Writing Raz Kid by Grace Hoang

DORY

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-04 07:56:38 UTC

You know everyone has the best weekend, and I have too. My best weekend ever is the time when I go to the beach. When I go to the beach, I swim in the sea and build a sandcastle. I find the little sell when I swim in the sea. I put the shells on top of the castle. I watch the boat ride on the sea. The boat looks like a motorbike riding on the road. I watch the bird flying so freely in the sky. When I look at the bird I think the bird is the kite flying up and up. I eat a lot of seafood. There is a famous restaurant near the beach and my dad takes me there. I think each is the best place to go on the weekend. If you don’t know which place to go on the weekend, go to the beach and you will never regret it.

SOPHIA

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-04 08:10:17 UTC

Have you had a nice holiday with your family? As for me, l have already had. That was a trip to the zoo with my father. my mother and my two sisters last week. First, I visited the zoo in the morning. I can see many animals. It's a lion, tiger, monkey, peacock, and bear….Last Sunday, I was allowed to go to the beach by my parents. The sun was shining in the sea, and swimming in the water was wonderful. Under the water, I saw a lot of fish swimming around. A few months ago, my parents let me go out to play. I think the picnics were fun and I brought a lot of delicious food. Our family was very happy and had fun on those outings. I enjoyed this trip so much and I want to spend more time with my family.

LISA

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-04 08:10:55 UTC

My best weekend ever was a trip to Da Nang to meet my uncle and aunt in the hospital because my aunt gave birth to a baby. I gave a baby a present. I bought it yesterday morning. I hoped the baby would like the present. Then, I talked to my uncle and my aunt. I told them about my holiday and I showed them some pictures of the holiday. At that time, I saw the baby. Her name is Su and She was really cute. I was very excited to see my uncle, my aunt, and my little baby in Da Nang.

STELLA

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-04 08:11:29 UTC

Do you have the best weekend ever? Last week, I went to the zoo with my family and I think is it the best weekend ever for me. Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with my family. There, I could see a lot of animals like monkeys, elephants, and zebras,….I could feed the animals and I could go by boat to visit and learn about animals. I and my family could watch a movie about the life of animals. It was the best day ever, I wish one day I can visit the zoo again. How about you, tell me more about your best weekend ever.

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY!

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-04 10:58:54 UTC

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY!

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-04 11:01:31 UTC

April 4th 2023

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-04 11:02:22 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O3iCAcnzHjCg1IBKK_y5hovurP1VEu0V71BXcK4wIZ4/edit

WRITE ABOUT MY HOUSE

2023-04-04 12:49:02 UTC

My home is located on Bich Khe Street of Quang Ngai City. My house is small but there is a big beautiful garden in my house. There are eight rooms in my house with the color white and sky blue. My house has a living room, a kitchen with a dining room, 2 bathrooms, my grandparent's room, my sisters sleep with my parent, my bedroom and the last one is a little library in my house. The living room is a modern room with a big Tivi and a lot of pictures drawn by myself. Looking to the left, you can see the kitchen- where my mother cooks delicious food for the whole family. The bathrooms are big and clean. My room is white and yellow, there is my bed and my pink desk. I prefer a small library because there are many interesting books such as: Harry Potter or books written by author Nguyen Nhat Anh,... There is a very big garden in my house. In my garden, there are a lot of red roses around the garden. My grandfather loves apricot flowers, so he planted a lot of apricots when Tet comes, the apricot trees are in full bloom, a bright yellow color shines throughout the tree, it looks very beautiful. I love my house very much. How about you, tell me more about your house?

Write about my house

2023-04-04 12:50:16 UTC

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I have a house

2023-04-04 12:51:18 UTC

I love my house.

Write about your house

2023-04-04 12:51:24 UTC

My house is not to big not to small. My house have color is blue and white.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O3iCAcnzHjCg1IBKK_y5hovurP1VEu0V71BXcK4wIZ4/edit

My house

2023-04-04 12:52:53 UTC

Sophia

2023-04-04 12:54:03 UTC

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2023-04-04 12:54:30 UTC

Sophia

2023-04-04 13:47:55 UTC

Today my family went to the water park to play and have fun and we ate a lot of delicious food.

