https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g Some positive comments for CONTENT based on the rubric. en-us 2017-10-30 12:38:15 UTC 2025-12-31 02:30:20 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694207 It was humorous and engaged me the entire time you read. You read very confidently and clearly and the story was relatable.]]> 2017-10-30 13:05:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694207 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694213 2017-10-30 13:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694213 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694224 The content of her story was very eye catching by the way she utilized the actual mascots of the restaurant and the plot was very relatable to situations we see today :)]]> 2017-10-30 13:05:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694224 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694285 The story was very solid and goofy while including mascots and using them as well. It had a solid story that was easy to follow and had a good sequence of events.]]> 2017-10-30 13:05:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694285 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694308 The story flowed perfectly and included some funny parts that further shape the story. Her voice was loud and clear so I understood what she said. The story is well thought out and thorough.]]> 2017-10-30 13:05:32 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694308 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694365 Was very confident while reading her story and answering questions. You can tell she did her research on mascots from the fast food industry. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694365 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694383 Her story is interesting, I like the idea that prompted her to make the story. The structure of the story is thought through and she uses literary devices, which I enjoy]]> 2017-10-30 13:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694383 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694512 Her story is entertaining and it is very thought out. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:06:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694512 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694790 Your story was very interesting. Great transitions in between your paragraphs and you had a great story line. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201694790 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695076 The story was well thought out and organized. Very creative, Brooke has a good imagination. Was in depth in what the message she was trying to get out. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695076 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695123 Your story was very unique and interesting on how came up with it. Everything was clear and polished very well.]]> 2017-10-30 13:07:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695123 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695398 Brooke you did a great job of getting the point across about resturant and how we want to focus on the thigns we choose to focus on and she did it using mascots ]]> 2017-10-30 13:08:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695398 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695428 The story has good diction, humorous parts, and it has a nice flow]]> 2017-10-30 13:08:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695428 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695666 Your content is very unique and intertaining! It’s very relatable and easy to imagine yourself in Doodles shoes. Your writing was very well thought out and analyzed!]]> 2017-10-30 13:08:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201695666 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697297 Story was very unique but had a cool twist. You grabbed many common issues seen around the world and put them in a fun but true story involving mascots. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697297 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697419 This story is very well organized, and is very entertaining. Brooke is very good at creative writing, and the story is quite humorous. The manner in which you spoke was very easy to understand as well.]]> 2017-10-30 13:12:21 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697419 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697459 This story was very entertaining, and had a very well thought out concept. You could tell that you read the book in order to write this story. Good job!!!!!!]]> 2017-10-30 13:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697459 RoshinSam https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697542 I really liked how well the story could be interpreted as the fast food industry. The story was really relatable and entertaining. Awesome job ]]> 2017-10-30 13:12:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697542 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697950 Your story was very unique and interesting, I very much injoyed it listening to it and all absorbed content, it would be cool if next time visuals were added to go along with the story.]]> 2017-10-30 13:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201697950 https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201700632 Your story was very interesting. It's very well organized and planned out. ]]> 2017-10-30 13:19:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/9ntq7w8h325g/wish/201700632