00 UTC

Pa A: vitual game brings many benefit to the users
Pa B: Music is an important part of human life
Pa C: There are Many disadvantages of early retirement

Đức

ducieltswithjane — 2024-03-06 13:30:26 UTC

A: Video games can be both entertaining and educational.

B: Music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives.

C: As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated.

Nhi + Đào

mnhi — 2024-03-06 13:30:29 UTC

A: People can gain many advantages from technology such virtual world.

B: The effects of music in life.

Vân-Tín

truongaivan2007 — 2024-03-06 13:30:52 UTC

A-Playing video games have a lot of benefits that many people don’t know.
B- Music plays an important role in human’s life
C- tax

tranquockiet2412 — 2024-03-06 13:39:42 UTC

Kiệt - Tran

tranquockiet2412 — 2024-03-06 13:40:21 UTC

hongkhoanguyen85 — 2024-03-06 14:01:13 UTC

Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. Feeling happy depends on personal preferences and a person’s points of view. For example, being full or eating something tasty is enough to be delighted for some people. To the others, it’s joyful just to be surrounded by who they love. Besides, happiness can be determined by the level of satisfaction of a person. For instance, this person feels enough with an 1 bedroom apartment, but that person won’t stop until he/she has a luxury villa. Those who accept what they have, can start enjoying life more and gain their true happiness in life.

Nhi

mnhi — 2024-03-06 14:02:30 UTC

I believe that online university courses are a positive development for various reasons.

Among the many benefits of an online class, flexibility is considered as the biggest one. The reason is that this form of learning allows us to decide our schedule and study at any place. For example, it is convenient for those who want to hold a Master's degree but do not have enough time due to work. In addition, online courses also help people reduce costs such as transportation costs. To demonstrate, students can save money spending on materials thanks to virtual resources.

Kiệt

tranquockiet2412 — 2024-03-06 14:04:05 UTC

Topic 2

The online university courses have so many development in recent year, because it brings the university students a lot convinience. In free time the pupils can analyze the deep problems more specific, watch again if them not clearly understand and Specially Don’t need to move to the University. It is a great way to save the time. The trend of online learning will continually go up because of its benefit, may be it can spread out in to the high school, secondary school.

Tín Đoàn

TinDoan398 — 2024-03-06 14:04:34 UTC

3. We can’t deny that there is a big problem when a person move from a small town to a metropolis. As soon as they will realize everything becomes more expensive. One of the reasons is the large cities often far from productive areas so all the price is include the transportation fees and maintain the products. Furthermore, the price of properties in those cities is extremely high, due to the need of society. They need them not only to open their own store or these estates can be used as warehouses, but also they need a place where they can live. And the last, by some reasons, Taxes in metropolis often higher than other areas.

2024-03-06 14:04:58 UTC

Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each person. This difference is dependent on your ages, your roles or your needs. For example, when you are children, your happiness is playing with your friends or being near your parents. When you are a parent, your kids' maturity is your happiness. However, we can simplify human happiness thanks to Maslow’s Hierarchy Of Needs. According to Maslow’s Hierarchy Of Needs, people have five levels of needs that make you happy when they are satisfied. Those needs are basic needs, environmental needs, emotional needs, mental needs and social needs.

Vân

truongaivan2007 — 2024-03-06 14:05:30 UTC

I believe that online university courses are positive development for various reasons. Firstly, online university courses allowed you to control your time. For example, if you encounter a traffic jam someday or you get ill, you can still attend class without being late. Moreover, students can record every lesson to practice. Therefore, it easy for them to acquire full knowledge without missing anything.

Phú

mnhi — 2024-03-06 14:11:16 UTC

I believe that online university courses are a possitive development for various reasons. Firstly, studying online can be resulted in protecting the environment. Teacher can share in-class materials via online platforms instead of printing them in order to reduce the amount of paper consumption. Online meetings do not require participants to gather in a same place so that people will not use any vehicles. It can lead to the reduction of gas emmission from transportation which can be beneficial to our environment. Secondly, flexibility can be considered as a benefit of online course. Student can freely join when they are free so they can study whenever they wanted.