Sophia

2023-04-04 13:49:53 UTC

Last week my sister and I went to celebrate my cousin's birthday at a fancy restaurant.

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-04 13:54:49 UTC

Today I have the second midterm exam in Math, Vietnamese, Literature, and English.

My house six room.

2023-04-04 13:59:04 UTC

2023-04-04 14:01:57 UTC

A few months ago, my family had a trip to Vinh Phuc, there were swimming pools, restaurants, resorts, and many other modern facilities.

My house

2023-04-04 14:02:47 UTC

Which house is your favorite house?Big house or small house? I think you like the big house, but I like the house it is not to big or to small.My house have a color is blue and white.In my house, you can see 8 room. Fist you can see the living room. Then you can see the kichen. Finally, when you to the right you can see 1 bath room. When you go up, you can see the second bath room. If you go to the left you can saw the bed room. If you go to the the right you can see the kid room.

2023-04-04 14:04:24 UTC

Today, my mother bought cakes, cream puffs, and donuts for my family and she goes back home to eat with us. The cake is delicious and I love to eat sweet.

2023-04-04 14:05:14 UTC

2023-04-04 14:06:28 UTC

thao

2023-04-08 07:24:20 UTC

Gia đình tôi sống ở chung cư nhà tôi có 7 phòng đó là phòng ngủ của mẹ phòng học của tôi phòng làm việc của mẹ tôi phòng khách phòng bếp và một phòng đi vệ sinh một phòng tắm nhà tôi tuy nhỏ nhưng chứa chan được nhiều kỷ niệm đáng nhớ và khó có thể quên được Gia đình tôi có năm người thêm một người nữa đó là bà giúp việc nhà tôi nhà có ba anh chị em hai gái một trai hai chị em gái thì ngủ chung với nhau ở một phòng còn em trai thì còn nhỏ nên được ngủ với bố mẹ bà giúp việc thì người một phòng riêng phòng của tôi thì đầy những vết sắp chì ở trên tường thế nên tôi vẽ rất nhiều tranh để dán vào những chỗ sắp chi đó để cho bức tường đẹp hơn và bố mẹ tôi thì không có những nét sắp xì đó nhưng thay vào đó là một bộ ảnh cưới tuyệt đẹp của bố mẹ tôi không chỉ có ảnh cưới mà còn có cả những bức tranh nhỏ của tui vẽ được treo ở trên tường phòng của bố mẹ phòng của bà giúp việc thì có một cái đệm lò xo ngoài ra còn trang trí trang trí thêm những bức tranh và những tờ giấy khen của bố tôi không chỉ là phòng ngủ đó có là phòng để đựng đồ những đồ không cần thiết đến nhà tôi thường cho vào phòng đó để đỡ bị chội Căn nhà này đã gắn bó gắn bó với gia đình tôi hơn chín năm rồi tôi rất yêu ngôi nhà của mình

my house

2023-04-08 07:34:46 UTC

My family lives in an apartment building, my house has seven rooms, which is my mother's bedroom and my father's room, my mother's office, living room, one bathroom, one bathroom, and a kitchen. chan has many memorable and unforgettable memories in my family, there are five people, one more person is my housemaid, there are three brothers and sisters, two girls, a boy and two sisters, who sleep together at home. one room and the younger brother is still young so he can sleep with his parents and the maid, but in a separate room, my room is full of dark spots on the wall so I draw a lot of pictures to paste in those places. In order to make the wall more beautiful than my parents' room, there are no other features to replace it. Instead, there are beautiful sets of parents' wedding photos with not only wedding photos but also my small paintings. hanging on the wall of my parents' room, the maid's room has a spring, and there are pictures or certificates of my father's praise hanging on the wall, do you have lemon and auntie that that room can use to store unnecessary things to keep my house from falling apart this house has been close to my family for more than nine years I love my house very much

Teacher's feedback on Dory's writing "My house"

