Padlet Peer Critiques (Glow and Grow) by Bhavini Mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o by: Bhavini Mistry en-us 2018-04-26 21:48:43 UTC 2021-07-10 03:53:54 UTC hello@padlet.com bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/255844523 Glow: What has the individual done well? Explain the specifics.

Grow: What does the individual need to work on in the future?

]]> 2018-04-26 21:49:59 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/255844523 afofah9 https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/256730612 Glow: I like how you incorporated the example of Shanna Tellerman because it strengthens your presentation with someone who was a good role model.]]> 2018-05-01 00:16:44 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/256730612 afofah9 https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/256730723 Grow: I like where you went with the direction of the survey but maybe adding some statistics to back it up or graphs would have taken this presentation to the next level.]]> 2018-05-01 00:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/256730723 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257348666 Jenn Novak

Glow: I like how you incorporated your major and minor in this project. It goes to show your passion in the field. You also showed enthusiam in your creative side when being in school. Your voice shows interest in those fields and it shows me you have a great passion in what you do.

Grow: The only thing I suggest is in the part of your questions. I know you mentioned the numbers but a visual of those answers would have been great for the presentation. ]]> 2018-05-02 16:51:56 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257348666 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257353147 Michael Martin

Glow: I enjoyed how you added many visuals to each of your topics. It helps us visual what you are talking about. For instance showing pictures of all the projects you have done shows that you have been very creative and that creativity has shown to impact you positively. 

Grow: I think in some parts of your presentation you could have used some enthusiam such as when you were talking about your childhood and you being creative, or when you talk about making a card for your special someone on Valentines Day. ]]> 2018-05-02 17:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257353147 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257358873 Kelly Mullooly

Glow: I like how you broke down your educational opporunities to be creative by grades. It shows that you grew as a creative person as there were more things avaliable to you as you got older and more independent. I also agree that a quote speaks a thousand words and lets us think outside the box and be better learners. 

Grow: The only think I would say is to speak a little slower and clearly  just because in some parts of your presentation it was hard to understand what you were saying because you were going a little to quick. ]]> 2018-05-02 17:13:16 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257358873 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257364150 Krystal Casas

Glow: I like how you incorporate the different types of technology which has effected us on a daily. I also like how you talked about the book we've been focusing on this semester into your project. 

Grow: Some personal experiences or talking a little more about the topic would have been a good visual. I think it would have been interesting to get some answers from peers in your data to show how accurate the information can be. ]]> 2018-05-02 17:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257364150 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257369877 Ayodeji Fofah

Glow: I like how you explain your finance project. It shows you enjoyed it and learned a lot from that particular class. Also the way you incorporated charts shows your data to be accurate and shows the effort put in. 

Grow: For your educational creative section I think you could have talked more about your years prior to college and how that journey changed you. ]]> 2018-05-02 17:34:58 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257369877 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257371606 Michael Cicero

Glow: I like how you talked about the book and how you learned somethings from the readings we have done in this class. 

Grow: I think your presentaion could have been a little longer. It was hard to understand what you were talking about as you were going to quick, it was hard to keep up with the presentation.]]> 2018-05-02 17:38:11 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257371606 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257373816 Katherine Conroy

Glow: It was nice to incorporate your field and how that makes you an innovative learner. You have a very creative side, it shows in your presentation as you have many visual fields and it addresses exactly what you are talking about. 

Grow: I enjoye the pictures you used for each topic, but it would have also been nice to read some of the information you were talking about. ]]> 2018-05-02 17:42:56 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257373816 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257375794 Edward Juan

Glow: I like how you added a little bit of your personal life and talked about how sports made you a creative person. 

Grow: It was a little hard to hear you, speaking clearly is very important when giving  a presentation. It would have been nice to read some of the information which you were talking about. ]]> 2018-05-02 17:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257375794 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257379967 Gabrielle DePalma

Glow: I like how you talked about some personal experience as it shows emotion in your topic. Also the quote from the book shows how well you were able to understand the material you learned in class and added personal experience to explain the topic. You also showed great contact and enthuasim to engage your peers. 

Grow: Your survey responses were nice, but it would have been good to see more of the questions you asked your peers. ]]> 2018-05-02 17:54:35 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257379967 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257380753 John Philbin

Could not see presentation ]]> 2018-05-02 17:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257380753 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257383340 Bruce Knops

Glow: I like how you compared innovation to creativity and explained it a little more then what you just wrote. Also how you explained your topics shows you understood the material. 

Grow: It would have been nice to see the questions you addressed to peers and friends on how they thought technology has changed the way they learn. ]]> 2018-05-02 18:01:18 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257383340 bhavini_mistry https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257386220 Gabriella Mottola

Glow: The way you addressed the book is important as is your personal experiences you talk about.  I enjoyed the end of your presentation where you talk about students and their ability to learn outside the box. 

Grow: You spoke very clearly but it would have been nice to read some of the material you were addressing in your presentation. ]]> 2018-05-02 18:06:47 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257386220 kayley_mullooly https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257452136 Glow: The way you addressed the book was really good. ]]> 2018-05-02 21:12:06 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257452136 kayley_mullooly https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257452216 grow: I wish you included the questions that you asked individuals ]]> 2018-05-02 21:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/257452216 balabenj https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/258238519 Ben Bala]]> 2018-05-05 18:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/258238519 balabenj https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/258238606 Glow: I really liked how you presented your video and spoke clearly. Referencing the book and adding your personal experiences really added effect to the presentation.   Grow: Even if it is very quick, I would just review the survey you conducted with students.]]> 2018-05-05 18:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/bhavini_mistry/9ndcz7fvwq3o/wish/258238606