Compositions for Module G 2019 Samples by Raisa Kamardash

Describe a special event in your life.

raisakam — 2017-02-28 21:18:14 UTC

Introduction
1. Name an event ( a visit to a museum, a trip/journey, a birthday party/ a ceremony
2. When and where did it happen
3. Who was there or was involved in
4. Experiences and feelings (terrific; impressive; breathtaking; awful, unforgettable; exciting; enjoyable; couragous; sacred; valuable; unbelievable; tremendous; remarkable; outstanding; )
5. Conclusion and reflection
6. You can use the internet to find examples
7. You can use Free Grammar Checker
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Tips and Ideas

raisakam — 2017-02-28 21:59:31 UTC

Planning your descriptive essay:

What or who do you want to describe?
What is your reason for writing your description?
What are the particular qualities that you want to focus on?

Drafting your descriptive essay:

What sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and textures are important for developing your description?
Which details can you include to ensure that your readers gain a vivid impression imbued with your emotion or perspective?

Revising your descriptive essay:

Have you provided enough details and descriptions to enable your readers to gain a complete and vivid perception?
Have you left out any minor but important details?
Have you used words that convey your emotion or perspective?
Are there any unnecessary details in your description?
Does each paragraph of your essay focus on one aspect of your description?
Are you paragraphs ordered in the most effective way?

Hi. Today is the 16th of March and we are going to start Remote Online lessons. Practice makes perfect! So, we are going to write your essays on the Word Page and upload your compositions on this page and Mashov!!

raisakam — 2020-03-16 06:52:03 UTC

Good Luck!
You are the Best!!!

raisakam — 2020-03-16 07:31:08 UTC

raisakam — 2020-03-16 07:31:37 UTC

Who are you?

raisakam — 2020-03-16 07:32:11 UTC

Who are you ??

Liron

raisakam — 2020-03-16 07:39:47 UTC

Reminder !!!

2020-03-16 07:44:04 UTC

Dear students!
Don't write on this Padlet Wall - write on the word page and then upload it!!!
it will be easier to focus

Aviv

2020-03-16 08:06:22 UTC

Ideal Summer Job
Got it, thanks

Every year on 20.6 / 30.6 thousands of children go on vacation. This is the longest vacation during the school year and it takes about two months. There are children who choose this vacation to fly with the family to some places, to travel in the country and around the world. There are those who go camping, or those who stay at a camp in the country. And of course those who prefer to stay home and see T.V . But since the age of 16, freedom is actually another period, it's time to go to work. Many teens leave home to work at camps, clothing stores, malls, restaurants, games, and other entertainment venues. During this time, they get up early in the morning and go to work and make some money to have for the year. In my opinion, teens who go out to work during the holidays should be blessed. Why? Because they contribute to the environment with their work, they begin to show independence and maturity and not just rely on parents, they grow and change. You can finally say they are big.In the summer vicition ,since I was 13 years old, I would go out to work and earn money for my judo or for entertainment during the year. This is the period without schooling but you learn the most from the environment, from the people you spend with each day and thus you are more educated for life.

The Mass Media and its Influence- Liron Brantz

2020-03-16 08:06:46 UTC

Got it, thanks
Mass media that surrounds our everyday lives, without a doubt has a large impact on our culture and the way we live our lives. The spectacular phenomenon of mass media has shaped and influenced our culture, by the process of evolutionary major developments and convergence. The media shapes and impacts our culture by providing large amounts of information through various channels of technology. Every day, people come in contact with some form of technology and there for become exposed to media and information, which easily influences their choices or ideas.

Over the last century, our world has quickly evolved and improved with various advancements in technology. Mass media evolved by channeling information through these technological advancements. With the invention of the radio everyone began to easily have access to live and recorded music, news, and advertisements. The radio enabled people to quickly distribute and carry information over great distances. However, the radio only delivered audio information which left an opening for the television. The television was an excellent advancement for mass media, giving the audience visual as well as audio information. With colors and moving pictures the media evolved like never before. Now days with the majority of homes having at least one television, families all over the world have access to 24 hour news channels, movies, shows, and massive amounts of advertisements. Another major development in the evolution of mass media came the birth of the internet. The internet provides information throughout the world with satellites, providing information access to numerous devices such as cell phones. With these inventions and many others, mass media to no surprise has expediently evolved and constantly surrounds people with information that changes our daily lives.

John P.

2020-03-16 08:07:49 UTC

Johnrael Parungao

My Ideal Summer Job

The summer months' in my country, June 21 - September 1, free students from the pressure of quizzes and exams.
Most teens spend summer relaxing but other spend their time earning extra money for their future. Everyone can choose his or her own ideal summer job. There is a variety of summer jobs for teens in the summer.

One of the most popular summer jobs that I know is Working in the Mall.

Working in the Mall is a job for teens aged 16 and up. The Salary depends on the employer and the hours you spend working.

In my opinion, working in the Mall is the ideal summer job for me.

This job has many advantages. The working hours are usually morning until evening depends on the employed schedule. For teens like me for this job at least like 4 – 6 hours, but its good money, you can get extra money if you did well. The employer can give you easier job. in the mall there bunch of shops and restaurants that you can find job easily.

Ideal Summer Job - Ofir

2020-03-16 08:14:26 UTC

A lot of teenagers having a hard time on their everyday life, they have a lot of exams and tests during the year, and when they're having a holiday, like the summer vacation they are suppose to do something meaningful and useful that will may help them in the future in some ways.