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-08 20:57:55 UTC

When you access the link, you will see my feedbacks. Have a nice day and I love your house <3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DK8AjBXtvwEd2t8bGtKQUS24tD8jM61t-iirMjWRCGU/edit?usp=sharing

Teacher's feedback on Sophia's writing "My house"

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-08 21:03:25 UTC

You can find my feedback here. Your writing is awesome because I can imagine a big and beautiful house with much love here. I want you to keep trying your best in the next essays. I love your house and you did your good job!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P4D9iWBJAUjZKMpayHihSFOXYzn5VcfKnWRxOIVivNU/edit?usp=sharing

Teacher's feedback on Stella's writing "Write about my house"

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-08 21:23:08 UTC

I have to say that your writing is flawless and you have just put a lot of effort into your writing. You just need to correct some minor mistakes then it would be perfect! Keep trying darling!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Mpso7Bn49ALWtebI_R9H1XQQbYGYMEDQcHLVqOQRyQ/edit

April 9th 2023

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-08 22:16:17 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VLXoInxvrlNUwDuiKm5eHpR3yTP2l7b9gs18_wJJLhg/edit

SOPHIA

2023-04-09 03:34:12 UTC

FIRST WE NEED TO PREPARE THE FIRST INGREDIENTS AS FIRST: Cheese, tomato sauce, beef, sausage, ham, squid, corn, bell pepper and onion
Yeast, salt, water, cooking oil...
Once we have the ingredients, WE MAKE PIZZA. TO DO PIZZA, WE NEED 3 STEPS, HOW TO DO IT, WE DO IT
FIRST WE GET STEP 1: Prepare a large bowl, put yeast, flour, water, cooking oil, salt together to make the base of the cake so that they form a flexible dough, do not pour Too much water will be diluted. Place them on a plate and use a spatula to flatten them into a round shape. Should make the surrounding edge of the cake thicker so that the ingredients do not fall off. Put the base of the finished cake into the oven, bake at a temperature of about 200-210 degrees Celsius for about 7-10 minutes, then take them out.
Step 2: Wash onions, tomatoes and cut into small pieces, chopped sausages, marinated minced beef in a bowl with salt, fish sauce, pepper... Put the pan on and turn on the stove until hot, add Bring oil to a boil, add tomatoes and stir-fry for about 1 minute, then add onions and stir-fry. After about 2-3 minutes, you add the sausage and beef, stir until cooked, turn off the heat and put them in a bowl.
Step 3: Take out the base of the cake, put the cheese on top of the cake, then use a spoon to put the pizza filling on top, and finally, you add a layer of cheese on top of the cake. Put in the oven at 400 degrees Celsius for about 15 minutes, then take out the cake and enjoy. Can be dipped with chili sauce if you like spicy food. THAT'S THE STEPS TO MAKE PIZZA, NO MORE THAN 30 MINUTES WE HAVE ALREADY HAVE A DELICIOUS PIZZA TO EAT. OR NO, IF YOU WANT TO EAT THE CHEESE PIZZA ONLY, IT JUST TAKES 10 - 15 MINUTES OF rot. PLEASE TRY IT AND ENJOY WITH YOUR FAMILY. HAVE A GOOD MEAL. BUY BUY

How to make spaghetti

2023-04-18 04:40:38 UTC

Do you know how to make spaghetti? If you don't know I will tell you. First, get the thing that you need like noodles, tomatoes, meat, two clean pot, cooking oil, ... Then, put the noodles into the clean pot. When finishing doing that crush a tomato so that it becomes a like water tomato. Third, put the noodles which are finished cooking with the water tomato. Finally, put the cooking oil but just a little bit of that into the clean pot and put the meat in the pot too. Then you wait for the meat to be well-cooked. After that, you steal noodles with cooked meat and tomato sauce. That is all the things that you need to make spaghetti.

