Emily’s, Tara’s And Ethel’s AIS PYPx Feedback 2021 by Tara Maxwell (5L) https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp PYPX Feedback Padlet. en-us 2021-10-19 04:43:12 UTC 2021-11-03 04:21:35 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/450825739/26ae5a8e388f96f4511874b409f72c36/Australian_International_School_Singapore_logo_2013.jpg Instructions tama7504 https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1826129829 Please share some meaningful feedback with our Year Five students. Use the + button at the bottom of the Padlet below to leave a descriptive and specific comment about something you learned, noticed, admired, or enjoyed. 

Title the post with the student's name or "Team" if it's for the whole team.

Example sentence starters:

  • "When you _________ I felt _______"
  • "The way you expressed ________ made me think______"
  • "I enjoyed the way you ________ because ________"
  • "You have inspired me to take action by _________"
]]> 2021-10-19 04:43:12 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1826129829 Feedback from Stephen Farmer (Emily's Dad) https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1847876802 I was very impressed with all the planning, research and coordination that went into completing this project. I liked the way that your hybrid text helped me to visualise the concepts you were investigating and how they can a real impact on real people.
I'm now also very interested in exploring the reasons why the important issues you have explored still remain unresolved after all this time.

]]> 2021-10-27 11:22:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1847876802 Feedback from Stella, Ethel's mum ethelwng10 https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1847947625 Very proud of the work put together by the team. I particularly like the principles how they engage and respect each others' voice. On top of the research skills they've shown in their work, I am impressed the way they present their ideas through usage of charts, tables and visuals. The artistic presentation is my favourite! Love them!
I enjoyed reading their reflections which tell how they acquired skills and gained maturity in understanding the topic over time. What a great way to immerse in their learning journey!



]]> 2021-10-27 12:01:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1847947625 Hasmitha 5G https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1849766295 I think your group did very well on your presentation. You were confident and shared information about your goal. I liked how you showed pictures of you going to the Center to learn about compost and plants. I think that you did a very good job on your presentation.]]> 2021-10-28 00:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1849766295 by Tony Maxwell and Judy Maxwell https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1851367386 my daughter tara has done a fantastic job at portraying the hunger needs of the world. I enjoyed the way you presented it because you showed compassion. the way you expressed things made say WOW.]]> 2021-10-28 13:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1851367386 By Toby Ralph 6G - The Kings School, Sydney, Australia https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853092154 Your Information was really interesting and I wanted to learn more. I liked how you website was set out, it was nice and clear for me to read. It was great seeing the steps and planing that you had to undertake to see this amazing end product. I also liked how you showed what you did to help with your issue and I think what you did will work we just need every on on board with it. The amount of videos was good because rather than reading the whole time it was broken up into text, and videos. Also the images where a good size and they wont the hero of the page because, the text was. The Artistic Representation's where extremely creative.
You should be really proud of yourself.]]> 2021-10-29 03:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853092154 By Ethan Wang, The Kings School Sydney, Australia https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853096571 "When you wrote about the lines of inquiry I felt that you had a clear mind about what subject you are doing."
  • "The way you expressed about the people suffering from starvation from food shortages made me think why isn't there any people donating to help"
  • "I enjoyed the way you explained what you did and what places did you explore to help children and adults because it shows what is happening to poorer countries in the world and what we can do instead of something else."
  • "You have inspired me to take action by stop using tremendous amounts of food and start donating some."

]]> 2021-10-29 03:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853096571 Feedback https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853099849 Hello! I really enjoyed this exhibition project made by you guys. I can see that you really understand the topic of Zero Hunger you talked about, and I really enjoyed the way you displayed your knowledge, research and your results/end products. I really liked the cause and effect diagram, as it shows that you have a knowledge of what you are researching, and the reasons it happens. I also enjoyed the Hybrid Text you guys did, I can see you guys put a lot of time in it mixing the information and the narrative style of writing. The notes you guys took to achieve your information made it seem very professional, and I was very much hooked into the depth of the information and the topic. The lines of inquiry made me feel you understood very much about what you were talking about. A Very Nice Exhibition, Well Done!

Chris Yu,
 The Kings School,
 Sydney Australia]]> 2021-10-29 03:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853099849 AIS PYP Feedback https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853107777 This was an amazing Exhibition, and I really enjoyed the way that you documented and presented your information. When I saw all the research, and effort into this major project, I knew that you had not just deep knowledge in the concept, but also in the aspects of; how to resolve the world problem, what we are doing now, and even other ethical dilemmas that had to be taken into account (these are not necessarily restricting a full resolution). In the artistic department of your project, I really liked the way that you could seamlessly merge two completely opposite subjects, arts and research (as in more academic aspect). The music generated was astounding. Overall, this has been a great experience looking through your journey, and you should be very proud of yourself.  

Aditya Verma - The King School, Sydney, Australia]]> 2021-10-29 03:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853107777 Feedback https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853112467 I really liked your information on Zero Hunger. I can see that you have really spent a lot of time on your research. There was lots and lots of information on each of the slides. I wanted to read more and more. I really liked your learning process and I thought it was really interesting. Your lines of inquiry were effective. Your data were really interesting because you did not just have one  graph, but many graphs to make it much easier. 

Ulysses You - The King's School - Sydney, Australia]]> 2021-10-29 03:59:17 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853112467 Feedback from Leen - Emily's mum https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853549747 Hi team - You girls did an amazing job! All the information and work displayed really shows how you collaborated together. I enjoyed seeing all the research on the facts, but also the more artistic parts. I was also very impressed with the presentation - so confident and well presented. Lastly, I really enjoyed our excursion to the farm together. It was so interesting and it was great to see how the 3 of you took this action together. I am super proud of this team and you should be proud too! Excellent job! ]]> 2021-10-29 09:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/tama7504/9o00u8o8kkghqrmp/wish/1853549747