That thing that might be the best to do during the vacation is working and spend their time on earning extra money for their future.

Most of the teens are having a hard time what to choose, relax and spend their time hanging out with some friends or family, but there are a few that spend their time wisely and go to work in order to help themselves in the future with the money they're earning by working.

An great example for an ideal job is working as a employee on some kind of a store, even though is requires a little bit of effort it still worth it.

Working as a employee might be hard, it depends on the job and on the teen that is working, if he has motivation and will to work hard in order to get some money while the summer vacation is occurring.

Having a job in the summer vacation, such as a employee in a store might be useful in a variety of ways and there a lot of advantages , the teens that work in a job might be able to spend their money on something meaningful like: a driving license, a private car that will help them stop being depended on their parents to move them from place to place with their car, and even their studies in the future in the university or college.

To sum up the everything, I can tell that everyone have their own free will to do whatever they want on the summer vacation, some want to spend their precious time that they have lack of during the year except the summer vacation, they want to spend their time on something that will be good for their future such as getting a job during the summer and get some money by themselves without being depended on their parents at all to take care of them financially.
Got t, thanks

Unsafe Driving Among Young People - Sagi Zango

2020-03-16 08:33:38 UTC

Research has shown that the combination of youth and inexperience puts younger drivers at high risk. Their inexperience means they have less ability to spot hazards, and their youth means they are particularly likely to take risks. In this way, crash risk not only reduces over time with experience but also is higher for drivers who start driving at a younger age (17-24).

They're more likely to be involved in traffic accidents than any other age group.

The risk of motor vehicle crashes is higher among teens aged 17-24 than among any other age group. In fact, per mile driven, teen drivers in this age group are nearly three times more likely than drivers aged 30 and older to be in a fatal crash.

This fact makes most of the adults feel very concerned, particularly, parents of young drivers. There are a lot of possible causes of young drivers’ accidents, for instance: alcohol – driving when you are drunk, road distraction – talking on the phone or texting messages while you are driving, group pressure, competing with friends and etc.

To help young people be safer on our roads, we need a better driver training and testing system, better alternatives to driving for young people, and investment in monitoring technology for young drivers.

In addition, new laws have to be written in order to increase the age at which a young person can get a license, give more severe punishments, place secure or surveillance cameras in dangerous places.

In conclusion, much more car accidents occur among young people in comparison toexperienced drivers. However, these accidents can be prevented by uniting efforts of school, educators, parents, police and other concerned members of the community/society.

Ideal summer job- ROZA Many students going on summer vacation.The summer months free students from the pressure of tasks and exams. Most teens spend their time relaxing but most of them go to work, to do something and don’t stay home bored, this is how they make money and learn the value of money. Summer job has two sided. On the one hand teens going for freedom, that’s mean they need be relax and have fun with their friends and family. On other hand teens can't be at home and to do nothing, to be bored. They have to do something to keep them from wandering the streets. In my opinion, babysitting is the ideal summer job for me. This job has many advantages. The working hours are usually in the morning when parents go to work. To sum up I can claim that everyone wants an ideal summer job that suits him. Summer job is a good thing when everyone can earn some money.

2020-03-16 08:36:39 UTC

Unsafe Driving Among Young People-Maayan Yehezkel

2020-03-16 09:20:34 UTC

Well Done !!!!
In last years, the accidents in the road have become very popular especially among young people.

Researches show that the percentage of road accidents among young people increases every year.

Also, many statistics show that more young drivers involved in traffic accidents than any other age group.

This facts make most of the adults feel very concerned, particularly parents of young drivers.

According to studies on this topic, there are many causes of road accidents among young drivers, for example: text messages and phone calls- young drivers use in their phone rather than paying attention to the road and their driving.

In addition, many young drivers drive after drinking alcohol, which harms their visual acuity.

Also, young drivers are often affected by social pressure and driving at excessive speed.

In my opinion, the problem can be solved by following strict and very clear rules, give more severe punishments, and place secure cameras in dangerous places.

In conclusion, much more car accidents occur among young people in comparison to adult drivers. However, these accidents can be prevented by uniting efforts of school, parents, police and other concerned members of the community.

Mass media and its influence

2020-03-16 09:50:19 UTC

Liel Branch
Recently the mass media has taken a wide and important place for the public
Many people use the mass media at any given time and spend many hours using the mass media
This affects them in many areas, both for the better and for the worse.
Mass media and media culture influence the thoughts, attitudes and behavior of the audience or the audience.
Whether it is written, for television or speaking, mass media reaches a large audience. Mass media is known as one of the most significant forces in modern culture.
Also, communication influence is the power exerted by a media message, which results in a change or reinforcement in the beliefs of the audience or individual.
A media message has an impact on one of its audience members depending on many factors, including audience demographics and psychological traits. These effects can be positive or negative, sudden or gradual, short-term or long-term. Not all effects cause change; Some of the media messages reinforce existing beliefs.
We use our phone for a long time during the day and we are influenced by the mass media that is on each of us without even noticing
We see many advertisements that affect us by making us buy products
We get a lot of information about the whole world and our country
Everyone takes the mass media differently
But we need to know how to use the mass media on the best side and not let the mass media affect us adversely but just take advantage of the good it offers us and learn from it.