How to make a sandwich

2023-04-18 07:30:40 UTC

I really/totally/completely like sandwiches. Do you know how to make them? I will tell you today. First, I need two slices of bread - you can buy them at the supermarket, tomatoes, salad, ham, and cheese. Then, I need to cut the tomatoes and ham into pieces. When the cut is done, I need to put the first slice of bread, then the salad, the top of the salad is the ham, I put the tomato and cheese on top, and finally the remaining slice of bread. Finally, when it's done, I bake the cake at about 204°C until the cheese melts or the cake is golden brown. You can see the attraction and deliciousness of the sandwich. So that is all how to make sandwiches. I hope you will give it a try one day.

April 25th 2023

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-04-25 13:09:56 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tfjfSih0DerDHOfNCWLDKoU6YyyrTyrX9hm7TGEE_rU/edit

thảo

2023-05-03 12:36:31 UTC

Almost everyone now owns a phone of their own and Iphone is an indispensable device for us humans, it helps us talk and exchange. In the past, when there was no telephone, people from different countries had a hard time talking to each other. We could only write letters or go home from time to time. Everything has its own harms and benefits, now that we have a phone, we are reluctant to exercise, always holding the phone in our hand. Phones not only help us talk and exchange, but now phones have applications such as: Google Chrome, Zalo, Zoom, YouTobe,... Those devices are all very important. YouTobe helps us entertain, Zoom helps us to learn online ... I see other important phones in our lives, everyone please be careful with your phones.

May 9th 2023

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-05-09 12:40:33 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f0UFRJFitrdmyKvKgszY-P68nAc1yNqkvN2__wKfGjg/edit

A mobile phone

2023-05-09 13:12:45 UTC

A mobile phone is a very helpful thing in your life. -> topic sentence
It (He She It + Vs/es) helps you to talk with many people in many places. My mobile phone/cell phone/gadget/device has the color pink/It is pink/The color of it is pink. It is small (It is dangerous) so I can take it everywhere with me. With my mobile phone, I can do many things (many dogs/cats). For example, It helps you to find the way home by using the GG map application. It can even help you to buy many things when you stay at home. It helps you to find a relaxing place (relaxing place/I am relaxed). A mobile phone even can help you to relax and play a game. I love my mobile phone because it is very helpful to me.

My computer

2023-05-09 13:50:05 UTC

I have a very nice computer, my mother gave it to me for my birthday. -> Topic sentence
This computer is small but very helpful. That is the reason why a lot of people own one today. Firstly, Computers can help people talk to other people online. For example: Chating online will be much faster and more convenient than before because there were no modern means of communication at that time, only letters could be sent. Also, Computers can do word processing work. More specifically, as everyone knows in the past around the time of the covid-19, all students in the country have to study online. Therefore, people use computers to learn through software such as Google, zoom, google meet, and Skype, ... Lastly, Using computers also helps us entertain ourselves by playing games or listening to music. For reasons above, I really appreciate my computer, I hope that it can help me become more fluent in my studies.

Topic 6 : My favorite pet is a cat

2023-05-14 08:16:07 UTC

I had a cat since 2023, on my Christmas. My cat’s name is Semi, the cat (N = it)/He/She has pretty long white fur, and it has big eyes and they look so cute. It also has four rather long and chubby legs, a long tail, and is always cool ,…Semi is four years old. My cat is lazy but it knows how to catch mice and jump rope with me. The cat likes walking in the park with me. I love Semi

A Mobile phone

2023-05-14 08:16:32 UTC

My smartphone is really helpful.

My mobile phone is black and pink. I usually use my phone because it's very useful. It has some apps like Zoom, Google, YouTube, Zalo,...I had a phone since 2022, on my 9th birthday because my father and mother bought me an iPhone 7 in the store and I love it very much and I keeping mobile phone .

I love my phone.

My dog

2023-05-16 01:19:43 UTC

If you are children you will have many wishes. I have a wish too, my wish when I was young was having a dog. My dog is a Poodle. Her name is Cherry. Her name is Cherry because she has red fur. Her fur is red and curly. On her cute face, she has two little eyes to look everywhere and watch my house. And on that face, she has one little nose. That nose is little but she/he/it smells very well. She has one mouth too. In that mouth, she has many white teeth. She has two ears too, she can hear very well. I always play with her. I love Cherry very much. I will try my best to carry for Cherry.

