Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Tristen Drake https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1 This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC 2025-11-06 05:30:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padletuploads.blob.core.windows.net/prod/247387363/25bb6b39873fe8d7977c2f676dd5bfea/7226ac37b04be1ab77e6bc9c87953f3a.gif What are Human Rights? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283327 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283327 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283328 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283328 30 Basic Human Rights 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283330 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283330 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283332 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283332 Rough Draft 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283335 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283335 Final Draft 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283336 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283336 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283337 My story will be in 3rd person so the narrator is telling the story. I want the reader to see everything that is happening and will happen.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283337 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283339 my story takes place in a future place in 1999 after time. setting in a rural area where they strugle to put food on the table for their kids because the mayor doesnt have good jobs and has over price food. this make it unjust because they 
barely have enough food for theirkid because of there mayor. ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283339 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283340 the main characters are Jeff the dad who does the work to get food. maria who is the stay at home for the kids. Timmy and  Tommy twins who like legos and are OK with this life style. the protagonist is jeff and maria. the antagonist is the people supllying the food and the mayor somtimes.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283340 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283342 our unjust part in our story is when they find out the kids got an infection from the dad and the people who give them the food where told by the mayor to do this]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283342 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283343 our characters solve this by going to have a meeting with the mayor about how this is so unfair and the mayor agrees because he said to keep you under control.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283343 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283344 my characters jeff and maria when they found out that the mayor was haveing people poison the food to get us sick to keep us paying to him for medicare which suprisingly still exsist. they change when there kids die of food poisoning that the kids where given]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283344 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283345 the most exiting part is when all the towns people get together to go to the bad people and stop them.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283345 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283346 no mater how harsh or bad of a situation you should always try hard]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283346 Due Dates 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283347 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283347 Prompt 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283349 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283349 Theo's Song 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283350 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283350 Rubric 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283351 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283351 Point of View 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283353 The point of view in "Theo's Song" is 3rd person because the narrator is not involved in the story and there is no "I" or "me". ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283353 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283354 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283354 Characters 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283355 jeff maria timmy tommy and the food producers and the mayor]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283355 Conflict 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283356 the conflict is how people are poisoning there food to gain money off of medicare]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283356 Plot: Sequential 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283357 Event #1 the kids are outside playing with there virtual reality cod gun game. 
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Event #8(Resolution): ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283357 Theme 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283358 you should follow you dream]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283358 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283359 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/216283359 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200616942 https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/217055607 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 18:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/200616942/9nni3jt15eq1/wish/217055607