What did you learn about the writing process from your child? What did you enjoy about the slideshow? by Colette Bartels https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l Showcase 2018 en-us 2018-02-27 22:14:50 UTC 2023-01-24 04:12:45 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236204311 he researched on pepplego, I liked the drawing of lebron james.
 ]]> 2018-02-27 23:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236204311 Very Impressive! https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236205162 I like the story of Jane Goodall!]]> 2018-02-27 23:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236205162 I learned from my son! https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236206505 All about Alexander Hamilton. Great work class! I learned that a writer needs to research and plan their story before they begin writing. -Andy and Liberty]]> 2018-02-27 23:53:32 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236206505 So much hard work! https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236206958 I liked how Maheeka worked so hard on creating this slide show and telling a story about Helen Keller. We learned a lot from this story! The story board looked so easy and I hope Mahi will continue to write such biographies about more people! ]]> 2018-02-27 23:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236206958 very good research! https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236207866 I learned that you have to do research on your topic before you write. ]]> 2018-02-28 00:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236207866 awesome procedure to learn writing! https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236208328 I'm so impressed that Eddie's presentation which was based on research from some references like books and internets. It was really good to convey his research in Cristiano Ronaldo who is Eddie's favorite soccer player. 

Eddie's mom and dad ]]> 2018-02-28 00:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236208328 Jackie Kennedy https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236208621 I learned from Atticus's slideshow that Jackie loved riding horses and made the White House beautiful. I learned that the writing process  takes a lot of time and effort and practice. - Cait Carroll ]]> 2018-02-28 00:04:12 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236208621 Very informative https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236208960 I learned a lot about one of the most important women in American History.]]> 2018-02-28 00:05:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236208960 Jackie Robinson https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236209400 I learned from Simon that the writing process takes planning and organization. I liked how the slideshow covered all aspects of Jackie Robinson's life including his childhood, his college years and his journey to finally get to the major leagues. ]]> 2018-02-28 00:07:51 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236209400 Parent's Comment: https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236209727 I learned as part of the writing process, Seraphine used pebblego.com to learn more about her biographical subject, Rosa Parks.  I learned that Rosa Parks' grandparents were born into slavery and I learned that in the 20th century, not all citizens were allowed to go to high school.  I never knew that black people couldn't go to high school after emancipation.

Gloria (Seraphine's mom)]]> 2018-02-28 00:09:46 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236209727 very great job https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236210009 this kind of biography of learning is very fun and deep. child will have a deep impression from this job.
Mia's mom]]> 2018-02-28 00:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236210009 https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236213087 2018-02-28 00:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236213087 J.K. doesn't mean "just kidding" https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236213403 It is also the initials of J.K. Rowling, author of the Harry Potter series! We have read most of the first Harry Potter book with Ellie, but we didn't know very much about her background. Great job writing and we loved the visuals and transitions. - Lindsay & Ty Cashen]]> 2018-02-28 00:29:41 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236213403 it is very interesting and it has a lot about Steve Jobs I learned history from steve jobs I think this is a interesting story. His report is very interesting. It takes a lot of time a effort to do the report . Dylan said ,''he used youtube .'' I think Dylan sould work on bigger sentences. By Aidan fomar student of Mrs. Bartels and Dylan. https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236215021 2018-02-28 00:39:41 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236215021 Harriet Tubman https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236218258 I learned that despite such hardship, Harriet was able to bless the lives of so many people. What a great example she was!]]> 2018-02-28 00:59:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236218258 Michelle Kwan https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236219884 Hazel researched her subject matter in detail .   Her source of facts were found on Pebble Go.  

An interesting fact about Michelle Kwan: Bronze Medal at the Salt Lake City Olympics.

Fantastic Job! Dietmar.]]> 2018-02-28 01:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cbartels1/9nfkzssmft3l/wish/236219884