May 23th 2023

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-05-23 12:34:16 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OsNas9fnJB3epDVwPNThoWjSFd-fuJaczAS5LE48ibA/edit

Jerry

2023-05-23 12:43:09 UTC

I really love animals. So that on my 9th birthday, my mother bought a hamster for me. I called her Jerry. She is small and very cute. Jerry's fur colors are yellow on top and white under. She has big black eyes to help her see everything. She has a nose, which helps her to smell the strawberries when I give them to her. Jerry has a house, her house is beautiful, it is pink, bed and a slide for her. Jerry likes to slide and eat strawberries too. I like Jerry but my sister doesn't, she is afraid of the hamster. I like my hamster because she is cute and easy to raise. I love Jerry and I think in the future I will take care of her very well and I will give her a new hamster friend too!

A rainy day

2023-05-23 13:00:31 UTC

The rain is sometimes good and sometime bad, but you need to think that the rain is good because in the rain you can do many great things. When it rains sometimes I play outside but I always play inside most of the time. When playing outside, I need to wear a raincoat, a rain hat , a boot and take an umbrella with me. When playing inside you must be very careful about everything around you, when you play and you are careless (bất cẩn) then"pop" the thing around you is broken, but do not worry so much but be careful when playing in the room/in the house. When it is rainy I feel a bit sad because I like a sunny day. Moreover (thêm vào đó), you can try listening to the sound of the rain because it is so wonderful and that is the sound which makes you sleep well. I love the rain so much, but I think raining so much = It was not very good.

Try + Ving: thử làm gì
Try + to V: cố gắng làm gì đó

Additional Topic: Did you learn how to ride a bike when you were young? (Write at least 100 words)

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-05-23 13:16:58 UTC

A rainy day

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-05-23 13:18:59 UTC

Topic sentence: I love the rain because

After the rain, there will be a rainbow

Xem tivi với bố mẹ

Chơi với em

Ăn kem

Rainbow has 7 colors

On that day, I often

watch some movies with my parents

I can play with my sister too

When I go out,

Did you learn how to ride a bike when you were young?

2023-05-29 03:45:18 UTC

I didn't learn how to ride a bike when I when young, because I have a time I failed down of my bike and it very hurt so I scary of ride a bike. But I has a dream when I was young is about I can ride my bike. In my dream, I see I can ride a bike. First, I went up the bike. Then, I start to pedal, pedal, pedal. I look at me and very happy. Then I rode around and around. When I finish, I went down the bike, I jumped up and down because I very happy. I think I will ride a bike some days.

On a rainy day

2023-05-30 03:49:04 UTC

Some people like rain, I like rain, but only when I am inside. I love to be outside so I don't like the rain so much. I always like to study or read books on rainy days. My sister like the sound of the rain because is calming, I don't agree. I think the sound of the rain is a little bit noisy. Sometimes, I play outside, I don't want to get wet so I have to wear a raincoat, a rain chat, boots, and an umbrella. Wear all of these things make me feel cumbersome. I like rainy days. But moreover, I think sunny days is better than for me.

May 30th 2023

huonggianghoanggrace17 — 2023-05-30 13:07:11 UTC

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OsNas9fnJB3epDVwPNThoWjSFd-fuJaczAS5LE48ibA/edit

Describe your fifth birthday

2023-05-31 07:56:33 UTC

Today is my 5th birthday, so my parents have prepared gifts and birthday cake for me. I have cousins and cousins come to visit, have birthday cake, have balloons and have gifts, birthday. My 5th time was so much fun. I hope next birthday will be even more fun.

Topic 9: Describe your last holiday

2023-06-02 03:40:47 UTC

I go to Ha Long with my family and my mother’s sister’s family. The tour takes place in 3 day, we stayed at the hotel for 2 day and in the cruise for 1 day.

Going to Ha Long We eat seafood, we can go to the beach, we can swim, we can see the beautiful scenery. I love Ha Long