HOOKS! by Danielle DeManty https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1 en-us 2021-11-16 05:40:53 UTC 2026-01-03 03:19:17 UTC hello@padlet.com Pick ONE prompt from the "Bodacious Beginnings" handout and use Ba-Da-Bing method to write a hook! danielledemanty https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897609602 2021-11-17 18:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897609602 1795164 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897854740 𝐀 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫, 𝐢 𝐡𝐞𝐥𝐝 𝐢𝐭 𝐢𝐧 𝐦𝐲 𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡 𝐞𝐱𝐜𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭 𝐮𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐥 𝐢 𝐧𝐨𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐞𝐝 𝐬𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐨𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐭𝐞𝐫. 𝐎𝐡 𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐥, 𝐢 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐦𝐲𝐬𝐞𝐥𝐟.

]]> 2021-11-17 19:50:57 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897854740 i rush over to jack. i show him the daily pilot message about our team winning pilot cup. he sees it and smiles. Isaak carried us. Me and jack 2019 pilot cup champs! 1794382 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897855255 luke]]> 2021-11-17 19:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897855255 i race down the dark ally as the spy in black cloths. rats were running back and forth. i say to my self will i catch her 1750064 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897855389  ]]> 2021-11-17 19:51:18 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897855389 Chelsea_l https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897858592 Boom! Crash! I burrow deeper in the cozy blankets on my couch. I watch as the television slowly flickers back to life. December, I think, storm season.


-Chelsea


]]> 2021-11-17 19:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897858592 the great meal -Noah 1835521 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897859154 as i licked my plate clean i feel a big ball of warmth in my stomach it was the food that i just ate it was warm and full of love knowing its going to be there for a wile.]]> 2021-11-17 19:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897859154 It was a cold Dark Night I was running home I could hear the thunder and lightning it sounded like it was getting closer and closer I ran into my house trembling I was very happy that I was safe 1789682 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897859353 2021-11-17 19:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897859353 Michael 1952091 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897859370 I walk in the park i see the trees i said i love my park]]> 2021-11-17 19:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897859370 love letter: https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897859909 My feet tap the carpet under my desk. I look at the blank sheet of paper. My brain is spiraling with ideas of what to write but all I can think of is the heart next to my name.
-Lulu]]> 2021-11-17 19:53:06 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897859909 1790752 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897860090 One day there was a light flashing on the night sky. Could it be an UFO?]]> 2021-11-17 19:53:13 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897860090 The story of a Storm 1824742 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897860396 CRASH! I leap out of my chair as I see the biggest lightning bolt I've ever seen! I make a mad dash to my room, afraid I was gonna get struck.]]> 2021-11-17 19:53:23 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897860396 I sat down i pick up my knife and fork i cut the big juicy steak water squirts out.I take a big bite flavor ruses down my mouth. 1840339 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897860570 Everet

]]> 2021-11-17 19:53:29 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897860570 "Lightning" by Alyssa W. 1814661 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897860851 BOOM! CRASH! The sound violently rang through my ears. I immediately ran to my parents' room in the night, too scared to be alone. Seeing the thunder strike and flash, I hide under the covers, tensing up my shoulders as to stay safe and curled up. The world is coming to an end! four-year-old me thought, eyes wide and blinded.]]> 2021-11-17 19:53:38 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897860851 Skyla (Love letter) JustA_Leaf https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897861105 I stooped over to pick up my friend's fallen envelope. I discreetly flipped it open and scanned the letter inside. It felt like somebody had punched me in the stomach. No, no, no, no... I thought frantically. This can't be happening...]]> 2021-11-17 19:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897861105 I raced through the city in search for a place to hide, hard rain falling down on me. The dark stormy weather was racing me home. Is my family okay? https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897861435 -Bea]]> 2021-11-17 19:53:52 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897861435 as I was heading to my room I couldn't bare but look at the thunder and lightning as I thought "I don want anything to happen 1792381 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897861501 2021-11-17 19:53:54 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897861501 A warning about food poisoning 1735192 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897861520 I'm about to eat the beads inside the pack that I found in the seaweed box. I see the the big red text that said, "POISONOUS DO NOT EAT". I thought, "I could've died right there.]]> 2021-11-17 19:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897861520 "Yum!" I exclaim from my chair near the kitchen table. "What?!" I hear my brother yell. "That was the best meal I've eaten my my entire life!" https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897862919 2021-11-17 19:54:39 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897862919 I enter the room ready to face criticism. Seeing all these faces make me sweat. The one thing i can think about is the memo they will post after this is over. 1795586 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897863219 2021-11-17 19:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897863219 1792881 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897863762 Skipping down the hall and putting the letter into his blue locker with excitement his locker Identical to the rest lining the halls, she though to herself about not being rejected ]]> 2021-11-17 19:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897863762 Graduation Speech by Alessia 179078 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897865165 It was my turn now. I had to go up there. My graduation speech. I tried to move my feet, only they didn't. I wouldn't be surprised if my feet were glued down. I notice the people waiting for me to come. "It's okay," I thought to myself. "I'll be alright." I unglued my feet and walked to the stage and spoke. ]]> 2021-11-17 19:55:46 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897865165 I walked up the street to the new restaurant and saw a sign that had a warning about food poisoning. i was feeling daring so i walked in without reading the sign 1772791 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897865204 number 2]]> 2021-11-17 19:55:47 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897865204 My feet stumble into the restaurant the waiter hands me the menu overwhelmed by all the choices " I say all have the steak" I say and It was the most Delicious steak ever. 1879721 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897865661 2021-11-17 19:56:01 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897865661 I knocked gently on a door untill a man wearing all black ushed me into the house. I saw the spy running into the room that I had set a trap in. I thought to myself " Wow, that was easy." 17211210 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897865775 2021-11-17 19:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897865775 179266 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897868546 My hands scraped and scratched by the hand coughs they got me. my feet slowly walk to the interrogation room. i sit down. the room is dark and i see a one way window. a bright light is shown in my eye ouch. "oh god here we go" -Ruby]]> 2021-11-17 19:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897868546 I ran onto the supply boat hidden behind him, I watched as he walked through a small door, I wonder what he's doing... 1797791 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897869555 Gabby]]> 2021-11-17 19:58:01 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897869555 1851223 https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897876129 I walked out of my house and i saw a flash of lighting and i thought that is rare in costa mesa]]> 2021-11-17 20:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/danielledemanty/9p68myln1xqa1xv1/wish/1897876129