Dao

2024-03-06 14:15:47 UTC

I believe that online university courses are a positive development for various reasons. This means, studying online is one of the best way to minimize gas emission from transportation so that it has advantage for environmental protection. Meanwhile, it also saving time so that we can spend that time on other factors such as cultivate emotion with your family. For example, students can control thier time for suitable with lecture and do not worry about the quality of the instructure. As the result, it has the benefits on your education.

2024-03-08 13:34:17 UTC

1/ Burden on the sick, the injured, the disabled

The older has to take care of themselves without help

No safety plan for the society when socio-political and economic changes

2/ - Free tuition for public schools

Low hospital bills
Pension for the old, the wounded soldiers and martyrs

3/ High taxes, Strict legal system, Lacking motivation to develop, to change

Tín Đoàn

TinDoan398 — 2024-03-08 13:37:45 UTC

1. Taxes are low but people have to pay more for health services, scholar systems, no more pension, ect…
2. Yes, it does. School fees are supported, health services are cheap and everyone has a safety net in case they become unemployment or retirement.
3. Yes, it is. It will creat a pressure on workers’s shoulder due to high taxes. This lead to the retire age can be younger.

ducieltswithjane — 2024-03-08 13:38:06 UTC

some negative impact on

not enough old to work

the argue about opportunities

some problem about health

add some new worker

steal other people's things to survive

school fees are support

the poor ones they have a scholarship

wounded soldier

Write 3 full sentences to cover the 3 listed groups

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 10:55:56 UTC

Useful vocabulary

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 10:59:28 UTC

Expenditure on X = Spending on X = The amount of money spent on X: the action of spending money / an amount of money that is spent.
Expenditure / Spending category = item of expenditure
Expense: the cost required for something
To make a payment / purchase
To spend $ on X
To expend $ on X
Use % for X
Allocate % for/to X
Set aside % for X
X chiếm = make up / take up / account for / constitute / amount to + % / a big proportion / a small amount (+ of..)
X + receive a big / small / significant share / the lion's share / the insignificant proportion

Team 1

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 10:59:44 UTC

Team 2

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 10:59:47 UTC

Team 3

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 10:59:50 UTC

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:41:03 UTC

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:42:10 UTC

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Rewrite the sentences using the following words:

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:46:19 UTC

fewer males
the most
more popular
less popular
fewer
more…than
more
more
the most
the least

Team 1

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:46:32 UTC

Team 2

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:46:34 UTC

Team 3

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:46:37 UTC

Compare male and female attitude to bicycles, cars, tablets, mobile phones and the Internet.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:52:31 UTC

Example:

Almost as many females as males chose the tablet.
Not as many males as females chose the radio.

Bicycles

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:53:36 UTC

Cars

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:53:44 UTC

Mobile phones

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:53:50 UTC

The internet

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-11 11:54:06 UTC

Trân

2024-03-11 14:05:16 UTC

Not many males as females chose the bicycle.

Almost as many males as female chose the bicycle.

Not many females as males chose the car.

Not as many males as females chose the mobile phone.

Not as many females as males chose the Internet.

Almost as many females as males chose the Internet.

Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:19:23 UTC

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The use of mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries and shops.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:19:31 UTC

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

100% Agreement

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:23:03 UTC

Why Internet access HELPS young people and workers achieve their education and work goals MORE EASILY than before

100% Disagreement

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:24:18 UTC

Why Internet access DOES NOT HELP young people and workers achieve their education and work goals MORE EASILY than before

100% Agreement

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:28:28 UTC

Why the use of mobile phones should be banned in public places

100% Disagreement

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:28:45 UTC

Why the use of mobile phones should NOT be banned in public places like libraries and shops.

Researching in treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:29:51 UTC

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Find any specific actions, or examples or specific things related to these keywords

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:32:22 UTC

research
treating diseases
too costly
preventative measures

1. Research (What/Who/How)

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:32:34 UTC

2. Treating diseases

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:32:42 UTC

3. Too costly (What/Who/How)

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:33:18 UTC

4. Preventative measures

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:33:59 UTC

Researching in treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 10:41:33 UTC

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

100% Agreement

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 11:09:21 UTC

Why research in treating diseases is costly
Why preventative measures are better

100% Disagreement

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-13 11:10:00 UTC

Why research in treating diseases is NOT costly
Why preventative measures are NOT better

Trân

2024-03-13 13:09:29 UTC

1/ - collect sample

find volunteers
modern facilities
scientists

Trân

2024-03-13 14:19:43 UTC

Trân

2024-03-13 14:20:13 UTC

Outline

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-18 11:27:42 UTC

Selecting data and arrange them in your outline

Body 1: What's the focus?

Sent 1:
Sent 2:
Sent 3:

Body 2: What's the focus?

Sent 1:
Sent 2:
Sent 3:

Question 1 (real question 19.10.2019)

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 09:42:22 UTC

Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school. Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Question 2 (real question 29.11.2019)

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 09:42:32 UTC

Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on other factors.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Your turn!

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 09:43:14 UTC

Write 1 body paragraph

Start with an assigned topic sentence

Remember to use the P-E-E-R structure to develop your ideas

Give specific examples

Remember to use referencing

Some people like to shop in traditional shops. Other people prefer to do their shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 09:43:38 UTC

Some people like to shop in traditional shops. Other people prefer to do their shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 09:43:56 UTC

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 14:02:28 UTC

Recently, people are divided into twp / various opinions regarding to the issue that many people prefer allocating most of their time to commute to work or school. While some people think that it can bring many benefits for their future. I believe that it will be better if citizens could balance the amount of time for both working and studying and taking rest

Q1

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 14:06:09 UTC

Spending a huge amount of time traveling to school or office is believed to have positive effects on the development; however, there are some opposite views. While some ~~people~~ argue that the aforementioned issue brings benefit, I strongly believe that there are more drawbacks

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 14:07:08 UTC

There is no denying that going to the office and school nowadays is more time-consuming than in the past. Although it can be argued that this is a drawback of a modern life, I believe that there are more advantages than disadvantages.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 14:08:44 UTC

The increase in of moving time from home to work or school has many disadvantages, while others may argue that it still benefits our lives. From my perspective, I strongly believe that spending more and more time travelling to work or school gives us more troubles than benefits.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 14:10:00 UTC

There are many people wasting time using transportation ~~to qu~~ to work or school. Some people argue that this is a reverse development while others think there are some benefits. In my perspective, I strongly agree using transport because it is convenient

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 14:10:50 UTC

It is widely believed that people have different views about spending an increasing amount of time travelling to work or school. While some people argue that this is a positive change, I believe that it is a negative development.

quyenieltswithjane — 2024-03-20 14:12:17 UTC

People are divided in their opinions regarding more and more time should be spent on traveling to workplaces or educational places may have a drawback while others believe it will bring some positive development. From my perspective, I strongly believe that this may have more benefits than demerits.

men

ducieltswithjane — 2024-03-22 11:03:08 UTC

women

ducieltswithjane — 2024-03-22 11:03:14 UTC

young people

ducieltswithjane — 2024-03-22 11:03:21 UTC

old people

ducieltswithjane — 2024-03-22 11:03:26 UTC

in the past

ducieltswithjane — 2024-03-22 11:03:31 UTC

in the future

ducieltswithjane — 2024-03-22 11:03:37 UTC

Khoa

hongkhoanguyen85 — 2024-03-24 14:42:51 UTC

Khoa

hongkhoanguyen85 — 2024-03-24 14:45:52 UTC

Tín Đoàn

TinDoan398 — 2024-03-27 12:08:40 UTC

Tín Đoàn

TinDoan398 — 2024-03-27 12:09:11 UTC